Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Passion..Passion..lets Find Solution:Updted ideas PG1 (Page 27)

polly23 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Jyo di great  and longish one first i thought devils den ka tiltle kese change hogia
 read first couple of pages,  Everyone so creative with their ideas i don't have any

Maybe One of Dadi's far relatives or her friend comes To KM for Shaddi who is traditional old minded.  She is not happy that Maaneet are seeing each other before marriage.  So she kept them apart for two three days.  Maaneet is  missing each other so terribly then on the pre wedding sangeet ceromony they saw each other on the dance floor and Maaneet start to dance with passionate just like kurbaan hua

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SecretKhabri420 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Opti

Zee, if you are interested you can read my fic here:

This is a take off after the promo on Pari's arrival. I spun my own yarn after that.
Thanks Opti, I already read some of them Embarrassed, I remember that I was searching for ur topic that time and I was so happy to find it LOL
U mean u started writting after Pari's arrival....
U know what, I really want Pari to come in their wedding, she is very sweet, it would really cute to see Pari telling Maan what she wrote to Geet in that letter WinkLOLBlushing and then Geet tries to stop her and blushes Blushing

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SecretKhabri420 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Meetu_Anu

I was thinking the same LOL

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pickachu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Loveeeee ur post!!!!!
I must say most needed one right now!!!!
B/c the forum is full of  complaining posts abt boring,boring and only boring.
I loveeee the answers of all the doubts.
Ideas r also awesomeeeee.
Why don't u post this topic on geet official page??

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Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Well, Jhan here is the scene from my fic you mentioned. Truncated it to fit here: (CVs are free to use any of my scenes. No objections)

On their suhaag raat while they were seated next to each other, Maan turned Geet's right palm over and scrutinized it closely.

"What are you searching for?" asked Geet curiously.

"My initial," he muttered, still engrossed in her palm. Search as he may he could not find the letter M on her palm in the elaborate designs.

He picked up the other palm and searched for it amidst the intricate motif but was unable to find anything.

He looked into her eyes and asked in a disappointed tone, "You did not get my initial inscribed, did you?"

"Of course, I did.  It's a shame you can't find your own initial," she said mockingly.

He gave her a stern look and picked her palms again to search for the elusive M. Seeing her try hard to stifle a yawn, his heart sank.

"I don't think I'll be able to find it." he said dejectedly, "Show it to me yourself."

"Are you sure you want to give up? They say that if the groom can't find his initials, then he has to give the bride a gift."

"It is easier to give you a gift than search for my initials.  I don't think I'll be able to find it even if we are up all night. So I accept defeat. Show me where it is."

Geet gave him a crooked smile and showed him a pattern on her palm.

"That's not an M!" he exclaimed.

"Who said it was.  It is an intertwined double D," she stated matter-of-factly.

"Double D?" he asked incredulously, "Those are not my initials!"

"Have you forgotten the name I've given you, Maan? DD stands for Dusht Dhanav," she said amidst giggles.

Maan gritted his teeth and gave her a piercing look which clearly expressed his displeasure.

Geet turned more serious and said, "I was only pulling your leg."

He turned his face away from her and continued to sulk.

Realising that she had upset him, she tentatively stretched her hand and holding him by his chin, she turned him to face her.

"I'm sorry! I will not call you by that name again. Please forgive me," she pleaded, her eyes quickly filling up with tears.

Seeing her tears, he was alarmed and quickly wiping them away he said, "Hey, I was also pulling your leg by pretending to be angry. Come on now. Cheer up."  

She smiled through her tears and flung her arms around him. He hugged her back, caressing her head reassuringly.

Edited by Opti - 18 December 2010 at 8:41am

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maangeet2010 Senior Member

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Yaar Jyothi Tussi great ho!!!!!!!!!!!LOLClapClapClap

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vivacious_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Jyo if u like any of these ideas put them on page 1 so that they can been seen....
Things that can be shown before marriage
1. Maan and Geet in the bed room...geet sitting with her back to maan.... n maan holding her by her shoulders.... whispering in her ears...asking her where she wud like to go for their honeymoon... away from all prying eyes...just the 2 of them..... i want to see that discussiong between them...
2. Geet going shopping for a western dress to wear for her man during their honey moon....
3. Geet going shopping for sexy night wear .... and realising that maan too is in the same mall doing the same... meaning...maan too shopping for a sexy night wear for geet.,....
4. Geet getting crazing for dhaba food very late in the night... n calling up maan n telling him she has to eat it..... maan taking her out late at night to fulfill her cravings.....
5. Geet getting protien shake for maan who is exercising... geet getting a towel n wiping off his sweat..... touching his abs.... n getting naughting...just teasing him..... lol...
6. Maan and Geet again visiting the doctor.... and then on doctor's prescriptiong...they both going on a walk in the garden..... talking bout creating a baby nursery after marraige.....
7. Geet talking to the baby....n maan secretly listening to it while hiding behind the door... geet complaining to baby bout maan..... n then maan coming to meet geet n tell her i hv come to meet my baby...not u... n complaining to the baby bout geet....
8. Geet telling maan that she loves working with him but she wished she cud hv completed her education..... n maan n geet discussing her future.... education, etc....
9. Geet preparing a surprise breakfast for maan n taking it to his room for him.... well this can happen post marraige as well but before marraige wud be more interesting.... Big smile
10. Maan can give Geet a foot massage....
n Most of all.... Maan shud ask Geet to stop calling him sir..... just Maan.... Geet ka Maan....

Edited by deniac - 19 December 2010 at 10:16pm

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Sigma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:43am | IP Logged

Jyo excellent post you covered everything Star

Opti I love all your ideas, can you give me the link for your FF, I really want to read it now
Shradhav, I never knew the ABC was this much fun Blushing
tell me when you complete the alphabeat so I can read them all
All the rain and water scenes BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing can't wait for monsoon season Blushing
my fav water scene Bri's flower scene Blushing

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