Chaand Chupa Badal Mein


Chaand Chupa Badal Mein
Chaand Chupa Badal Mein

Weekend Retreat 4 Nivren Psychosis Syndrome sn8pg7

Suchi- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 November 2009
Posts: 12555

Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Hi all,
Ok now that my mood is little better I am doing a special retreat for all my Nivren Psychosis Syndrome Buddies.
The scenes hopefully will be of a lighter note and no serious stuff (well may be some)

So here it goes

Scene 1 pg 1
Scene 2 pg 2
Scene 3 pg2
Scene 4 pg3
Scene 5 Pg4
Scene 6 pg 4
scene 7 pg 6
Scene 8 pg 7
scene 9 pg 9

Edited by suchitra_1 - 19 December 2010 at 4:02pm

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Suchi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 12555

Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Weekend Retreat Special
A cure for NivRen Psychosis Syndrome -Fans
Scene 1
How long does it take to fall in love? A month? A year? Or may be a second? No one knows the answer to this question. The journey to one's heart is a travel that is beloved to many but only few are successful in crossing the rapids of emotions with proper control.
Niveditha, chalo na meray saat? Viren said to nivi dragging her by her arm.
Viren, chodo mujhe, kahan le ker ja rahe ho. Dekho mujhe bohot kaam hai. Abhi tho khana bhi nahi bana ..
ouch ' she almost tripped on her foot and bumped into viren.
Dekha.. ! ithni jaldi bhi kya hai..?

Sometimes she could not understand the childlike behavior of viren. There was nothing else she could do, except to just follow
Acha ok, sorry, chalo please, ek min ke liye aur uskay baad chali jana.. said viren trying to convince her.
They entered their room..

Han tho abh kaho, nivi asked with her hands on her hips .

Viren then took her by her hand and made her sit on the bed. He then sat besides her and then smiled.

Nivi looked at him curiously and a bit exasperated.

Viren took her hands into his. Her soft hands could feel the roughness of his skin. It sent a tingling feeling onto her spine. She felt such , many a times, but would never make her face express it.
Nivedita, .. Viren said to her now seriously looking into her eyes.

Han bolo viren, she could sense that , now the matter was not something of light nature but what was to follow had to be of grave importance.
Nivedita.. he continued '

Mujhe kuch kehnha hai thumsey.

Nivi could see the contracted eyebrows and all her restlessness to leave the room left her. She was paying complete attention to him now..
Kuch hua hai kya?

After taking a long sigh

Niveditha.. main bore ho raha hun. Mujhsey baatain karo na?

He snorted after saying that and starting laughing earnestly.

Nivi's seriousness was gone in an instant and her face was turning red with annoyance.
She quickly took her hands away from his grasp.

Kya? Thum mujhe ye kehnay ke liye yahan per laye thay? Kya viren, thumb hi na. Mujhe ithna

kaam pada hai aur thum ho ki. Replied Nivi, totally frustrated.

Are maine kya keh diya kit hum ithni naraaz ho rahi ho.

Viren smiled at her and took her hands onto his again, holding it tighter now.

Mujhe thumsey baat kerni thi , bus.

Viren haath choro.. Nivi tried to take her hands away from his grasp and failed.

She tried to tug it away one more time but couldn't.

Acha bolo kya baat kerni hai.. she said defeated.
Viren looked at her and smirked loosening the grip of his hold a bit.

Taking advantage of the moment nivi quickly tugged away her hand form his graps and made a run for it.

Laughing at viren and his surprised look , she retorted back

Baray aye mujsey baat kernay walay..

Niveditha, ! cried viren

His face resembled that of a child who just dropped the top of ice cream from his cone.

Acha main bhi dekhtha hun ki aaj thum mujhe avoid kithni dair tak karogi. Had hothi hai yaar!
He got up determined and started rubbing his hands.
Mission - Cupid on the roll

Edited by suchitra_1 - 18 December 2010 at 2:09pm

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Shayafan Goldie

Joined: 29 November 2010
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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
OOhh " Viren took her hands into his. Her soft hands could feel the roughness of his skin. It sent a tingling feeling onto her spine. She felt such , many a times, but would never make her face express it." 

This was too too good.Embarrassed  Waiting for Scene 2....

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gmann2010 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 19 August 2010
Posts: 3677

Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
It is wonderful Suchi. I am grinning like a fool. My nephew is here for weekend and he is looking at me with this weird expression on his face. I think he thinks that aunt have lost it totally. LOL

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FaizuuNivRen Goldie

Joined: 25 October 2010
Posts: 2060

Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
OMG Suchi Diiiiiiiiiiii!!!
That is SO typical of Viren. He would SOO do that!
Nivi's reaction is PERFECT!
That was so beautiful.
And your last line is PERFECT!

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shana_83 Senior Member

Joined: 04 December 2010
Posts: 440

Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Wow Suchi 1st scene is just fabulous.Clap Nivi is naughtyBlushing too, umm got a chance and left for a moment from her dear hubby. Please Suchi do continue your scenes.

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xaviara IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Suchi !!! OMG !! You are back with your weekend retreat !!! Awww this weekend has finally become bearable !!! WinkLOL What a start sweetie !! Loved it !! Lolzzz I could imagine this scene so well with Viren's childlike expressions, and Nivi's annoyance and then running free from his grasp !! Embarrassed Can't wait for the next scene !!

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Wow Suchi mindblowing scene you are really a life savor and my Viren in child like behaviour and Nivi was so cute with annoyed expressions on her face beautiful scene wow

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