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~*The Bitter Truth*~ X-ms Special.part 13 pg 87

FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 4:58pm | IP Logged

*~The Bitter Truth*~

X-Mas Special

hay you amazing people' how r u??? well here is a OS'.or SS'. only 10-20 parts long. its aX-mas special' idea was given by untamedtigress' its her concept' i only wrote it LOL'. well hop you all love this' our bitter truth ...

Maan walks towards the dead body. He was shaking. Shivering. His feet gave up. He couldn't make it. He clasped few feet way from the body landing on his knee.
Maans dad mr John khurana ran across the room and holds him tight.
John- I am sorry beta. I am sorry.
Tears rolled down his eyes.
Maan- it's my fault. It's my fault. It's my fault. I told her to... She died because of me dad. She died because of me. He screamed. He cried. She died because of me.

A guilty conscious started to eat him inside.
Police was there. Of course maan sing khurana wasn't present at the prospective place where this murder have taken place. It was a hired hitman. She was brutally murdered. She was raped before they stabbed her to death. Her face was unrecognizable.

Police- she have been raped by 6 men.
Maan sat there num. He couldn't think. His brain gave up with every single word from the police.

Mihir- it's all your fault. Look at my daughter now. Look at her.
He took all his anger out on maan.
My daughter is dead. She was killed by monsters. by monsters.

Avantika stood there smirking. She knew this will have a big effect on maan and BINGO! It worked... 

she looks at maan... then her husband... maans pappa....

Avantika ran up to man... Hugging him tight...
Avantika- beta it wasn't your fault. Not at all. It was never your fault. It's fate.
Maan didn't react. He didn't blink. He just looked at the dead body that laid in front of him. His love. She is no more.
Avantika- mihir at least think about the situation. It also have big effect on him. Huge effect. It's his childhood love after all. You can't talk like this.... a fake tears rolled down her eyes....
Mihir- I break all my RISHTHA with this family today. All the RISHTHA....

Maan stood up and walks in to his room. He locked the door'. 


part 1

part 3

part 4

part 5

part 6

part 7

part 8

part 9

part 10

part 11

part 12

part 13 THE END page 87

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 26 December 2010 at 8:22am

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komlika IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:00pm | IP Logged
 new FF.......Party PartyParty
awesome as usualThumbs Up is dead???.............. i have so many questions......but i m sure as story progress they will be answered........... welcome back

Edited by komlika - 18 December 2010 at 5:02pm

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BadGirlKiss IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
OMG.... Who is dead???? Is it geet???? OMB ka yar!!!! OMG I am so worried. I am so glad you will update all in one day. 5 part. I am so looking Forward to this. You r a sweet hurt. A x- mad special. I love you. You are just fab.
I am really looking forward to this.
A x- mas Ff. Must say u just a brilliant. With amazing idea.
Pls pls pls update soon.
What day r u updating????????
Pls hope that girl that died not geet.

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:19pm | IP Logged
So much....Suspense..Mystery...Shocked......Do cont.....Embarrassed

Edited by Sofna - 18 December 2010 at 5:19pm

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
Sound intersting...... Aur waise when r u lending me ur brain....!!!lol.... Anyways who died...... Poor maan..... Looked so devastated.

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..shreyaa.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
Loved itttttt
Yayyy New SS hehe Happy
Is it Geet who died?
OMG...Soo much mystery hidden here
Cant wait to know them
Continue soon

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maaneetfan123 Senior Member

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
loved the update
plzz dont be geet who died

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-shamima- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Ooh now this is intersting and wonder who the girl is th concept is brilliant and straight in their it's so gripping so I'd be waiting eagerly for the next parts and ooh so there is a villainess in the story already and a big controversy being played hmm anyways great updated please do continue soon Smile

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