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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Xxcoolchick1xX

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Way to go girl Shocked...tht was one longggg HOT part!!! Embarrassed Luved the wedding part...Preet n
Meher laying a bet on who will do the hwk...Lol. Veera helped the girls n got the money of Prem along with others. Big smileGlad the wedding got over smoothly...
The suhaag raat Embarrassed
Update the nxt part asap n thnx 4 the PM. Smile


Yes, the last chapter was super long...haha 18 pages on Word LOL Tried to add all the fun little elements of a traditional wedding...though most of what I know is based on what I have seen on Hindi television shows.  And then the suhaag raat...what can I say Embarrassed Thanks for taking the time to comment Big smile

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aymee

OMG Grace...
 
After I read the first part of the story (the wedding ceremony), I began to scream.  Then I saw your comment about their honeymoon was on the next post, then I was shamelessly happy.  LOL Big smile LOL  What I mean to say was that I thought you were going to toture us by making us wait.   Sorry Embarrassed.
 
Now to the story.  Loved how all the guys were teasing Prem about his big night.  Poor guy LOL
 
Ashleesha, Veera and Maya experiences with the guest was really funny.  It was funny how Veera realized after it was pointed out that she lost Maya to the crowds.  Maya's possessiveness over her food was cute and funny.  Poor girl, I don't blame her either.
 
Wedding ceremony was great.  I am glad the girls found Prem's shoes.
 
Premeer's big night was very sweet and Embarrassed.  I am glad they took it slow to enjoy each other for the first time.  What was really sweet and romantic and very considerate was Prem asking Heer's permission to make love to her.  I wish guys could be more like him. 
 
Great job Grace.  I am very grateful for giving us all these updates so close together.  I look forward to your next chapter and Premeer's afterglow (see I told you I have no shame LOL).  Thank you for the PM.  I was really was surprised and happy you updated this chapter so soon.


I know I could have tortured you guys by stopping at the wedding but I promised that I would have all of that and them some done for you guys so I decided to update it all on one big chapter.  Consider that an epic Maha Episode LOL

As for Premeer's Big Night...I thought it was fitting for them to ease into it...being this would be the first time for both of them.  Anyways hope you enjoy the next chapter as it is aptly named Afterglow LOL ....bit of spice but nothing warning worthy Wink



Edited by iheartChai - 10 January 2011 at 3:17pm
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
r u updatinggggggggg now

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khajju

hii grace...finally our wait came to end and we got wht we was waitinggg for....aah we are soo naughtyy........omg wht a beautiful amd romantic chapter it was........luvd evey bit of it.....premeer marriage and then the phingoli....only one word hottt hottt hottt.........luvd the steamy romance of premeer....it was simply awesmeee....finallly prmeer are one in bth the waysss......premeer standing in the balcony hugging and staring at the moon...luvd tht scene........the dialogues of premeer wer great.....heheh girls letter to premeer......aww prem is soo caring and understanding....asking her permission and then sorryy........soooooooooo sweeeeeeeet.....marriage part was great.....so the girls won the game....this veera is a big cheater....lollzz.....prem was soo eager to go to sleep....heheh.....boys teasing prem was great....awww my poor prem away frm heer....he was leaving in kunals house following the tradition ...........and here heer......poor maya stucked in the guests helping them.....plate part was sooo funny...poor girl....nywayz thanks for pm and for this loooonngg chapter.....luking forward to the honeymoon trip....update sooon.


All you readers are so naughty...waiting for something like the Big Night.  Glad it came out successful.  I wanted a proper romance unlike what happened to Premeer the first time in Kis Desh with Veera interrupting and everything...no proper afterglow Angry LOL...Anyhoo, more fun, masti, and romance awaits in the coming chapters.
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharmeeli

HugTHANKS FOR SPOILING US DEARBig smile 
just LOVED the updateHug
LOLLOLhihihi really loved the bet of MEET, and I'm glad Meher won, now our darling Preet is going to make the homework, but I think Meher is so sweet that she will help him (I'm sure I wouldEmbarrassedLOL)
hihihi Veera is just sooo goodTongue aaahw poor Maya is going mad with all this tension, but don't worry Maya; it's going to be right, isn't it?Wink
 
Premeer finally married, well I don't have words to comment about thatEmbarrassed
 
anyways, THANK YOU VERY MUCH for spoiling us dearBig smile and plzzz update soonEmbarrassed (wouldn't mind to get more spoiledEmbarrassedLOL


Yes, I have thoroughly spoiled you guys Tongue Awww, you're too nice to help...hehe...Meher will have a handful with Preet that is for sure in the coming chapters.

Maya is going to be learning lots of things...don't know how well that learning is going to go though LOL

Thanks for taking the time to comment Big smile

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
update soon pleasee...
i'm so addicted reading this ff gain

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Mehak--

Hey Grace!Big smile It was an amazing chapter dear! The warning was much needed!LOL But jokes apart, it was really well described and you did meet my expectations sweetie!Big smile I loved the fact that the wedding ritualys were presice excluding the last oneLOL and yes I thoroughly enjoyed all the teasing and the fun moments they had! ' Its my wife youre taling about. Show some respect man' I loved that especially!LOL Great job Girl!Clap Looking forward to the next update! Big smile

Love, Mehak


Mehak!

Precise details?  I only put in what I've seen in Hindi TV serials LOL and there is no way the last part is getting precise LOL that would be really bad...just enough for your imagination to do the work Wink

Thanks for taking the time to comment.  Hope your studying is going well for your exams!

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Motibah

GRACEEEEEEE why oh why are you such a good writer? Day Dreaming Im out of words! God. I just really don't know what to say. After all this waiting finally we get what we wanted Blushing
 
LOOOL my favourite chapter EVER! I don't think I have ever read a chapter with so much concentration ROFL ahaaa I swear I could actually feel my heart beating towards the endLOL Okay I know I probably sound crazy but that's just me. Approve 
 
Gosh I cant even begin to express how much I LOVED this chapter though! It was so passionate and HOOOOOOT Day Dreaming The way you described it all was just Blushing I cant believe they are FINALLY married and gah why are they are sooo cute!? Hug 
 
and loool loveeed all the teasing the two of them got before the wedding and can't WAIT for all the teasing they are going to get now LOL 
 
Okay enough of my crap. Thank you soooo much for not splitting the chapter up into two bits Hug and thank you soo much for giving us such an awesomeee, hot, passionate and detailed chapter! Really love you Big smileHeart
 
Okay byeeeee Im off to read it again now LOLDay Dreaming


A big Hug to you too girly!  My shameless Premeer lover...so much concentration on their private moments Shocked LOL...more spicy moments to come and masti from the rest of the couples.  Thanks for taking time to comment Big smile

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