Gunahon Ka Devta

FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: rainurubal

nice update papa...

thanks for the pm...

Aww.. Love Ya Baby..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: soni4eva

fanx 4 da pm n da update

da update was lovly cnt w8 4 da dinner plzz cont soon x

thanks A lot dear... Glad u liked it.. Dont worry, I'll update ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Nidhsara

Naughty funny update that I enjoyed very much...

The hiding and teasing of Avita was awesome...
Loved it yaar...update soon

hey Nidhs.. Glad u liked it.. Hmm.. Thoda intezaar karbo dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
this update is dedicated to dear Rupam.. 🤗

Happy birthday dear..

love ya..

Chapter 17

Ultimatum

Arpita was shocked out of her wits. One moment he would be fun loving & kind but the next moment he would be all agressive & demanding.

'What has gotten into him?' she thought to herself. But still, She couldnt let him have his way all the time. She had to think of a way to get out of this.

Arpi- "Avdhesh, You must leave", she tried to free herself from his grasp but he just jerked her back into his embrace but this time more closer to him. His eyes focussed completely on her face. He slowly pushed the strands of her hair behind her ear thus intentionally touching her neck. Arpi avoided his gaze as she was shy. Avi enjoyed the feeling of her being so close to him. He sensually ran his fingers on her neck eventually replacing them with his lips.. thus sending chills down her spine. With great difficulty Arpi managed to push him aside & ran towards the Window.

Arpi-  "Av-Avi, I think you should.."

Avi- "Leave?"

Arpi turned to him- "Hmm.."

Avi placed a soft kiss on her temples- "Good Night".
 
Before going he looked at her- "Make sure you're on time. You wouldnt want me to get mad at You.."

 Arpi frowned- "Get Lost" & she slammed the window.



Next day, as usual Arpi was ready to leave for college.

Jagat- "Arpi, get ready. I'll drop you on the way"

 Arpi agreed unaware that Avdhesh was anxiously waiting for his Princess. He waited in his SUV on the opposite side of the road whereas Arpita & Jagat were in another car.
As soon as Avdhesh saw Arpita, he was overjoyeed. But his happiness was short lived as Jagat also accompanied her.

He immediately thought of ways to keep that guy away from  her. He quickly telephoned Chulbul &  instructed him.

Chulbul- "Yes Sir.. I'll do it."

A vicious smile crept his lips.
"Princess.. Im coming."



Jagat received a call from office & was tensed.
"Arpi, Im sorry.. I gotta reach office as early as  possible."

Arpi- "Emm.. No problem Bhaiyya.. I'll manage it."

She got off and started walking on the road. That moment, an SUV stopped right in front of her.

"Avdhesh.. 😃"

Avi- Get in Princess."

Arpi quickly stepped in - "Well.. Im surprised.. You should be in office right now.."

Avi- "I thought that someone would be in desperate need of my help... So I just.. Anyway.. we've reached."

Arpi was confused-"Thanks a lot.. "

As she was getting off, he held her hand- "I'll be there by 8."

dont forget to hit like..

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pls comment


Edited by KriYa_life - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Someone is certainly very possessive of his princess😆...
Poor Jagat...inn dono love birds ke beech uski band baj gayi😆...
Avdesh Singh Takur certainly knows to get his way and also to make us poor girls blush☺️...
Another nice installment... Kudos Ramona
Eagerly waiting for 8o'clock😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
super update😆...poor jagat😆dont know how will arpi handle this possesive avi.hope u dont mind but can u update ur other ff also plss😳
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it papa🤗
Avidesh is really naughty☺️
nice update
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi CP ,
Wow wat a 'ultimatum ' yaar Avi aise hi intence n possesive behave karta raha to Arpi to confusiya ke paglay jaai hehe,
Btw m liking his anger bz in anger he turns more romantic 😳
N ur writing really makes it more intence 😆
Bechara Jagat Nidha said it right 'band baj gai' hehe
But i hav same complaint again it was short ,i want next one long ok,
Me waiting for 8 o'clock, should i check it tonight at 8 o'clock,
Lov ya for this UD CP (as frien ok) 😆 Edited by joliefille - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wah.. sab ko 8 o'clock ka intezaar hai..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cherry 🤗

i know my precious comments are very much important for you so here it is 🤣

Dunno what to say about Avi...😕 he is sooo much possessive about her 🤪 🤪


Poor Jagat  🤣



love you 🤗
Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago