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Weekend Retreat 4 Nivren Psychosis Syndrome sn8pg7 (Page 3)

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
Arrey Yaar Suchi, hamara Nivi itni intelligent kabse hogayi. But it was just brilliant, I was laughing the whole time.
And you also made Rachu, Shova, Ashly day by bringing Nandu into the screen.LOL

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
wow suchi back with retreatHug

now i can remaining weekend better.

both scenes are awesome suchi, glad to see nivi matching viren's tricks

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Scene 3

Nivi ye viren kya waqay main saray buttons tut gaye? Asked vandana slyly

Chachi.. replied nivi blushing

Acha acha , teek hay'laughed Vandana

Ma, main kuch madad karun.. came the voice of divya.

Nivi turned to see divya who was looking at Vandana.  Her smile slipped from her face and sadness gripped it.

Divya was trying to avoid eye contact with nivi. She was still upset with her and now that vandana was giving special attention to her , Divya could not handle it. She felt alone and unwanted. Sid was always trying to avoid her, especially if she wanted to get close to him.

Di, called nivi.

She wanted to explain to her, but how could she? What would she say? The real reason would hurt her and now, that she is already feeling vulnerable; there was more of a chance of a backlash. 

Divya ignored Niveditha and went to vandana to ask for a chore to do. Vandana sensed something wrong between the two sisters. She knew that niveditha loved divya a lot and divya loved nivi too, but the tension had increased between them from past two days. This was irking her, as she really did not know the reason behind this attitude.

 

Divya thum fridge main se ginger le ker aao please aur upper padi hui mixer bhi. Mujhe paste banani hai said vandana trying to create a harmony in the air.

Niveditha,' Ni-Ve-di-tha came the voice of Viren!

Niveditha heart, which was feeling sad and heavy due to divya's behavior, leaped with excitement. Atleast now she will feel a bit consoled.

Vandana turned to look at viren

Abh kiya hua viren? She asked..

Viren noticed Divya in the kitchen and realized that there was something wrong. He could sense the sadness in niveditha's moments and in her eyes. Just this morning divya was confronting nivi about her marriage with him. If it weren't for his timely entrance , he knoew that nivi would have broken down. But he was also sure that she would have never told her the truth.

Her unconditional towards her sister was commendable. Her heart was pure and void of any ill feelings such as jealousy or greed. She did not even want that which had rightfully belonged to her and this is what touched viren's heart the most. How can a girl so pure and so beautiful heart not be loved? He reasoned. His heart already had put her on a pedestal, a pedestal that was made of immense love. He could not see her hurt, or sad. 

 

Bhabi, called viren

Divya looked at viren and did not return his call with much willingness.

Han viren she said with an air full of avoidance.

Bhabi mujhe aapsey kuch baat kerni hai he told her

Tayiji, kya main  divya bhabi ko thori dair ke liye bahar le ker jaa saktha hun?

 

Lekin viren main busy hun yahan, hum baad main baat ker lengay. Replied divya still not looking at him.

Vandana who had sensed the seriousness in his voice thought it would be better if divya left with viren. May be he would know or try and find out what exactly is annoying her.

Divya thum jao. Hum sambhal lengay yahan per replied vandana calmly but with a finality in her voice.

Divya who had no choice left , agreed to the proposal and left with viren.

Viren looked at nivi and gave her an assuring nod.

Niveditha turned around silently towards her work with a worried expression on her face



Edited by suchitra_1 - 18 December 2010 at 4:17pm

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Can't wait to see what Viren has to say to Divya. At least in your retreat we can see this stupid rift ending. Smile

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
So can't wait to see how Viren treats Divya's case.

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Scene 4

 

Divya followed viren

Bhabi chalo kahin bahar coffee penay chalthay hain. Asked viren

Teekhay replied divya sounding totally un interested.

They sat in the car and drove around for a while to reach the coffee-snack restaurant.

Viren indicated divya to follow him to a small table, which seated two people.

The mountain green was clearly visible as the restaurant was located on a small hilltop.

Viren ordered two cups of coffee and a plate of samosas.

Bhabi aapko samosay bohot achay lagthay hain na? he asked viren.

