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The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. (Page 97)

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
OMG...OMG...OMG...zephyyyyyyyyy ur a doll,man hw can u do dis 2 us da update iz awesome,superb out of dis world sooooooooo cute n sweeeeeetClapClap Clapsory my vocabulary iz not hlpng me hr i dosnt fnd suitable words 2 explain my emotions, u know u hv a god gifted skills of writng, da way u pottery ar emotions n fellings it was marvelous .rely u r 2good yar ,it was worth waiting .do cont soon ( v r getng moor greedy dy by dyWink but its not our fault ur ff iz 2good v cant survive vdout it ). lv meena

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 12:17am | IP Logged
that was a long upd8 of  19pgs........hehehehehe
awesm yaar........ nice upd8
 bt nw i m jus tired of both of them always being insecure..........

pls let them b free of all these insecurities... make them live like normal ppl. at times it becumz so xtreme taht its hard to digest.....
i mean ohk i can understand after all dat happened in d past they r scared of losing each other.........
bt nw. they r engaged..... n married frm their soul.....so i guess they shud handle their. professional n personal life quite maturely........
 n nt cry over it like u r going for 2 days  n hw will i live......i mean that goes to an extreme level of obsession in love........i mean usme love kum aur obsession zyaada nazar aaraha tha.....
all in all i want u to relieve them out of their insecurities.......
n them to hav faith in the love......

totally my pov.

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vaishiksg

that was a long upd8 of  19pgs........hehehehehe
awesm yaar........ nice upd8
 bt nw i m jus tired of both of them always being insecure..........

pls let them b free of all these insecurities... make them live like normal ppl. at times it becumz so xtreme taht its hard to digest.....
i mean ohk i can understand after all dat happened in d past they r scared of losing each other.........
bt nw. they r engaged..... n married frm their soul.....so i guess they shud handle their. professional n personal life quite maturely........
 n nt cry over it like u r going for 2 days  n hw will i live......i mean that goes to an extreme level of obsession in love........i mean usme love kum aur obsession zyaada nazar aaraha tha.....
all in all i want u to relieve them out of their insecurities.......
n them to hav faith in the love......

totally my pov.
 
19 pgs?? Confused oh of WORD.. i use OneNote so i wouldnt know.. my god! its 19 pgs.. Shocked

and about the whole criticism.. i take it in my stride.. 
i can understand where you're coming from.. but i'd like to defend my characters here.. they are certainly not obsessing over each other.. nor are they being unprofessional.. Armaan is going to Singapore and Riddhima is not trying to stop him.. both are just hoping that this be avoided if possible.. and that too only coz, if you've noticed in the story, its been only one week since he came back and they got engaged.. i know i took much more time to pen all that down.. but even then in a week they hardly got time together coz of Shanky and his Breakfast-Dinner routine.. so technically they are allowed to be insecure, especially about going away from each other and that too to the same place that had become the reason for their separation.. i bet they would have been not this disturbed if he was going anywhere else but there.. and this i did mention.. what they went through was huge and quite extreme.. so according to Newton's third law, i think their reactions to it will be equally extreme.. Time is the only thing that will free them of their insecurities.. which i can speed up.. but i wanted to put something else in.. which i cant reveal atm.. 
plus i think you wouldn't feel this feeling of theirs being dragged if i would have put up all the updates continuously everyday like i was supposed to..but i didnt..  that was my bad!! Tongue
but i do agree with you that i overdramatized their insecurities for each other.. and it may be tipping over to the obsessive side.. but then there is a reason behind me doing that, which will be clear in the next installment.. which hopefully is the last installment.. Smile and i hope you enjoy the next installment and the parts to follow.. and thank you for sharing your views.. i appreciate criticism as much as the praises that you people shower on me.. Big smile Keep reading!! 

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
rachnaaaaaaaaaaaaaa will you update today? see I am soo greedy LOL
But your FF is just like that.. it's not enough for me..I want to read more & more Embarrassed

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
I lovee this part so much so that I've read it over and over again LOL .
I really adore how they have come down to talking everything in their heart .
I loved their discussions from the serious to the naughty Tongue LOL
I think this time apart has got them a long wayy they now understand each other even better !
 
I think their insecurities are justified to a great extent ,they have not been able to talk over it ,because either they didnt get to or they decided to not pain or bother the other.
I just hope that they both dont feel guilty any longer because IMO like you explained in the update, no one was at fault ,at the end of all of it both were just doing what one would under pressure of the situation.
I am sure it will take a while for them to not feel guilty and that'll probably happen when they talk over each feeling and make the other feel special ,which they are already doing !
Somewhere I really want something like Riddhima getting to go with Armaan or him not going at all LOLL .Waiting for the next update !

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
hey hey...zefffyyy wen r we getting another installment...Ermm
do continue soon....Tongue


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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 3:15am | IP Logged
hey zappy waiting 4  next installment  Day Dreamingupdate plzzzzzzzzSmile






Edited by anushkajain - 09 January 2011 at 5:15am

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 4:03am | IP Logged
hey zappy
pls can we get another installment, today???????????????/
i know we become very greedy daybyday but what we can do?Smile
we r additced ur ff.SmileTongue
Tongue

Edited by shilpI007 - 09 January 2011 at 4:04am

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