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The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. (Page 167)

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 4:48pm | IP Logged

OHHHHHHH EMMM GEEEE!

Your last installment was just AWESOME zappy!
Seriously, i was laughing and smiling throughout..not that i dont in any of your other parts, but this was adorably cute. And the fact that they are just so comfortable with each other, its like their ONE SOUL :) and lovedd the lill baby talk...;) and aww armaan getting teased by was cute..lool and them running around and then, that passion...;)
Nicely written zappy like always!
Keep it up :)
and yikez the ending, SHANKY :O Ohh dayumm! I loved how armaan threw the phone at riddhima haha...lets see what happens..
andd CONTINUEE SOONN PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE :)

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
Hey Rachna...:) hope u r feeling better now...n have caught up with ur work...:)
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww seriously i need to publish the new dictionary for great n wonderful words to describe how beautiful ur ff n u write ur parts....:) <3
it's great.... luv how u have described the relationship of AR...they r soooo damn cute...adorable....sexy.....romantic n comfortable with e.o....:)
luved every single moment in the latest part...:) <3
honestly...every time i read ur ff, i fall in love with AR once again all over again...:)
the ending was really nice...lol i imagined hindi movie scene when the real bomb cums in someone's hand n they throw it away...but how cute.....Armaan thinking how cum his fath-in-law always get to know when he is making out with his daughter...lamo....that cracked me up.....
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i luved the part alot....:) <3
thanx for the wonderful update...n cont soon...:)
tc :)
Preet <3

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
Zapppppy I love you..Woow...you greta with words eg this

 sure if she was pleading him to let her go, or pleading him to never let her go..

I loved the update..Armaan at receiving end..liked it

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
zeppy, inst. 3 was very good...i just hope that this singapore trip just no leave any sour taste for the 2, like last 2 times.
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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 8:20pm | IP Logged

I didnt comment for last 2 instalments because I couldnt get enough of it.may be becoz of the instalments.I always wanted more and more.You made me really greedy yaar. I want to read the whole update together once it is finished. Then only I will be satisfied.

My most favourite scene in the previous instalment was Armaan becoming naughty and shameless inside the car.Thats our Armaan malik.I so missed him.
The next instalment was good,but may be I expected more.The way Armaan helped Ridhima to overcome her Acrophobia was awesome.How could u think of such a good idea?
Bike racing was fun and the victory kiss was superb.
And thanks for making Armaan drunk.I really wanted this scene.But you could have taken more advantage of his drunken state.I felt they slept too early.Wink
I loved the last instalment more .When i read it again and again,I fall in love with it again and again.i like this type of cute fight plus romance.The way Ridhima irritated Armaan...i loved it.
I can understand Armaan's anger. Poor baby...! LOL  And the chasing was superb which was followed by the passionate romance.
I  was about to ask you why no one has called them yet? Atleast Shanky has to call them asking did they reach safely or hows the stay at hotel? Atlast he had called them.I wonder what made him so late?


Edited by armaanlover_7 - 25 January 2011 at 7:42am

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
this part is absolutely awesome,awesome,awesome..LOLLOL
and rachna u r a die hard romantic!!!!Wink

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
waiting for complete update




love
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