Divya nodded thumhay kayse pata? She asked

Nivi ne bataya tha replied viren.

Divya face contorted. She started avoiding viren's eyes.

Bhabi main jantha hun ki aap nivi sey gussa ho. I am sorry ki aaj maine aapko rukhi tukhi baat keh ker topic change ker diya tha.

Viren started talking , but he noticed that divya was still not looking at his face.

Acha bhabi aap ye batao ki , kya niveditha kisi bhi halat main aap ko nuksan pahuncha sakthi hai?

At this question divya looked up at viren she has a questioning look on her face.

When was it when nivi ever try to harm her? Her mind questioned?

Never came the reply . This time it was her heart answering.

Calmness spread through the face of divya and viren who was looking at her , quickly noiticed this.

Kabhi nahi na? he asked.

Tho , aapko kya lagtha hai ki nivi nay ye jo shadi ki hai mujhsey , kya ye achai ke liye ki hogi ya aapko nuksaan pahunchanay ke liye. Asked viren carefully,

Mujhe ? … asked divya..

 

I mean sirf aapko hi nahi, kisi ko bhi , ma, taiji, papa, dadaji , dadaji ya sidharth, .. kisi ko bhi nuksan pahunchanay ke liye ki hogi?

Divya continued looking at viren…

Would Niveditha ever plot? Or plan? Was she capable of harming anyone?

Nahi .. divya replied.

Nivi kabhi kisi ka bura nahi soch sakthi hai…she replied.

Viren continued , tho phir aapko kiya lagtha hai ki usnay shadhi kiyun ki hai?

 

Mujhe ye hi baat nahi samaj aa rahi hai viren , ki usnay shadhi kiyunki aur voh bhi ithni problems kay bavajud… kya vajah hai? She asked but this time she continued

Lekin jo bhi baat hai, voh zaroor kisi aur ke liye hi hoga… she  replied.

 

Viren nodded in agreement. Han aur aisa hi hai.

Bhabi aap niveditha ko mujhsey achi tarah janthi hai. Akhir behan hain aap uski. Aap janthi hai ki nivi kabhi kisi ko nuksan nahi pahuncha sakthi hai aur specially aapko.

Vaise hi ghar per use koi pasand nahi kertha hai. Koi support nahi ker raha hai. He went on..

Divya's eyes were starting to gleam with tears… as she continued listening to him.

Main chahtha hun ki aap usko support karayn , uski himmat banay. Jaise aap humesha hi thi.

Uski badi di.

Aur vajah jo bhi rahi ho, aapko uska abhi saat dena hai aur mera bhi..

He concluded.

 

Thumara saat? She asked wiping her tears and sounding a bit more relaxed. She did nto want to discuss her insecurities with viren and she knew that viren probably might have guessed that and , that is why he had brought her here in the first place.

Viren who had noticed the tears in her eyes turned to face his coffee , as if suddenly interested in its color, giving her enough time to wipe them off .

Voh na aap tho janthi hai ki main niveditha sey kithna pyar kertha hun. Aur maine uske liye surprise plan kiya hai.

And you know… niveditha bohot shy hai.. tho mujhe aapki madad chahiyye..

 

He went on.

Meri madad? Asked divya completely taken aback by this sudden request.

Was it not her who wanted them to get together? She knew that viren was the perfect guy for niveditha and always had wished for the best for them both.

 

Ofcourse viren main , zaroor help karungi. She replied excited.

 

A sudden flash of viren sleeping on the sofa came to her mind , but she brushed it off. There must be some valid reason, her mind argued,

 aur agar main viren ki madad karungi then def. nivi uskay kareeb jayegi. Shayad issye jo bhi problem hai voh solve hojaye. She reasoned to herself.

 

Tho you are in right! Viren asked holding out his hands towards her

Right on replied divya shaking his hand.

 

 

 

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:01pm | IP Logged
that was amazing!!!!
thank you for the treat....

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
Wow Suchi only you can do this. You made Divya think! Shocked Clap I loved the way you made Viren handle the whole situation without revealing real truth and without any drama. CT should take some inspiration from you. Smile


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