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~*The Bitter Truth*~ X-ms Special.part 13 pg 87 (Page 45)

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hey its vry m sad bcs of maan's condition...hope he becomes fine soon...n i really wnt geet to fall for maan n maan too...plz i wnt maan n geet happy together...plz updt soon yar...

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hey wen u gonna update dis one plz do it soon a really long one todaySmile waiting since last night

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*~The Bitter Truth*~

X-Mas Special

part 6

Maan stood there. Not moving or letting her move.
Geet- maan... She decides to break the silent. Maan... Move.
Maan just looked at her innocent behaviour. He couldn't control at all... He disnt want to move way... He just couldn't...
Geet- maan... Please....
Maan snaps out of his little dream and moves way...
Geet- don't worry... I won't go she smiles. Maan nodes....
Geet- let's go for a walk...
Maan nodes again...
Geet- why don't you talk to me? Am I really that bad?
Maan nodes then nodes negatively...
Geet bursts out in laugh....
Geet- you are so funny....
Maan just looks at her... How he is funny he wonders...
Geet holds his hand and takes him outside....

Few months haw passed... Maan was improving really well.... Extremely well....
He was capable of understanding everything.... His sense started cone back to normal... But still in some sense he was week...

It's Friday... Whole khurana family was out.... Leaving maan and geet alone....

Geet loved the rain... Maan went to bed early. She was free early today. She couldn't leave her chance to enjoy the rain. There was so many childhood memory with this. She smiles... Feeling the water drop on her face. + no one was home. She still couldn't believe all the servant left early because avantika mam wasn't there. Kanchor! She thought. But who cared....
She spines round in the rain. Jumping. Laughing. Remembering her childhood with many friends... She giggles remembering some though.... She laughs louder and louder... She still couldn't believe her fate. She have a amazing job... Amazing life. Everything is so perfect.... Now she really wished her mum was here to see her how happy she was.

Maan wakes up suddenly herring Geet giggles in the l I'd rain. He looks out if the balcony door... He decided not to turn on the light.... He slowly walks towards the door.
He was shocked mesmerized by the beauty of geet. Those water... She looked stunning. Beautiful. Maan couldn't believe his eyes... Something weird feeling started to wale in him... Something was going through his body. Below started to get wet... He remembers the earlier touch... But it wasn't this strong as this....

After long time Geet decides to walk in. She didn't want to catch cold. She probably have to do all the work for this week... As all the servant left. Stupid Geet thought.

Maan peeps to see more of Geet. He couldn't see her anymore. Maan started to get frustrated. He wanted geet. He wanted geet in front of him... In his surprise he tries to open the door. And it was open.

All the servant left early... They completely forgot to lock the door. Maan walks out.
Geet forgot to lock her door... She was sure no one in the house And servant probably have locked Maans door before they have left.
She takes her wet cloths off. She was bare. Geet puts a towel round her body. Maan stood there watching Geet undressing... One by one she took everything off. Geet didn't realize maan was peeping through the door....
As she puts a towel round her maan walks in.
Geet jumps... Putting the towl round her more close.
Geet- maan! She shouts. Get out. Get out Maan.
Maan didn't listen. He walks in and locks the door. Geet was shocked with his attitude. He never have been like this.
Geet started to shiver. She holds the towel tighter round her.
Geet- maan get out. What are you doing? Get out maan. Get out.
Maan walks towards her while Geet moves back. Her fear suddenly rises as she hits the wall behind.
Geet tries to move but maan blocks her way. He didn't react. Geet was telling him non stop... Get out! Get out... But nun of her word seems to enter his ear. Geet was petrified. What exactly he wanted.
Then with out any warning maan pulls the towel and pushes her to the bed.
Geets eyes widens. She froze there. She was bare. On bed. A man... Her patine was staring at her. Geet wasn't sure what to do. She hurriedly tries to grave the spread round her but maan falls on top of her. Pines her hand to the bed.
Geet- maan! Hoseh me aoe... Please leave me! She started to scream.
Geet- please leave me.... She started to scream louder. Please.....
Maan looks at her lips... It was so delicate... He wanted to touch them with his lips.... Her pleading didn't matter to him. All he cared about the lips. He watched her everyday... He always wonders when she will touch him... His heart started to feel something for her... Something un usal.... Maan starts to nible on her lips...geet tries to scream... But nothing will help tonight. No one was home.... After long time of nibbling he starts kissing her passionately but at the same time aggressively.... He bites her lips... His hand explores her body in details... Geet tries to push him way but he was too strong. His hand travels to her private part... Geet screams louder. Then suddenly in one jerk Geet manages to push him off but he was to quick to grab her back. He nails her back in the bed. His lips travels down to her cleavage. Then to her Brest. Geet screams louder. He bite her everywhere flowed by kiss...
After long time he slows down as he takes his cloths off.
Geet- please let me go. She pleaded again. Tees rolling down her eyes.... Maan takes his boxer off and sits in between geets leg... Geet was straggling. Fighting... But it was too late... Maan touches her soul. She screams... She shouts and cries and in matter of few minutes all of them turned in to moan... He moves up and down in. Rhythm... Roughly... Increasing pressure with every passing second... It was painful for Geet... It's her first time.... Maan didn't stop for long time.... He was enjoying this new pleasure in his body. He didn't want to stop... He wanted to carry on further... Maan still hold geets hand against the bed. He was too aggressive. He was leaving a red Mark round her hand.
Geet just wisp-eared stop... Stop... Between each moan...
After long time maan clasped on her. Geet laid there frozen. Not moving a inch. As he moved out after doing everything it sensed a torment pain through her body. There was blood stain on the spread....
Maan looks at her both panting. He gets off the bed leaving Geet on the middle of the bed.
Geet was still in shock! What just have happened! She looked at the celling... Maan puts his cloths back on and walks out.
In between geets leg was extremely sore. She felt like every bone in her body was broken by maan. She was a fragile glAss while maan being the rock....
She looks at the celling. Tears rolled down her eyes. What he just have done. She just been raped. Raped.

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Posted: 23 December 2010 at 11:05am | IP Logged

nice part............. poor geet............ Confused 

Edited by XXXYYYZZZ - 23 December 2010 at 11:10am

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