Weekend Retreat 4 Nivren Psychosis Syndrome sn8pg7 - Page 3

So can't wait to see how Viren treats Divya's case.

Scene 4

 

Divya followed viren

Bhabi chalo kahin bahar coffee penay chalthay hain. Asked viren

Teekhay replied divya sounding totally un interested.

They sat in the car and drove around for a while to reach the coffee-snack restaurant.

Viren indicated divya to follow him to a small table, which seated two people.

The mountain green was clearly visible as the restaurant was located on a small hilltop.

Viren ordered two cups of coffee and a plate of samosas.

Bhabi aapko samosay bohot achay lagthay hain na? he asked viren.

Divya nodded thumhay kayse pata? She asked

Nivi ne bataya tha replied viren.

Divya face contorted. She started avoiding viren's eyes.

Bhabi main jantha hun ki aap nivi sey gussa ho. I am sorry ki aaj maine aapko rukhi tukhi baat keh ker topic change ker diya tha.

Viren started talking , but he noticed that divya was still not looking at his face.

Acha bhabi aap ye batao ki , kya niveditha kisi bhi halat main aap ko nuksan pahuncha sakthi hai?

At this question divya looked up at viren she has a questioning look on her face.

When was it when nivi ever try to harm her? Her mind questioned?

Never came the reply . This time it was her heart answering.

Calmness spread through the face of divya and viren who was looking at her , quickly noiticed this.

Kabhi nahi na? he asked.

Tho , aapko kya lagtha hai ki nivi nay ye jo shadi ki hai mujhsey , kya ye achai ke liye ki hogi ya aapko nuksaan pahunchanay ke liye. Asked viren carefully,

Mujhe ? … asked divya..

 

I mean sirf aapko hi nahi, kisi ko bhi , ma, taiji, papa, dadaji , dadaji ya sidharth, .. kisi ko bhi nuksan pahunchanay ke liye ki hogi?

Divya continued looking at viren…

Would Niveditha ever plot? Or plan? Was she capable of harming anyone?

Nahi .. divya replied.

Nivi kabhi kisi ka bura nahi soch sakthi hai…she replied.

Viren continued , tho phir aapko kiya lagtha hai ki usnay shadhi kiyun ki hai?

 

Mujhe ye hi baat nahi samaj aa rahi hai viren , ki usnay shadhi kiyunki aur voh bhi ithni problems kay bavajud… kya vajah hai? She asked but this time she continued

Lekin jo bhi baat hai, voh zaroor kisi aur ke liye hi hoga… she  replied.

 

Viren nodded in agreement. Han aur aisa hi hai.

Bhabi aap niveditha ko mujhsey achi tarah janthi hai. Akhir behan hain aap uski. Aap janthi hai ki nivi kabhi kisi ko nuksan nahi pahuncha sakthi hai aur specially aapko.

Vaise hi ghar per use koi pasand nahi kertha hai. Koi support nahi ker raha hai. He went on..

Divya's eyes were starting to gleam with tears… as she continued listening to him.

Main chahtha hun ki aap usko support karayn , uski himmat banay. Jaise aap humesha hi thi.

Uski badi di.

Aur vajah jo bhi rahi ho, aapko uska abhi saat dena hai aur mera bhi..

He concluded.

 

Thumara saat? She asked wiping her tears and sounding a bit more relaxed. She did nto want to discuss her insecurities with viren and she knew that viren probably might have guessed that and , that is why he had brought her here in the first place.

Viren who had noticed the tears in her eyes turned to face his coffee , as if suddenly interested in its color, giving her enough time to wipe them off .

Voh na aap tho janthi hai ki main niveditha sey kithna pyar kertha hun. Aur maine uske liye surprise plan kiya hai.

And you know… niveditha bohot shy hai.. tho mujhe aapki madad chahiyye..

 

He went on.

Meri madad? Asked divya completely taken aback by this sudden request.

Was it not her who wanted them to get together? She knew that viren was the perfect guy for niveditha and always had wished for the best for them both.

 

Ofcourse viren main , zaroor help karungi. She replied excited.

 

A sudden flash of viren sleeping on the sofa came to her mind , but she brushed it off. There must be some valid reason, her mind argued,

 aur agar main viren ki madad karungi then def. nivi uskay kareeb jayegi. Shayad issye jo bhi problem hai voh solve hojaye. She reasoned to herself.

 

Tho you are in right! Viren asked holding out his hands towards her

Right on replied divya shaking his hand.

 

 

 

that was amazing!!!!
thank you for the treat....

Wow Suchi only you can do this. You made Divya think! 😲 👏 I loved the way you made Viren handle the whole situation without revealing real truth and without any drama. CT should take some inspiration from you. 😊
Edited by gmann2010 - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suchitra_1

Weekend Retreat Special

A cure for NivRen Psychosis Syndrome -Fans

 

 

Scene 1

 

How long does it take to fall in love? A month? A year? Or may be a second? No one knows the answer to this question. The journey to one's heart is a travel that is beloved to many but only few are successful in crossing the rapids of emotions with proper control.

 

Niveditha, chalo na meray saat? Viren said to nivi dragging her by her arm.

