Posted: 08 April 2011 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AymeeHi Lisa,
Great update Grace.
Veera and Nihal's scene was very cute. I thought it was very sweet of Nihal to stay with Veera. I was surprised Maya didn't wake up and notice what Meher and Ash noticed. Ash was funny when she said that she wanted to sleep. Now I am can't wait to find out what Meher and Ash's plan is.
There were two parts, even though they were minor, I loved about this chapter. The first was when Babuji chasing Preet around when the family was wishing Heer happy birthday. On the show I have always loved their chases, especially the recent one we saw when Heer came back from Delhi and Preet teasing Babuji about his cooking skills
. I am glad you added a chase scene in this chapter Grace.
The second thing I loved was the conversation Prem and Heer had about Veera and Nihal. I loved how protective both brothers are over their sisters. On the show, we know how spineless Nihal was and at times I wanted to strangle him. I am glad in this fic, you made him a strong brother and not a wimpy one.
I know it sounds mean but it is the truth.
Prem and Heer's romance was very
. I loved it. Prem's birthday gift for his Heer was very romantic.
Thank you for clearing up the confusion about Vinay and KIran. I mistook that part as Vinay hiring Kiran for a job in his business.
Thanks for the PM. I can't wait to see the chaos at the J-zoo when Prem and Heer returns.
Yes, my Nihaal and Veera a way different from the show. Nihaal has some spine and Veera although spoil isn't overly annoying. I'm glad people are enjoying their track Since the characters of Kis Desh inspired me to write this FF I try to slip in a few elements of things they did on the show. And Prem and Heer are really the eternally romantic couple although in reality that is just not possible. I'm trying to balance them between reality and fantasy...but what can I say sometimes I can't help it Anyways, I'm going to make sure later on they have real life problems and sort their matters out in a more realistic way of course with a dash of humor. I can't get too serious. Thanks for taking the time to comment
Originally posted by anuu2010Thanks for taking the time to comment
great update grace
loved the romantic birthday gift
so nihaal-veera picking up nice
thanks for pm
update soon grace
Rocketeer has been on replay for awhile for me that and Black Eyed Peas Just Can't Get Enough...love those two songs! Thanks for taking the time to comment
Originally posted by Xxcoolchick1xXWoohoooo i finally caught up *Proud of herself*
Preeti that's a lot of chapters you caught up on. You deserve a Hope school is doing okay for you. Don't be too sad about Prem and Heer going back to J-Zoo...I have some interesting masti going on with the family. You'll see in the next chapter. Thanks for taking the time to comment
Sorry for not commenting on the previous update Grace i was busy wiv projects and all...but now i've finally caught up.
Im sooo glad that the misunderstanding between Nihaal and Veera
have been cleared...so Joyti liked Nihaals friend and he was only trying
to help them with her dad...gosh Veera what were u thinking???
But im happy that they have cleared everything between em.
And i just loved the way Prem celebrated Heers birthday...made it really special for her just like a fairytale.
And the romance i won't go into much detail but all im gna do is
I think that is enough to express how i feel
Ahhh their honey moon is gna end soon n they are returning back to
J-Zoo they are not gna be getting much time together any more...
Enjoyed all the parts alot.
Update soon n thnx for all the PMs u sent
Originally posted by PumpkinnI want a honeymoon like that too Thanks for taking the time to comment
Awesome update ... Loved it ... Premeer romantic scenes was really great .... I wish I could also get a honeymoon like them ... Waiting for next ... Update soon ... Thnx for pm ...
Originally posted by khajjuAbout the other SS...hehe...probably won't be updating that for a bit. I have some other stuff going on and that's a bit of a complicated story takes a little more time to think and map things out...don't worry I haven't given up just need to think about how to progress from where I left off. Spy action thing is a little hard for me But in the mean time this FF will get an update. Masti time at J-Zoo Thanks for taking the time to comment
luvd how prem planned everything for heer n her birthday...he
is a perfect husband....wish we all get a sweet and caring husband like
the songs u selected....morning scene was really a cute one.....thanks
for shairngg those pics..it helped a lott in imagining premeer
there...heheh veera nihaaal scene was quite funny...meher saw
them....the way meher was waking aslesha to tell her the latest news
....family scene was a sweet one
....premeer on streets discussing abt familyy....how much caringg they are...luv these two...they are adorable
...OMG premeer HOTTTTTT romance was mindblowinggg
it to the coree....aww just one week left and they hav to go back
home.thanks for pm....update soon and u other ff tooo..eagarlyy waitingg
Originally posted by sadhzGlad you liked the last chapter Thanks for taking the time to comment
........god m stil blushin........hehe
nihal n veeras scenes were cute.......lookin frward for their track.........
loved rose petals part...........awww prem is so romantic........no doubt
birthday surprise he planned for heer was romantic.........heer in black saree n prem in black suit.
.....rab ne bana di jodi...hayyeeee love them..........
loved d way u described premeer romance at d end...........
n heer wore prems shirt.........how romantic..........hehe
thnx for d pm.........cant wai for nxy part...........update soooooon
Originally posted by anushyapI'll think up something nice for them in the coming chapters.
omg such a hot romantic update my face still feels
hot!!!! meher seeingg nihaal and veera was so cute!!! cant wait for the
next part please updae soon!!! oh and can u also put in some really nce
meher and preet scenes cause they are also an awesome pair!!!
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Originally posted by sowmya18Thanks for taking the time to comment
Originally posted by Hajz95Thanks for taking the time to comment
JUST LOVED IT
Yup we know Veera is starting to like Nihaal...but Nihaal still remains a mystery sort of Thanks for taking the time to comment