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~*The Bitter Truth*~ X-ms Special.part 13 pg 87 (Page 29)

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 10:04am | IP Logged
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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Wo!tht was really nice...poor sameera...i feel soo bad fr her n Maan's condition after her ofcourse!!

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nice one.. cant wait for the next one...

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 10:28am | IP Logged
tat wz really nice
n stupid avantika...maan loves her so much n shez doing all wrong wid him
poor maan...glad tat geet has moved in n will take good care of him
nice update!
update soon!

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part 4

Maan- they have killed her. They have murdered her.
Geet- I know. You have to accept this fact. She is in good hand now. Safe. Now you have to let go of her memory. She is no more...
Tears rolled down maans eyes...

Servent- he gets this panic attack now and then... But after few minutes he forgets everything again and it comes back again in couple of days.

Geet sat there confused. She have to do something for him to over come this. She looks at maan who was still holding her tight by her waist.... Geet was having problem to breath. She slowly helps her self out from his embrace. And makes him stand up with her. Geet calls two of the male nurse with her in to the washroom... And slowly makes there way.

Geet- maan... Maan.... Maan wasn't looking at her he was still petrified.... Geet cups his face...
Geet- maan... Look at me.....
Geet makes him sit on the chair. He looks at her eyes...
Geet- they will help you to wash up now. I will be outside waiting for you.
Maan holds her tight... "don't go!"
Geet- but I have to... She says innocently for him to understand.
Maan- no...
Geet- they need to give your hair cut to. It's too big I don't like it.
Maan nodes....
Geet- if you listen to me... Then I will give you a surprise!

Maan seems to calm down with her talk. He started to come back to his sense....

It took Geet hours to convince him. She didn't want to force.... She wanted clear everything out by talking.
Maan still wasn't convinced.
Bath top was already full off water.....

Geet- fine! I will only stay until you take your top of. Then I have to go!
Geet helps maan to take his top off.....
Geet- now I have to go....
Maan holds her hand tight....
Geet- you have promised!
Maan nodes and freed her hand.


before


after

(ok don't kill me for comparing those 2 photo) LOL


Maan came back after hours... With his new hair style. Geet was all waiting. He looked amazing. Geet mesmerized. Geet kept starring at him without blinking. No one could Guss that he is mental.
She was truly lost'

he looked so handsome' charming'.. unbelievably'.  someway sexy'. she couldn't belive haircut could have this much effct on her….

geet snaps out thinking'. he is my patient'.. don't think like that''


Ward boy dries his hair while Geet just stairs at him...
She slowly comes back o he sense...

Geet- I want you to Tide up everything. Then we can go for a walk.
Maan holds geets hand... Can you stay with me!
Geet smiles. Nodding.



Maan cleans everything up. Geet helps him. All the servant was shocked. Maan sing khurana and cleaning.

Maan kept looking at her now and then. Bit curious. She was different he thought. She didn't shout at him or tell him off...

As the time went by maan started to be come more friendly with Geet.... He started to become restless when she wasn't there... Angry... Worried. Something about her attracted him... There was something special....

Evening.... Maan was getting out of control. He didn't want to take any medication. Nothing. He was restless. Something was bothering him...

Next day...

Geet- how is maan this morning?
Maan was delighted to see her. His face lits up. There was an unexpected glow on his face.
Maan- you are not late.
Geet- are you crazy? I don't want to write sorry again and hurt my hand. She shows her hand and makes a baby face.
Maan smiles... A small smile. Unrecognizable.
Geet- so I have made a mental note. Never ever be late.
Maan- I like that.
Geet smiles- so tell me what you would like to do today?
Maan wasn't sure him self. All he wanted was geet with him. Nothing els....
Geet- you want me to decide again?
Maan doesn't say a word.
Geet- are you sure you want me to choose something boring again?
Maan still doesn't reply....
Geet- as you are not replying shall I presume you don't like my games.... She makes another baby face.
Maan- NO! He snaps.... Your ideas are never boring.... He whisper gently.
Geet smiles... She was trying her best to make him talk. But of course... It's Maan sing khurana. Stubborn..... He is not mentally stable but still haven't lost his attitude. Geet closes her eyes with that thought. That was mean she thought. Making fun of her own patient.

Maan on the other hand started to get restless. Did he really say something that just spoiled her fun. He didn't want her to be upset...
Maan- i like your idea.
Geet- I know you do. She snaps out of her thought. In one jerk she gets up and pulls maan with her outside in to the garden. Maan notice there was another door that leads to the garden.
Maan- who's door Is that?




hehe' hope u liked that'.



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yes. its really good. loved it

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awesome part.. loved it


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