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The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. (Page 54)

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 7:37pm | IP Logged
awesome part very diff this time getting to no bout basket loved the part plz write more soon and the 6th thread awesome job :D

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
Heyy
 
O-M-G this part was just absitively posilutely amazing, fanstastic, superb, brilliant, awesome.....urghh running out already but you get the point!LOL
 
awww i am in awee dude....i don't think i have ever heard such a beautiful confession everEmbarrassed....it didn't have the mushy stuff...who cares....the way you portrayed it in the realistic manner how both of them complete each other, was just mindblowingClap.....seriously, i think you should get your works published....you are soo damn brilliant as a writer!!Clap....i keep on falling in lovee with your writing more and more, as if thats even possibleEmbarrassed
 
i just loved how riddhima finally cleared all his guilt and wow, wasn't expecting her past....aww she went through all that?....but the way she put it across armaan was soo riddhimaish....once again, hats off to you!....it had innocence yet specks of maturity in it, it showed understanding and her need to be heard and accepted....idk if i am making any sense here but i loved her in this update!....it takes a lot of courage to say all thatEmbarrassed
 
OMGGG thats what the tatoo meant?LOL....awwwwwww i am soo gonna kidnap armaan from your ff....seriously, can that guy get any more perfecto?Embarrassed.....ridz was right, he is the perfect guy and ofcourse, she is the perfect girl for him!Embarrassed....brilliant job at portraying such a beautiful relationship!
pweez do continue soon....and don't make this wait longer....my fragile heart can't take itLOL

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
Hi Rachna,
The last instalment was fantabulous, awesome, mindblowing and chooooo romaaaaantic!!
Loved every word, every phrase, every sentence. Want to keep on reading it over and over again. It was worth the few days wait. The way Riddhima stumped Armaan revealing her innermost thoughts and the way he blurted out what the tatoo read, was just superb. No wonder everyone is so addicted to your ff and keeps pestering you for updates everyday. I just have one thing to say.You are an awesome writer especially when it comes to penning down one's feelings. Best wishes to you and eagerly waiting for the next update. Love, shardha

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Res- The Talk Was A.W.E.S.O.M.E- so real and yet so Armaan Riddhima !

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Awwww..it's soooooooooooooooo Cute...
I loved the converstion.....it's really really cute LOL
and that tattoo thing....Yayyyy My guess was right LOLLOLLOL
Armaan is our Saif ali Khan..but in chineese verision EmbarrassedLOLLOLLOL
But it's really romanticEmbarrassed
I loved the whole part.....
You are just awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee...now please continue soon Big smile

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
hey zappy!!
amazing update again!!
finally armaan ka guilt kum hua!!
wonder wht shanky wantz to talk abt!!
oooohhhhh ammy go ridz name tattoed
sooo cool!! awww....luv him!!!Embarrassed
do update soon
 thnx fr d PM

love
-kinnari

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
now the whole thing was wonderful

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
I just loved the last update, probably the best that you've written (in my humble opinion) in the last few updates that you've written!

It was lovely to see them both talk their heart out, voice their insecurities and actually communicate instead of just their normal "love" talk. It really/made wonderful reading esp reading Ridhima open up , so much so that I kept wishing that it wouldn't come to an end!

Waiting to read the next update!

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