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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 1:00am | IP Logged
oppsss...I m so late updating my coment this time ..I almost forgot to tell u how I felt about the part..LOL

first off all..CONGRATULATIONS zeffffrrrrr...for having 6th thread of TWOS...WOW..u so deserve to have many more like this...keep up the gud work and all the very best....u r one just BRILLIANT writer ..well I have said this a million times till now ..but wat to do ..u r worth lot more aprreciation dear ...luv uuEmbarrassed


well...needless to say .. as usual rocked with ur writing this time too ..arm's outburst then his guilt ...ridz realization and everything.... I luved it absolutely...u r showing ups and downs in AR's relationship so perfectly...BEAUTIFUL...Tongue

 physical gestures r not sufficient all the time ...words r important too....I was thrilled reading ridz confession the way she spoke to arm about her fears ...her childhood and deep secrets ..BRAVO... this will surely strengthen their bond..as now arm's insecurities or his stupid thoughts will die down ...

I njoyed the part wen ridz got to know about his trip to that "haunting place"..LOL...even I felt she will surely shout and will b mad at arm ...but her reaction was a shock for me...she was too sad but I luved the way she controlled the situation and herself knowing that arm was felling guilty and blaming himself ..awww...AR's LOVV is different , very different...luv themmm

I luved SAY WHAT YOU NEED TO SAY
...in spite of the fact that it had less romance...still it was Clap

update next one soonn..and plssss snatch sometime from ur traning and ur Mr.armaan for us..pleashhhhh..LOLZZ..(can't keep my hands off from writing something to tease u...kya karoon majboor hoon..tehe)LOLTongue


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CONGRATULATIONS FOR NEW THREAD






DELICIOUS CHOCOLATE CAKE WITH ICE CREAM



CONTINUE VERY SOON

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 1:50am | IP Logged
congr8s 4 da new thread!!!!
 
wishing many more 2 cum..
 
GOD BLESS YOU!!!
 
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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Congooooooooo for the new thread Big smile
you deserve it..you are just too good Big smile
I am in love with your FF & Your writing Embarrassed
last part was really good & emotional ..
and in next part i want the secret of tattoo Embarrassed though I know itTongueLOLLOLLOL

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congoooooooo!!Party

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yaaay........ loving it 

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Posted: 18 December 2010 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread
Here's to more awesome parts of This Wonderful Outstanding Story- TWOS ;-)

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