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The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. (Page 98)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
I lovee this part so much so that I've read it over and over again LOL .
I really adore how they have come down to talking everything in their heart .
I loved their discussions from the serious to the naughty Tongue LOL
I think this time apart has got them a long wayy they now understand each other even better !
 
I think their insecurities are justified to a great extent ,they have not been able to talk over it ,because either they didnt get to or they decided to not pain or bother the other.
I just hope that they both dont feel guilty any longer because IMO like you explained in the update, no one was at fault ,at the end of all of it both were just doing what one would under pressure of the situation.
I am sure it will take a while for them to not feel guilty and that'll probably happen when they talk over each feeling and make the other feel special ,which they are already doing !
Somewhere I really want something like Riddhima getting to go with Armaan or him not going at all LOLL .Waiting for the next update !

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
hey hey...zefffyyy wen r we getting another installment...Ermm
do continue soon....Tongue


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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 3:15am | IP Logged
hey zappy waiting 4  next installment  Day Dreamingupdate plzzzzzzzzSmile






Edited by anushkajain - 09 January 2011 at 5:15am

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:03am | IP Logged
hey zappy
pls can we get another installment, today???????????????/
i know we become very greedy daybyday but what we can do?Smile
we r additced ur ff.SmileTongue
Tongue

Edited by shilpI007 - 09 January 2011 at 4:04am

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
wow item talking peck of brsharmi

love the instalment complete it soon

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:00am | IP Logged
r u giving us an installment plzzzz do ?/

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
The second half was also very cute. Loved it. The way you've described Riddhima's awkwardness is spectacular. Honestly I wouldn't have been able to write about it. I find it very difficult writing about their intimacy. You write it so beautifully without making it seem vulgar. Here also it sounds so realistic. Especially his teasing her about it. Men are like that only. They enjoy making their woman feel embarassed about such issues. I really admire the way you work with words. You are one awesome writer.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap I really am your greatest fan. keep up the wonderful work. Love, shardha.

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ssh57

The second half was also very cute. Loved it. The way you've described Riddhima's awkwardness is spectacular. Honestly I wouldn't have been able to write about it. I find it very difficult writing about their intimacy. You write it so beautifully without making it seem vulgar. Here also it sounds so realistic. Especially his teasing her about it. Men are like that only. They enjoy making their woman feel embarassed about such issues. I really admire the way you work with words. You are one awesome writer.Clap I really am your greatest fan. keep up the wonderful work. Love, shardha.
 
Thanks Shardha for letting me know that it doesnt seem vulgar.. i was a little apprehensive about posting it initially coz i thought people might object or take offense.. hence the warning and stuff.. but the thing is that they have come a long way in their relationship and seen what all they had to see.. so it is obvious that the level of intimacy and their private discussions would go one step ahead.. and i am glad that you and everyone else who had commented so far doesnt have a problem with that change.. Smile keep reading.. will put up next in a few hours!

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