Viren, chodo mujhe, kahan le ker ja rahe ho. Dekho mujhe bohot kaam hai. Abhi tho khana bhi nahi bana ..

ouch ' she almost tripped on her foot and bumped into viren.

Dekha.. ! ithni jaldi bhi kya hai..?

Sometimes she could not understand the childlike behavior of viren. There was nothing else she could do, except to just follow

 

Acha ok, sorry, chalo please, ek min ke liye aur uskay baad chali jana.. said viren trying to convince her.

 

They entered their room..

Han tho abh kaho, nivi asked with her hands on her hips .

Viren then took her by her hand and made her sit on the bed. He then sat besides her and then smiled.

Nivi looked at him curiously and a bit exasperated.

Viren took her hands into his. Her soft hands could feel the roughness of his skin. It sent a tingling feeling onto her spine. She felt such , many a times, but would never make her face express it.

Nivedita, .. Viren said to her now seriously looking into her eyes.

Han bolo viren, she could sense that , now the matter was not something of light nature but what was to follow had to be of grave importance.

 

Nivedita.. he continued '

Mujhe kuch kehnha hai thumsey.

Nivi could see the contracted eyebrows and all her restlessness to leave the room left her. She was paying complete attention to him now..

 

Kuch hua hai kya?

After taking a long sigh

Niveditha.. main bore ho raha hun. Mujhsey baatain karo na?

He snorted after saying that and starting laughing earnestly.

Nivi's seriousness was gone in an instant and her face was turning red with annoyance.

She quickly took her hands away from his grasp.

Kya? Thum mujhe ye kehnay ke liye yahan per laye thay? Kya viren, thumb hi na. Mujhe ithna

kaam pada hai aur thum ho ki. Replied Nivi, totally frustrated.

Are maine kya keh diya kit hum ithni naraaz ho rahi ho.

Viren smiled at her and took her hands onto his again, holding it tighter now.

Mujhe thumsey baat kerni thi , bus.

Viren haath choro.. Nivi tried to take her hands away from his grasp and failed.

She tried to tug it away one more time but couldn't.

Acha bolo kya baat kerni hai.. she said defeated.

 

Viren looked at her and smirked loosening the grip of his hold a bit.

Taking advantage of the moment nivi quickly tugged away her hand form his graps and made a run for it.

Laughing at viren and his surprised look , she retorted back

Baray aye mujsey baat kernay walay..

Niveditha, ! cried viren

His face resembled that of a child who just dropped the top of ice cream from his cone.

Acha main bhi dekhtha hun ki aaj thum mujhe avoid kithni dair tak karogi. Had hothi hai yaar!

He got up determined and started rubbing his hands.

 

 

Mission - Cupid on the roll

Nice to see you back to normal and back with the Weekend Retreat. Loved it so far...

Scene 5

Niveditha, and vandana were almost done with their cooking. Vandana kept on throwing glances at nivi. She could see that niveditha was very disturbed. Vandana did try to ask her about what was bothering her but didn't know how to begin.

Ma ! hum vapis aa gaye! came the voice of Divya.

 

Her voice was much more light hearted.

Nivi'main madad ker dun? Lao mujhe de do said divya while taking the hotpot from nivi's hands.

Ma..main jaker isye dining table per rakh ker aathi hun. Divya continued..

Vandana who was more than happy with the sudden mood change of divya, nodded in agreement and gave her a smile.

Nivi stood staring at divya. It was as if a heavy mountain was lifted of her heart. She felt extremely relieved. She watched her older sister leave and turned to look at vandana.

Vandana was happy that the smile on Nivi's face had returned. She knew that it was only viren who could do that.

Chachi, main bhi di ki madad kerthi hun, said nivi with complete enthusiasm.

Vandana, nivi and divya set up the entire table.

Nivi, Divya abh jao viren aur sidharth ko bula lao . Main  baki sabh ko bula lathi hun. Nandu ! Nandu.. abh ye kahan chala gaya. Said vandana.

Nivi abh jao aur le ker aao. Mujhe ye samaj nahi atha ki thum use kis tarah jhelthi ho. Main tho uskay saath 30 min main hi tang par gayi'uff.. Divya said holding nivi's hand.

She then rushed off towards Sid's room. She did not want to make the situation awkward by letting nivi talk or to give her a chance to ask her about the conversation she had at the restaurant with viren.

Nivi just stared at divya, and then rushed off towards her room to find viren.

Viren! Viren kahan ho..called nivi.

Viren who was standing at the window , changed for the evening, smiled , and turned around.

Viren! Suno na.. called nivi again.

Viren ignored her and started meddling with his flute.

Acha teek hai sorry, abh tho suno.. nivi pleaded.

Di ka mood kaise badal diya? ' batao na pleaseeee.. nivi continued pleading.

Viren who was enjoying this , continued ignoring her and started clearing his throat as if to speak.

Nivi waited for a couple of moments and when she realized that viren was not going to talk, she touched his shoulders

Viren , batao na please.

