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~*The Bitter Truth*~ X-ms Special.part 13 pg 87 (Page 87)

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Manpreetmann

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priya@ mina is going to update ajeeb dastaan and u r the one!!!!!!!


yepeeeeeeeeeeee

ye kisne bola????????????Confused


maine bola janemannn.......u told me na darling....how can u forget....u made me wait for u 45 min and to compensate that u promised me.........


OYE tum dono saath mein baithe ho, phir bhi online lad rahe hoROFL


yeah....bt u see vo apna promise tod rahi hai CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry

to kuch karna padega na...so fighting here...rofl..ghar me aise nahi ladh sakte na..lol...

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 8:20am | IP Logged
keya is there in invisible mode i think
 
she will be back with her update once 30 minutes completed in her watch. but plz don't ask me still how much time left as i my self don't know how much time left and when it is going to completeWink

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waiting 4 update

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Next morning maan and Geet was disturbed by a call... It's Avantika... Maan was still in deep sleep...

Avantika- hello... I hard you are back?
Geet sits up instantly.... She covers her self with the spread.
Geet- yes mam...
Avantika- we have to go to the hospital today. Is there any chance you could join me?
Geet wasn't sure what to say... Should she? Or no...
Maan wakes up...
Geet indicates what shall she say?
Maan- say yes...
Geet- yes mam...
She hangs up...
Maan- I am coming with you.
Geet- per...
Maan- I know she is up to no good.
Geet- but what if she also plans to hurt you? I think you should stay.
Maan- I am not leaving you with her alone.
Maan cups her face...
Geet- I love you...
Maan- I love you 2....

Geet and maan gets ready informing John...
Avantika- maan... Beta... I think you should stay home.
Maan- why? Is there any problem? Far as I am concern you going for me.
Avantika- ha beta... But...
Geet- it's ok mam. I think maan also needs to about his treatment.
Avantika started to get restless...
Geet- I have made a call this morning... They have informed me there are no appointment under mr maan... So I made an appointment.
Avantika strews to become more restless...
Suddenly John walks in...
John- is everything alright avantika? Look who I have brought...

Soon as the man came in Avantikas eyes widen. She couldn't believe her eyes... Far as she was concern... He left the town.. Way back... Soon after the death of Sammera...

Avantika started to fumble...

John- he is one of my old friend... Oh have I told you about maan & geets marriage?
Avantika looks at them in shock... Geet looks down...
Maan- yes mom... We are getting married...
Avantika- but... She is n...
John- enough! Geet and maans marriage taking place soon...
Avantika didn't want that. If maan gets better that's mean Avinasha will be pushed out of the family again. She can't let thy happen. It took her long time to make place in this family... She won't give up her happiness this easily... It's always about maan... Maan! Maan! And maan... What about Avinasha she thought. Her daughter never gets the right place in the family. Just because maan is the oldest...

Avantika- I am against this marriage.
Maan- excuse me...
Geet now looked petrified...
Avantika- I am not accepting her as a member of khurana family. She is not from our society. She is a mere dr.
Maan- who have asked your permission?
Avantika- maan! John.. How could you accept this?
Geet was about to leave but maan holds her back...
John- I see no problem! Why ere you refusing?
Avantika- you can clearly see....
Maan- enough... I won't tolerate a single word against Geet.
Avantika- don't forget I am your mother.
Maan- you have lost the right when you murderd Sammera.

Avantika looks at her in shock... What was he talking about... How does he know...
Avanitila- maan!
Maan- don't you dare raise voice at me... We have all the evidence....

John came up and slapped her tight....



After 1 month....

Avantika was jailed for rest of her life for killing a innocent... Khurana family have rejected her.. Anvisha her self refused to see her own mother. She couldn't believe that her own mother looked at them as half brother and sister...

It's maan and geets wedding day... Maan is fully recovered.... Perfect...

Geet stood in front of the mirror in her wedding dress... She Atlast found her own family... Her family... She blushed looking at the mirror... Shy... Maan walks in... He was mesmerised by her beauty... She looked beautiful.... Geet instantly spines round... Putting a hand over his eyes... Maan smiles...
Geet- it's bad to see the bride before the wedding....
Maan- mujche au bhi mujoor hi...
Geet blushes...
Maan brings her in his embrace...
Geet- acca soono...
Maan- bolo...
Geet- au... Apko muje Kuch batana hi...
Maan- bolo...
Geet- I will tell you after wedding...
Maan- hm...
Geet- ap javo...
Maan smiles and disappears....

*******

After the wedding... On there SR....

Maan walks towards the bed that was covered with flowers...
Maan takes off her big gungat....
Geet blushed more then ever.... Maan brings her to his lap...
Maan- au surprise ka tha?
Geet- umm.... She makes a shape on the bed with her toe...
Maan- ka tha?
He bites her ear...
Geet- au... Actually....

Before Geet could say another word... She fainted in maans arm... Maan started to panic instantly...
After long time of maans shabbily and water on her face... Geet wakes up....
Maan was worried sick....

Geet- oh.... The surprise... Ap pappa bane bale hi.... I think that's why I fainted...
Maan looked at her with a shocking expression and then with a big smile he hugs her tight...
Geet- I wonder how many people get the shock of  that they becoming parents on there SR...
Maan laughs- umm... Just us....

Both starts to kiss passionately'.


THE END

hay you all' well the X-Mas special is over :D
i hope u lot liked this FF' THANX a Ton FOR all the lovely comments' I LOVED THEM ALL' A BIG BIG BIG HUGE thanks to SANA' its her concept' sox i didn't make it long.. but here hope u all loved it
:D
xxx

LOVE keyama and SANA


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 26 December 2010 at 8:44am

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mrinalini-

Originally posted by Manpreetmann

Originally posted by Rocks.Dhara

Originally posted by -Mrinalini-

Originally posted by Rocks.Dhara

priya@ mina is going to update ajeeb dastaan and u r the one!!!!!!!


yepeeeeeeeeeeee

ye kisne bola????????????Confused


maine bola janemannn.......u told me na darling....how can u forget....u made me wait for u 45 min and to compensate that u promised me.........


OYE tum dono saath mein baithe ho, phir bhi online lad rahe hoROFL

haan re... aadat se majboor hain!!!!LOL


Good....keep on fighting....mai chali likhne,.. otherwise 11 baje mujhe bhi sab kem ki aise hi MANPREET MANPREET karke chilaenge mere FF mein

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Posted: 26 December 2010 at 8:21am | IP Logged
ohhh wow....Smile
that was really nice....MANEET happily married & on their SR maan got the biggest surprise...hahahaLOL
n bitchy avantika is in jail....yiieeepiiiieeeeParty

PERFECT ENDINGClap

LOVED UR STORYTongue

thankyou SANA & KEM for giving us such a wonderful story.... n plz keep on giving us more of maneetWink
Big hugHug




Edited by Manpreetmann - 26 December 2010 at 8:33am

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we r going to miss its update.......THANKS TO U AND SANA.......awesome concept..fabulous portray
keep it up babes Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up

love ya ton and a BIG BIG BIG hus for giving such a wonderful FF to read...



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