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An intangible luv stry of 2 frnds..(pt 5 updated)

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Guyss.I got a luv story of two  best frnds......i m putting dis story here coz TaAnu r also best frnds and then fall inot luv:
 
Part 1
 
Hav u ever been in Luv wit ur best frnd?
If yes den dis is aStory whuch u wil understand.Ther was a Boy and A gal.Dey were best frns for yrs.They cud talk on d phone n msg each oder 4 hrs.Wen they were 2gether nt a single sad thought cud cross their minds. Evrything was gr8 till 1 day- D boy didnt pick up d phone or answer any msg 4 a day. She ws worid dat smthng ws wrong.At nyt she cud not slip.She ws sittin in hr room crying and it was den dat she realised hw much he means to her............................................
 
PART 2
 
D nxt tym she woke up 4m a phne cal. It ws da boy
Boy: Hey
Grl: m so glad dat u cald me
Wat happnd wit u ystdy?
Boy:I ws busy
Grl undrstud dat smthng ws wrong bt cud nt ask
 
 
Boy: U knw..we shud stop tlking
Girl: Wat? Bt y?
Boy: I m sorry.Bye.
 
He disconnected da phone
 
And she felt as if somebody clsd the door on her face
 
Everything else flashed in her mind.
Tears..
Cars running by her..
Roof of some building...
And a sunset..
 
She cud not understand...
she started feeling so lonely..
Empty..
And sad..
 
 
And...
 
 
Part 3
 
Brokn!
It ws da ans 2 everything.
His word werepounding on her.
Hr hrt wntd 2 jump out
He ws da one.
"WHY"??She
screamed at da top
of her voice.
she decided 2 make
a last try and get him bck.
 
she caled him.
 
He picked up da call.
 
GIrl:Hi
 
Boy:Why r u calling?
 
Girl:I need 2 tell u smthing.
 
Boy:Go ahead.
 
Girl:I just wanted 2 knw one thing b4 we stp tlking.
 
Boy:Tell me
 
Girl:U ok??
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
 
Part 4
 
Boy cut d cal.
Smthng broke inside
of her
She did try
may b he dosen't rely
care abt her she
thought
Mayb she wsn't his
frn in da 1st plce
Tears were slowly
running
She felt even worst
She left da house n
left a note.
5 hrs later
 
Phne rang in da
Boy's Room.
He picked up
It ws Girl's mom.
She told him dat da
Grl ws in da hsptl.
She ws hit by a car.
Boy rushd 2 da
Hsptl.
N there she ws.
She opened her eyes
n cald out his name.
He came near her n
tuk her hand in his.
Boy:M so sori Its
ol my fault Bt i
prmse wen u gt
bttr i'l mke it up 2
u
 
grl ws luking at him
wit tears in her
eyes.
 
Part 5
 
Grl: I wont gt bttr
Boy:No....!No...don't say
dat
Grl:Jst tel me
1 thng y did u do it?
Boy:told her dat he
hs heart problem n he
didnt wnt her 2 be
worried n thre ws
risk dat he cud die
I did bcz I LOVE
YOU.
Girl:I LUV U 2
 
 
Girl Heart
stoped beating
N she died.
 
Boy died 10 days
latr frm
 
heart attack.
 
He cud nt live wit da thought
 tht she died coz of him.
 
 
 
 
THE END.
Hope u lyked it....... 
Do commentSmile


Edited by lilsweety - 22 December 2010 at 12:57am

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 1:49am | IP Logged
nice start
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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:47am | IP Logged
continue please...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed....love the concept..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lilsweety

Guyss.I got a luv story of two  best frnds......i m putting dis story here coz TaAnu r also best frnds and then fall inot luv:
 
Part 1
 
Hav u ever been in Luv wit ur best frnd?
If yes den dis is aStory whuch u wil understand.Ther was a Boy and A gal.Dey were best frns for yrs.They cud talk on d phone n msg each oder 4 hrs.Wen they were 2gether nt a single sad thought cud cross their minds. Evrything was gr8 till 1 day- D boy didnt pick up d phone or answer any msg 4 a day. She ws worid dat smthng ws wrong.At nyt she cud not slip.She ws sittin in hr room crying and it was den dat she realised hw much he means to her............................................
 
 
TO BE CONTINUED tomorrow :-))
 
Do comment


Please Continue....its sweet..!! Clap
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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 6:26am | IP Logged
nice start!!..has a feeling like My won story!!...Embarrassed..But we r actualllyyyy just FRIENDS..Smile
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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shayeri

nice start
thnk u......
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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deeps07

continue please...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed....love the concept..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
thnk u sooo much.

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by taanu-d-best

Originally posted by lilsweety

Guyss.I got a luv story of two  best frnds......i m putting dis story here coz TaAnu r also best frnds and then fall inot luv:
 
Part 1
 
Hav u ever been in Luv wit ur best frnd?
If yes den dis is aStory whuch u wil understand.Ther was a Boy and A gal.Dey were best frns for yrs.They cud talk on d phone n msg each oder 4 hrs.Wen they were 2gether nt a single sad thought cud cross their minds. Evrything was gr8 till 1 day- D boy didnt pick up d phone or answer any msg 4 a day. She ws worid dat smthng ws wrong.At nyt she cud not slip.She ws sittin in hr room crying and it was den dat she realised hw much he means to her............................................
 
 
TO BE CONTINUED tomorrow :-))
 
Do comment


Please Continue....its sweet..!! Clap
thnksss....part 2 is updatedSmile

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