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The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. (Page 9)

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Wooohooo this was quick...didnt expect another update alreadyy :D thankss zappy...just gunna read it now :)
 
 
and a BIG congrats for the 6th thread...this ff is just awesome....please never end it :)


Edited by Armaan-KSG - 18 December 2010 at 2:21pm

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Hmmmm this update is really quick Wink
Very nice and informative part. Informative coz you showed us what's necessary for a relationship . And i completely agree with you that communication is the most important part of any relation. It's good when somebody read your silence but sometimes words do wonder Embarrassed.
It's very necessary in love to make your partner feel  most wanted, most important person in your life. And yes a dose of "how much you love him/her" is also highly recommended timely.

I loved the part where you ve mentioned "Any burglar would have been proud of how noiselessly she moved around when she wanted to."LOL

Hope they talk soon and sort out all this confusion. Once Again Padma ji ki Jaya ho.. She is an awesome MOM. And some credit goes to Sanky also.. Clap

Complete it soon.. Waiting to see AR together ....

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 4:48pm | IP Logged

HEYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE NOT SEND  UR LAST TWO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FOR ME!. BUT ANY WAYS  LOVE WHEN ARE U GONNA FINIST THIS ONE????????????????

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 6:31pm | IP Logged
you have portrayed it so beautifully... wow I have no words I feel like I can almost relate... amazing continue super soon I can't wait to see armaan's reactions

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
Congratulations on the new thread. You deserve it every bit.
The part was as usual good. Somewhat serious. But sometimes serious is also needed.
Love
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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
WOW
You know what the part about Riddhima felt like reading something about myself, or maybe most of us girls who tend to keep a lot inside us even in the best of times
Like really thoughtful
I kinda always wanted this side of the story to come out- how RIddhima had changed cos of him
And yes its really true- that he has no one else to claim him only made RIddhima's feelings for him even more intense- it might not be a totally correct way to state it but it was true in this story
She'd had her family to divide her time with
He had no one but her to shower all that love and time and feelings with

It wasnt a boring part man :O its deep parts like these that make it a Story instead of episodes strung together :P
Loved it !

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 8:59pm | IP Logged

Finally Armaan let out his feelings and Riddhima had rightly guessed the loop hole here.

Its going great update soon.


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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update Rachna !
 
I am glad Armaan finally spoke up even though it was just for some parts of it.He has lived a lonely life and the only person he has is her so his insecurities of losing that one person is going to be there and it can be called wrong ,its human nature .Armaan like Riddhima has realised needs to know how special he is to her because between them he can only how he's been the one telling her everything from the good to the bad ,he feels he has taken her for granted and leaving her added to the pain he think he was already giving her.
I love how Riddhima's realised it this soon ,she needs to tell him how dependant she is on him too because he thinks he is the only one.
Beautifully written part and I love how you've gone into the depth's of what they feel,love and relations are about feelings more then anything else !
 
I am wondering what happens about the going to Singapore part in the story ? I just hope it doesnt cost them a misunderstanding !

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