NEW FF: Persuasion of Khurana *Final Part* Pg. 15 - Page 14

pls pretty pls continue???? u write so well. geet was such an annoying self centred brat and it would be really in teesting to see how motherhood and maan change her!

OMG!!!!

That was pretty awesome! I think u shd continue the story!!!

well completely forgot that I had planned to seduce Khurana with my moves… lolz i'm sure any one would forget wht to do with MSK in front of them

have to admit never heard "You shrieking… Sheesh Kabab!""
but loved it all the same ;p

Originally posted by: ixray

no no no nononononono no you cannot do this to us !!!! 😲😲😭

please please please conntinue........please pretty please .🤗

you are a terrific writer please continue, you have to continue........i want to know what was Geet's reaction the morning after. 

the bane of Maan's existence cannot just be left crying . Geet and i as a reader need a proper closer. Geet needs to come back with a bang ......on one hand i want her to be just scaring the H out of Maan for the first trimester at least but on the other i m wondering if she was really pregnant what would happen then ??

please please please continue !!!!

 

(from my personal life i can tell you one thing , however low or depressing the news or outlook in life was ; i have always had this moments where i just had to laugh, nothing could keep me down for long. and that's how Geet's character in ur ff seems to be)

You should continue!!!!!!

bookmarking Edited by richiiiii - 12 years ago

THIS WAS AWESOME