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~*The Bitter Truth*~ X-ms Special.part 13 pg 87 (Page 14)

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*~The Bitter Truth*~

X-Mas Special

part 1

Geet a 22 years old doctor. A specialist sociologist. She was still under training. She flowed Dr kritey to this special room that she was talking about. It's a patient. He have been mentally depressed for past 7 months.trying his best to end his life... Of course he have failed.
Geet- what's his name again mam?
Dr kritey- This is a special patient Geet. Very special. I know how much you are looking forward to see him.... he only comes once a while under restrict security for necessary check up.
Geet- do I know him?
Dr Kritey- yes you do.
Geet- hmm! I don't know anyone who is mentally unstable.
Geet laughs at her self. She is a sociologist. A specialist. Well just one more year then she will be fully qualified.

As they were about to walk towards the patient both were called by dr shusank.

Dr krti- yes dr shusank!
Dr shaduank- we have an emergency!
Dr krti- Dr Handa I will see you after this emergency.
Geet- yes mam.

Geet walks in to the locker room. She gets a call from her best friend pinky.
She was her only family.
When geet was 10... geets dad left her mum for another lady. Right after a year her mum became a mentally Ill flowed by death. Since then she have been brought up in orphanage. Her wish was to become a nurse. A specialist for sociological department but her grade was good enough to apply in medical school with full payment by the university. she was extremely lucky.

Geet- it's going gr8. Listen we will go out for a lunch together. Alright.
Pinky smiles- alright.

Geet walks pass the cafe. Her eyes falls on the magazine. It's Maan sing khurana. The Famous business tycoon. He Is geets dream man. She so wish she met someone like him. But of course he lives in USA. Impossible. She have to save her 2 years salary... Oh god! Impossible. Who wouldn't die for him. Mr John sing Khuranaas only son. She so wish she could get a glimpse of his family. Geet knows every details about him. Have one sister called avinassa. His doll. Well that's what this magazine tells you. He will do anything for her. Have step mother. But he respects her allot. He always treat her as his real mum. And of course the dad mr John sing Khurana and Dadi savetri sing khurana.
There family is like geets idol. She loves this family. One of a kind. She always wish she had a family like him. Not the rice part of course. Khurana family is one of the royal family in India. There tradition have been Famous for several years. Geet just adored there family. "I love this family."

Geet smiles at Maans photo.
She turns to the next page... It's 6 months old magazine. "oh gos! Geet! You have read this magazine 11 times."
Geet giggles at her self.

Geet- maan sing Khurana. Is engaged to Sammera singhania. (very good!) his childhood friend.

Geet looks at there photo. How sweet. That is so nice. They look amazing to gather. Geet smiles.

Geet still remembers when she first time she seen him. She was in her 1 year in medical school back then. His poem. He loves poetry. Geets favorite. His voice still buzz in her ears. But she was only 18 back then. "oh gosh! I met him 4 years ago!"

Suddenly her thought was distracted by Dr kritey.
Dr kritey- Dr Handa are you ready. We shall proceed.
Geet- yes dr kritey.
Dr k- geet mr John! Patients father would like to have a word with you first.
Geet- word with me? Why?
Dr krti- well... You will know.

Geet walks in to the room...

Mr John was tensed. He wasn't sure if she will be the best one to treat his son. He was mentally I'll. Hardly let's anyone come close. He have tried with 20 different dr and nurse with last two months. Everyone gave up. he is not even letting anyone go near him. And now most people refuges to even come near him.

Geet walks in.

Geet- hello sir.
Dr krti walks out... Geet very confused. Not sure what's going on here.
Mr John- Dr Geet...
Geet- yes sir...
Mr John looks out of the window. Geet didn't recognize him before but as he started to speak she realize he looked like mr John khurana... But she decided to ignore. Why would mr John khurana would want to talk to me! Anyway...
Geet- yes sir...
John- my son... 26 have been mentally Ill. He is not reacting at all. We have hired many Dr and nurses... Nun seems to work. I want you to work for me to help him. I will pay you 20x more salary then you would earn here.
Geet was shocked... It wasn't the money but the patient.... was he really that bad...
GEET- per sir... I don't know....
John- he is maan sing khurana.
Geet eyes widens... There was something missing here. Maan sing khurana and in mental asylum!!!! But he is in USA!!!! What's going on?
Geet- sir.... She couldn't talk anymore.
John- I have observed you for past few weeks. You are very good. I am sure you are the one who will be able to help him.
Geet- but I thought he is in USA!
John- thats for the media. I am sure you have hard about my family.
Geet- of course sir. Who haven't.
John- maan is my only son. I can't take this risk. Everything is under his and his sister name. She can't tolerate this behavior of his brother. I don't want to loose both of my child.
Geet- but if he have rejected so many dr what is the granite he won't reject me.
John- I want you to try at least.
Geet nodes...
John- I only bring him sometime just for a checkup. You have to come to the khurana mansion 2moro.
Geet nodes....
John- and also could you not mention anything about maan sing khurana outside. I am sure that will be fine with you.
Geet nodes...