Viren , who was happy that nivi actually made a physical gesture, immediately turned around

Wow! Kya lucky din hai. Meri biwi nay mujhe pehli baar, apni merzi say chua. Viren said..

Nivi face flushed and she removed her hands immediately.

Viren's face was lit up with excitement and he grabed her hands immediately

Teekh hay bataunga lekin ek sharth per..

Konsi sharth said nivi. Her eyebrows meeting

Voh tho thumhay abhi thori dair main pata chal jayega.. replied viren mischievously.

Viren! Nivi, kahan reh gaye thum dono' jaldi aao khana lag gaya hai.

Came vandana's voice echoing through the hallway.

 

Oh viren chalo, main tho yahi kehnay aayi thi, she said only to realize that her hands were safely secure in his hands.

Abh kya aap meray haath chornay ki takleef karengay!

 

Haath ? ---- konsay haath ? replied viren!

Ye walay ,said nivi, raising her hands which were clasped in his, up to his chest.

Oh of course, grinned viren,

 ok  chalo. Viren he said letting go of her.

Nivi and viren both walked towards the dinner table to find , Sid, Divya , Vandana, already sitting.

Viren and nivi sat besides each other.

Taiji, mom aur dad kahan hai? Viren asked Vandana.

Voh bahar kisi friend kay ghar gaye hain, Shayad dair sey lautengay. Replied vandana.

Aur dada dadiji? Viren asked

Bauji ka khana unkay kamre main bej diya hai aur ma chahthi thi ki voh unkay saat dinner karay vandana said.

Chalo hum tho dinner kerthay hain' she indicated passing a bowl filled with steaming soup towards him.

Divya served Sid

Sidharth , aaj main aur viren coffee penay gaye thay. It was such a nice change said divya

Hmm.. really ! smiled sidharth. Tho aaj devar bhabi nay khoobh aish kiya kiyun? Sid replied back with a smile.

Of course replied viren returning back the gesture with an equally radiant smile.

Divya became elated seeing this and continued sipping her soup.

Niveditha please muhhe bread pass karo asked viren.

While nivi moved towards the bread basket, viren caught hold of her right hand and placed it firmly under his left hand.

Nivi jerked suddenly towards him and shockingly looked at him only to see that viren was calmly sipping his soup.

Vandana passed the basket to her and pointed it towards viren.

 

Nivi started struggling to get her hands free , but every time she would pull it tighter, viren would tighten his grip.

Viren' she whispered. Ye kya ker rahe ho thum? Please mera haat choro mujhe khana , khana hai said nivi with a fearful tone.

 

Han tho khao na.. replied viren loudly.

At this Sid, Divya  and vandana looked up at them.

Kya hua viren? Asked vandana.

Kuch nahi chachiji , nivi quickly replied to divert their attention .

Are nivi thum kuch kha kiyun nahi rahi ho asked vandana.

Chachi ji main kha lungi , replied nivi still struggling to get her hands freed.

Niveditha kya hua? Sidharth too was now showing interest to the situation and then was joined by divya,

Nivi, kha kiyun nahi rahi ho. 

Nivi who was becoming conscious with every question was turning cold. She could have started to eat with her left hand but that would make the situation too obvious.

Nothing else to say she just looked down trying to think of some sort of response when she felt that her hand was free. She looked at viren with a shocked expressions , who was eating carelessly enjoying each and every single morsel , as if it would be the last  of his life.

Vah , tasty, continued viren , licking all five fingers on his hand.

Are nivi thum kuch khathi kiyun nahi. Its ok mujhe pata hai ki pati kay baad khana hi patni ka dharm hai lekin , honestly I don't mind

Replied viren breaking a loaf and passing it to nivi.

Nivi was looking draggers at viren. Frustration etching all around her face she turned her plate around to notice a small piece of paper.

Niveditha quickly looked up to see that everyone was busy talking with each other.

She then read the note, it said...

Ghustakhi maaf' : )

Niveditha's heart was racing as she read through the words, yet there was a sudden instill of calmness in her.

She slowly clutched the paper into her fists and started to pour the curry onto her plate.

After eating a morsel she peaked a glance at viren , who then slowly put his two fingers on his ear lobe and mouthed

"sorry"

Nivi despite of wanting to remain angry -could not stifle a smile. She quickly then turned away and continued finishing the dinner.

Edited by suchitra_1 - 13 years ago

Suchitra, just mindblowing.👏👏👏

Scene 4 was excellent, the way Viren handled the situation. Atleast in your retreat people are using brains.

 

Scene 5, what can I write. Bada Badmash hai apna Viren. The whole scen I had smile on my face. Hope we get to see something like this in the serial.

 

Thanks dear for doing this for us, I just came online to check on your post.

 

 

Finally Nivren, DivSid, and Vandana alone on DT without CC, YD and JW. Yepieeeeeeeeee.. Thanks Suchi you made my day, or should I say night.😉 I like your version of Nivi much better, she is comfortable with Viren and matches up to Viren's wit. DT scene was fabulous reminded me of movie Aaina. 😊

Suchi you are just a magician you made timid shy Nivi a bold and witty Nivi but she can't escape Viren sood magic can she. Lovely part specially hand holding at dining table.