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The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. (Page 98)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
wow item talking peck of brsharmi

love the instalment complete it soon

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r u giving us an installment plzzzz do ?/

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The second half was also very cute. Loved it. The way you've described Riddhima's awkwardness is spectacular. Honestly I wouldn't have been able to write about it. I find it very difficult writing about their intimacy. You write it so beautifully without making it seem vulgar. Here also it sounds so realistic. Especially his teasing her about it. Men are like that only. They enjoy making their woman feel embarassed about such issues. I really admire the way you work with words. You are one awesome writer.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap I really am your greatest fan. keep up the wonderful work. Love, shardha.

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Originally posted by ssh57

The second half was also very cute. Loved it. The way you've described Riddhima's awkwardness is spectacular. Honestly I wouldn't have been able to write about it. I find it very difficult writing about their intimacy. You write it so beautifully without making it seem vulgar. Here also it sounds so realistic. Especially his teasing her about it. Men are like that only. They enjoy making their woman feel embarassed about such issues. I really admire the way you work with words. You are one awesome writer.Clap I really am your greatest fan. keep up the wonderful work. Love, shardha.
 
Thanks Shardha for letting me know that it doesnt seem vulgar.. i was a little apprehensive about posting it initially coz i thought people might object or take offense.. hence the warning and stuff.. but the thing is that they have come a long way in their relationship and seen what all they had to see.. so it is obvious that the level of intimacy and their private discussions would go one step ahead.. and i am glad that you and everyone else who had commented so far doesnt have a problem with that change.. Smile keep reading.. will put up next in a few hours!

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
comment updated page 81 Smile

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hey dear just wan to know r u going update or not bcoz my pc is not working  i m log in through my cousin's pc n  i will not be able to come online after 12
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updating in ten minutes!
 
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post updated on pg 80
To Hell With You..
that's the title of the complete part fells.. dont give me those virtual glares.. rofl!!LOL
and haan.. very important : reader's discreetion advised.. Tongue
last thing.. Happy Reading!! Smile


Edited by zephyrr - 09 January 2011 at 11:56am

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Originally posted by zephyrr

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