Geet takes taxi to the hostel. She shares a room with pinky. She was extremely tirade.
Geet was in shock of her life... The maan sing khurana... The only maan sing khurana have lost... He is not mentally stable???? Geet looks at recent magazine... Which again indicates he is looking after the khurana industry in USA. GEET throughs the magazine. What a lie. Geet wonders what she will face 2moro.

Next day...

Geet walks in to the khurana mansion. Mr and mrs khurana and savetri devi was present along with avinassha... Maans doll! Sister!... Flowed by 20 odd Servants...

John- good morning Geet.
Geet- good morning sir.
Avantika smiles- I hope you will be the one who can help my child.
Geet- I will try.
Avinasha was in tears. She ran way.
Savtri- beta... You flow me. We kept maan in the outhouse. Way from the media.
Geet nodes.
John- I hope you understand are situation. We are a respectable family in society. It's Maans job to take over everything... But of course....
Geet- it's ok sir. Can we go and see my patient....
John smiles.
Geet flows the three in to the outhouse... Then an underground. Geet was shocked.
John- we had to keep him way. Media and parties always goes on in are house. We couldn't risk him to be expose.
Geet- but still sir...
John- I also advice you not to go in by your self. He is very aggressive and strong.
Geet- thankyou sir.
John- he hardly let's anyone in his room... We have ... You will see. Mr John couldn't explain... He falls in his knee and was in tears....

Geet looks at the door. She takes a deep breath. Not sure what this maan sing khurana going to look like. He won't be the exact one that I see in the magazine. Obviously no.
Geet was accompanied by 10 odd Servants. 2 of the Servants opens the door.
Geet pepps in. It was a huge room. Extremely big. Only a bed. No other furniture. There was paper scattered along the floor... Pictures of him and Sammera and poems....
Geet felt so sorry for him... He was in pain. Geet made some mental note to ask mr John about his past... But for now... Maan needs to see her.
Geet- wait for me outside.
Servent- per mam!
Geet- just go.

Everyone goes outside and looks through the mirror window.

Maan was sitting in one corner... Writhing something on the wall... A poem...
Geet smiles... She slowly walks towards him and sits down.
Geet- I like that poem she smiles.
Maan jumps instantly... He backs way.
Geet feels the writhing with a smile. 

Geet- must say. You are naturally talented.
Geet looks at him...
His eyes was bright red. Unbelievably red. He was scared. Petrified.
Geet- I am Geet she smiles.


next- The Maan Sing Khurana


hello you all… here is part 1… sox for lateness….

well hope you like this… pls pls pls do comment if you want me to update all the parts

xxxxx

loved all the comments babe...

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awww loved the update...so the great MSK is ill.......n geet is a doctor....who is gonna treat her....awesome concept.....
plz update next part soon..
ty hun. loved the comments. we have tothank sena' its her concept :D she is bril writer idk why she wont type it lol
but thankyou from both of us
xxx


Omg big relief.
I am so glad that was Sammera who was raped and killed. Lol
Sounds mean. But we only want maannet. Haha.
Love the first part.
OMG geet... I really wonder what will happen now. Will he hit her. I wonder how maan will react. OMG poor soul he became mentally I'll. Hate his stp mum. Grrr
That was amazing. Updat soon
Xx

ty babe. u r grt. 
loved the comment
xxxx


awesome update

plzz cont soon

i am loving this story

reva 


ty hun. yes'. i will con soon

hope u loved the 1st part

xxx


omg so tht girl was sameera...........geet is DR............cant wait for their love story to start n maan to get betterDay Dreaming............jaldi update karo yaar..........i dont think i can wait til Christmas day Cry

ty hun. aww… dw all the parts will be up before then lol

xxx



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ResOmg.. Omg... Can some one love someone so much that he forgets whole world for her.. Keyama .. Awesome work.. And concept is also challenging..[nice concept untamedtigress] plish plish dunn make it a short story.. Make it a long struggle to reclaim his love ... And ofcource..some romantic maaneet.. Rather agressive maan with our innocent geet.. Shayad me jyada hi demand kar rahi hu.. Haha.. Keyama its too too too too and infinite times too good.. :) :)

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awww loved the update...so the great MSK is ill.......n geet is a doctor....who is gonna treat her....awesome concept.....
plz update next part soon..

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Omg big relief.
I am so glad that was Sammera who was raped and killed. Lol
Sounds mean. But we only want maannet. Haha.
Love the first part.
OMG geet... I really wonder what will happen now. Will he hit her. I wonder how maan will react. OMG poor soul he became mentally I'll. Hate his stp mum. Grrr
That was amazing. Updat soon
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awesome update

plzz cont soon

i am loving this story

reva 

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omg so tht girl was sameera...........geet is DR............cant wait for their love story to start n maan to get betterDay Dreaming............jaldi update karo yaar..........i dont think i can wait til Christmas day Cry

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sorry double post


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