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~*The Bitter Truth*~ X-ms Special.part 13 pg 87 (Page 28)

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 8:21am | IP Logged
wen u ll be posting the next update ???

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 8:41am | IP Logged
updates up soon
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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

updates up soon
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LOVED all the comments. i will reply :D 
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just started 
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you all wanted me to expand this… so i have decided to expand… :D lol… not to long tho…. i will update about 3 parts today… maybe more. i want to finish this near or after X mas…. k….


some of you also confused about the exact relationship…

here is a small synopses….

Avantika- maans step mother. maans mother have dies on childbirth… which again i will explain later…. after that Mr John maans dad remarried. maan have a half sister avinessa who loves his brother madly. 

sammera- she is dead. the girl who was brutally murdered. she was maans childhood friend. they were in deep love… and because of her death maan became mentally disable at the same time his step mother avineshaa made it wars by giving him wrong drags. poisoining him slowly.


i hope thats helpful….



*~The Bitter Truth*~

X-Mas Special

part 3


Geet smiles.
It took allot of sorry to cheer maan up again. Geet wrote sorry every place maan usually looks. He ignored Geet which wasn't a good sign. Specially at medication time.... And of course his treatment as well....

After 8 hours of non stop of trying.... Maan slowly mumbles...
Maan- it's ok...
Geet took a shy breath. Few... She thought.
Geet- now be a good boy and take this medication.
Maan agrees...

Geet smiles a good night and she levees him....
One of the servant comes by and locks the door. Geet didn't fancy that but it was for his own good.

Maans room had cameras. He have tried to commit suicide many time before. Giving him everyday stuff was dangerous. Geet kept everything to minimal. There was no mirror. He could break it easily. No nail cutter... Or scissors... Basically everything was dangerous but geet kept everything to minimal....

Maan gets his mental attack now and then...

Geet had to give him sleeping pill... He couldn't sleep at night. But she gave him weaker one.

Geet walks in to her room. At last she was free. It was such a tiring day. Her hand was in pain. God knows how many time she wrote sorry to him. To many time. She made another mental note. Never be late.

Geet calls pinky to tell her first day move in this new patient house.... She couldn't say it's khurana mansion for confidential reason.

Pinky- how was your day hunny?
Geet- it was very good. Tiring.
Pinky- I miss you so much.
Geet- me to... But it's important that I stay with him. It's for his own good. You know the most weird thing is... The drug today.... It looked different. I hope they were not giving him the wrong medication. Maybe that's why it was getting worse then better. His panic attack still high... But it's low since I first met him.
Pinky- I hope you don't have any serious effect on him.
Geet- why would you say that?
Pinky- i don't know. Just don't go too close. Keep your distance.
Geet- I am a doctor. I have to make them trust me.
Pinky- I fuss you are right in that way to.
Geet- thanks....
Pinky- I might come visit your patient...
Geet- NO!
Geet still haven't told her who exactly was the patient. She is a Doctor her confidentiality is more important....
Pinky- why?
Geet- it's important... I will explain it to you later.
Pinky- alright.
Geet- you have a good night. I will talk to you again 2moro.

It's only 8pm... Geet makes her way to the mansion. She wonders what really happen to Sammera that led to this situation. There must be something serious. Geet was unaware of her death or how brutally she was murdered.

Geet walks in to the mansion... Everyone was having dinner. Geet didn't realize...
Geet- I am sorry sir. I will call back later.
Avintika- its ok beta. Please do come in. Have dinner with us.
Everyone smiles at her.
Geet- I am ok mam. I just ate.
John- is he alright.
Geet- yes sir. He is perfectly fine. I wanted to know more about his past. This might help me further to treat him.
Everyone looks down...
Geet- look I know it's going to be very uncomfortable but tryst me... It can help. I need to know his full life story... I ...
John- it's ok beta. We don't mind...

Geet flows John after the dinner in maans old room... Avinassha also flows.
Avantika decided to stay with Dadi who was in tears. Avantika had no interest...

Geet walks in... There was picture of maan... Like she sees it in magazine. Happy.

John- Sammera is no more Geet.
Geet looks at him in shock... She thought maybe she left him or something like that. But here is completely a different story.
John- she was murdered. Brutally.
Geet- per why?
John- we don't know. Maan thinks e is responsible for all this. We know he is not. But his guilty conscious started to him inside and now he is in this state.
Geet confused- that can't be the only reason he went mad! There must be some other reason.
Avnisha- bros love was strong... He couldn't Handel the loose of Sammera....

Geet- I think this will be enough... Geet couldn't digest Sammera was ded. God... Poor soul. Wondering how maan would digest that. She have to make him understand she is no more.

Next day....

Geet wakes up with a noise... Maan was banging his door. Geet runs out. He was banging hard.

Geet opens the door straight. He falls on her... Hugging her tight.
Geet- everything is alright. You are safe.
Maan was shivering.
Geet looks round the room he broke mostly everything. Geet was shocked.
She mades him sit down on the bed....
Geet- maan... Maan...
Maan looks up.
Geet- what happen? Tell me?



next part will be up soon

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Great part!!!

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Great Part, what happened to Maan

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Wow!!
Awesome yaar
Please udpate soon
Loved it
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awesome update
loved it
glad geet found out what happened with sameera
wonder what happened to maan
loving this SS so much
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon

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