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~*The Bitter Truth*~ X-ms Special.part 13 pg 87 (Page 58)

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 8:20am | IP Logged

*~The Bitter Truth*~

X-Mas Special

part 9

She wanted to see maan badly... 

It's been a week...

Maan was counting days... He was restless. Geet was suppose to be back today. His week went restless. He was fine... He have improved allot... But Geet being not there was making him reatlsess. He wanted Geet madly.... Every passing second was unbelievably slow. He couldn't think straight. He wanted his Geet... His love Geet. Maan stopped at the last word. Does he love geet? Of course he loves Geet. Without her his world is lifeless.

Maan calls Geet....
Geet- hello?
Maan- where are you?
Geet was surprised. His voice changed again. He was talking normal. Better then normal. Only a week and this much improvement! And month he will improve more.
Geet- I... I extended my holiday to a month!
Maan- what? You know I can't stay a second without you. And you extended your holiday to a month.
Geet was taken back. He sounded so serious. His abnormal talk disappeared.
Geet- I will be back in a month. I am in hurry now. Listen all the medication are there ready... Just take them on time.
Maan- I won't! Not until you are here with me.
Geet- listen maan! I can't! I have other patient as well.
Maan- other patient? What do you mean?
Geet- you have to get better for me. And don't call me until you are alright.

Geet cuts the call.
Maan was taken back with the other patin. Was those patin close to her like me. I was special to her. She always said I was special....
Now maan had to get better. Better for his Geet. His love.

Geet starts to cry. She loved him so much. She was dying to see him.... But she have to stay way before it gets out of control.

It's been month only maan and Geet knows how they have lived this each second with out one another.

Maan didn't call her at all. Like she said don't call me until you are fully better. And he was...
He Walks to the kitchen. Eats his breakfast.

John was surprisingly happy.... His son looks fully normal. Just maybe one more month to make sure.

John- we need to go for your ck up today beta.

Maan looks up. Avantika wasn't happy at all. But she couldn't do much. Maan was monitored observed 24 hours by John... At the same time Avinasha.
Avnisha ran in and hugs his big bro.
Maan kiss her forehead... "my doll..."

Maan- I thought dr usually come here?
John- that's only geet. But she is on holiday from here. We hopefully see her today in hospital.
Maan nodes. He couldn't wait until see his Geet again. She did say only a week... that turned in to a month and now more then a month. Maan started to become restless. Long as he was fine.... He takes a deep breath.

Everyone walks out in tight security.

In hospital maans eye were only looking for Geet.
Dr krity attends them.
Dr k- owo maan. Must say all this credit goes to Geet.
Maan- where is geet?
Dr k- she is on her holiday.
Maan became more restless. No Geet....
As everyone went out...
Maan- dr k am I fully better?
Dr k- yes you are but still to double make sure we need to carry out some test.
Maan- when Geet will be back?
Dr k- umm... In a week. She just preparing for her transfer.
Maan- transfer? Why?
Dr k- it's easy for her to access her best friend... Her family. It's not her family. It's pinkie.
Maan started to become restless. She was running way from him. She broke her promise. She was leaving him. Leaving him forever. Maan couldn't risk that. He loves her.

Maan- can I have her address just to say a special thank you.
Dr k- sure...

All his ck up was done. Maan takes the address.. he still wasn't allowed to ftravel by him self.

20 odd body guards went out with him..

Maan tells them to wait out of the house in the car. He didn't want her to feel uncomfortable.

Door was open... Maan surprised... That night he went in... What if someone els... He walks in and locks the door.
It was two bedroom bunglo... Really nicely decorated. Maan smiles...

Geet was rushing from one room to another... Not realizing maans presence...
Maan- you didn't lock the door...
Geet jumps. Dropping the bag she was holding.
Geet- maan! She couldn't express her feeling. She was so happy to see him after months. "you a... How are you?
Maan didn't say a word and hugs her tight. He missed her soo much. He couldn't express his feeling. There was no word good enough to express his feeling.
Geet stood there frozen. She was dying to react back... But she couldn't. It's not right.
Geet pushes him way. Forcing a smile on his face.
Geet- how are you feeling?
Maan- like you don't know!

;D hope u lot liking it



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Awesome awesome update... Big smile
Loved the update, Maan is fully recoverd now yaaay, and he knows he loves Geet Embarrassed...
He got better quickly just for Geet, so that he can meet her awww....
I'm so happy that he got her address and has gone to meet her Smile
They both love each soooo much can't wait till they confess, can't wait to read the next update Embarrassed!!

Edited by humz_786 - 24 December 2010 at 8:28am

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 8:25am | IP Logged
oh my god !! awsome yaar...loved it .. maan s getting better ..pls pls do post the next update soon !!! 

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Plz Jst do a favour n tel how many parts u'll update today plz plz plz.

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 8:35am | IP Logged
yippie....I am soooo happy...Maan is getting better...n loved geet like Mad...

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that wea awesome...loved all the updates

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Posted: 24 December 2010 at 8:40am | IP Logged
superb update....totally loving it...yepeee maan is back to normal...we r waiting for next update...

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woww maan getting better n better

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