Originally posted by khajju
i m here grace π
Awesmeee update π ...luvd how premeer made hetal ajay meet and solve their problem out...hope ajay accept them bth...hmmm i think prem isnt quite ready to adopt hetal...like why to adopt smeone else's child we can hav our own...orr he must be fearin will he be able to fulfil this responsibility orr will he able to luv her the way he will luv his oen child.
Other than tht meher preet scene was really cute...aww nihal veera avoidingg each other...OMG i just luvd the premeer room scene...sooo hottt and steamy...enjoyed every bit of it.
Thanks for pm
Update sooon
Prem and Heer don't seem to be ready for kids so I think it's good they had a little chat about what they were going to do if Hetal and Ajay can't work things out. Looks like these two are a bit undecided. Anyways if they had kids they couldn't have that steamy bedroom scene π π³
Thanks for taking the time to comment π
Originally posted by sreyap92
i really like how you didn't show them as parents right away after marriage!!! so we got some more romance cuz usually after
the kids there isn't much romance and we got to see cute moments!!
Premeer are still young so they want to enjoy their life together without all the responsibilities of having a kid. Thanks for taking the time to comment πOriginally posted by Aymee
Hey Grace great update.
This chapter really had me laughing.
I am glad Prem, Heer, Ajay, Hetal and baby Juhi's meeting went
well. I was very proud of Hetal and her maturity towards her response's question about Ajay marrying her. She is right in every ways. Why
marry someone if you really are not ready to marry that person or if you are not in love with them anymore. It would have been a big lie to
Juhi.
For the first time in my life, I actually felt bad for Veera. Not
even in the show did I feel bad for her, not even when she died. When
she died I was Ok, I know that was mean but that brat deserved it. π Anyways, she didn't deserves that kind of treatment from Nihaal. What
is wrong with him? If he doesn't love Veera, just tell her why is he
still avoiding and ignoring her...unless he really does have feelings
for her but is trying to deny it π. Someone should do this to Nihaal π
π€£ <----- this was me when Nihaal and Veera fell into the pool. I thought I was
going to die out fo laughter when that happened. At the end I loved how everyone eventually ended up inside the pool and Babuji, Kiran and
Rishi won the battle. π That was a really great scene.
Preet and Meher's scene was very cute. I am really glad Preet kept his mouth shut and gave Meher a beautiful compliment. β€οΈ
Naughty Prem and even more naughtier Heer. Those two lovebirds are too cute and too much in love. Loved their scenes and their love
scenes π³. Loved how Prem was imitating Preet π. I wonder what Preet's reaction would have been if he heard his PB teasing him.
I can't believe Vinay and Kiran's mom (sorry I forgot her name π³) showed up. Was Vinay even invited? π‘ This is going to be an intense confrontation. I really hope Kiran
comes out of this fine. He doesn't deserve his good name being dragged
in the mud by his stupid mother.
π‘ π‘
Thank you for the PM. I am really looking forward to your next update. π
Yes, Vinay was invited to the party. Maya told him in the scene where Heena meets Maya and Harman when they come home after shopping. Gayatri invited Vinay to the party.
It is a good thing Preet kept his mouth shut and just complimented Meher otherwise he would have been in trouble again...sighs...then again Preet always gets in trouble if not his father, then Meher, or someone else π
Hetal is handling things very maturely.
As for Nihaal...who knows what he is doing...acting like a typical guy who doesn't want confrontation. And Veera needs to suffer a little...haha...she was so bad in Desh so she's going through growing pains in my FF π
The naughty lovebirds...what can I say? π³
Thanks for taking the time to comment πOriginally posted by deshdeewani
sorry fr being late.
another wonderful update.
realy luved it.π
prem is waiting fr every one in the cafe.and when heer comes,
he trying to kiss her in front of ajay.π³but heer did't allow him to kiss her.π
prem is confused about adopting juhi.πbut he is right yaar.
hetal is right but ajay has to accept the fact that juhi is his doty and his responsbility.
premeer and scotch scenes was to cute.they r so sweet with juhi.π
poor veera...i really feel pity on her.and whtt nihal too comes in party ,but to meet his family not veera.π
hetal juhi scenes was nice.and the family scenes was alsoo good.
meet's part was short but cute.i m glad preet compliement meher.π
kunal droped nihal-veera in the pool on ash's signal,πbut then get scold by maya-ash.poor kunalπand then every one is landed in the pool.
and prem miss his heer.hmm.πno wonder,i too miss her that time yar.
and premeer romance was justβΊοΈ
and then prem imitating preet was so funnyπbut he is right yaar,if preet had seen them at that time.he surly said something like that.
and omg!omg!viney and heenaπ‘at the party.who invited themπ‘π‘π‘
hope premeer controled the situation.and kiran don't get so embarrased in front of every one.
i think after this situation,the maan's posponed their return.
thanks fr the pm
and update soon.π
Vinay was invited to the party by Gayatri...Maya told him that when she came home after shopping and she met Heena.
We will see what happens next π
Thanks for taking the time to comment πOriginally posted by newt2007
Sorry Grace . i haven't commeted for past three parts.
Thanks for the lovely updates.
you handled every situation very well. with your wonderful writing you given life for each character.
I serioulsy want you to be script writer for the show if Harshiti returns together.
Hi Selvy, it's been awhile. Hope you are doing well yourself. I'm waiting for you to update your writings you know. You've got some fabulous ideas yourself. You and me should join forces and write a script for Harshiti π
Thanks for taking the time to comment.Originally posted by sweta2005
awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I'm really glad you like the chapter π
Originally posted by sowmya18
awesome update...
loved it...
thanks for the pm...
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I'm really glad you like the chapter πOriginally posted by ummesulaiman
Thanks for the wonderful update! You are an amazing writer Grace!
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I'm really glad you like the chapter πOriginally posted by repunzell
thank u for the masalay darr updateπ!!!
it was so good of prem n heer to keep a meeting b/w hetal n ajay...hope it continuesπ!!
n thn the hot romance of prem n heer was a treat to usππ³!!!!!! loved itβ€οΈ!!
bt nw wht happened...i guess the family found out abt ajay n hetal or sumething lyke thtπ²!! i hope ajay doesn't back out n accept his family n prem n heer can handle the situation smoothly which is not possible thouπ!!
anyway amazing update n doo update sooonnn...don't take much tymeee plzzz!!!!
We will see what ends up happening at the party π lots of things are going to be said and revealed.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I'm really glad you like the chapter πOriginally posted by Pumpkinn
The update was wonderful ...
Specially Premeer part ...
Premeer can never get enough with each other ...
But i loved their hot steamy scene ...
For me they are a perfect example for perfect couple ...
The end part looked very twisty ...
What must have happened ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
Premeer are prefect...love these two so much πThanks for taking the time to comment. I'm really glad you like the chapter π