FF~:Friends Forever:~ All Shanak Update : page 35 - Page 19

Originally posted by: saaaz

Manita...I am so glad you restarted this FF....

you were one of those who was instrumental there

OKay Shanak...hello..I dont know what Shaan is talking about but me sit that way on lonng car journeys...he wont be complaining when she is not so tired at the end of it all...mmm hmmm.....😉...cute these two are...it seems like they need to loosen up a bit more...

they will dear.....certainly.....see them after this trip....

Okay...so since you insist on this Pari whoever for Gaurav...😕...I am willing to give her a chance for Gaurav;s sake...dhamaaaka entry for Pari...you sure are pulling all the stops for her...😉
thanks  for giving her a chance😳

And finally...so this Abhi who makes a full roundabout story of marriages and video cameras and wot not ...this darpok who then suddenly gets all hyper about Natasha is the one you have planned for Nat is it....HMMMM......Okay you know what on one condition HE HAS TO STAY THIS WAY...he is so adorable....oh god...imagine him with the all cool and calm Nat...😉

I love how you have built the characters in your FF...btw, had to read the previous part to get on board with this one...now next installment...ASAP please....
thanks a lot darling.......if I don't get warnings to shut shop !!😆😆

Originally posted by: rafia 24

Manita thank you for continuinf this ff,

it was really good I like that all the characters have depth in their characters and loved the fact you addressed the fact that to the outside world shaan may look bad for leaving natasha id you dont know the story the response gaurav gives is pretty just, loved abhi tho aww he's sooo sweet, i like his optimism.

and the shanak scene in the car and shaan saying he wished he stayed back so at least he could have got a hug too😆 loved it esp the betaab shaan, he wants her badly but struggling to control his desires and focus on driving. yeah even tho they love each other theres always things you can learn about your partner so love you addressing that, in my opinion khanak knows shaan more then he knows khanak apart from her love of the kitchen and him he  needs to ask more about her hobbies, interests etc

 

 

 

like saaz eagerly awaiting pri's entry the scene has been set up nicely aww never thought about abhi for nat liking the thought.

 

pls do continue soon, loved it👏