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The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. (Page 16)

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 6:18am | IP Logged
awesum awesum awesum update!!! luvd it lyk anythng!!!!!Smile      



plz plz plz continue soon
!!!

nd wen r u updateinnn????

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by armaanlover_7

I read the part 80 update.No need to say,it is superb.You already know that.And I just love the title .The best is "SupArmaan" part.I didnt realised it first,I just read it as superman and then only after a while the 'Armaan' part struck.Rachna,you are superb yaar.Thumbs UpAll the supermaan related dialogues made me laugh like nothing.ROFLHow do u manage to tell such humourous dialogues?Then I liked Ridhima's search to find out the meaning of tattoo.If I was in her place,I would have learned Chinese.Can you sent her my message?Please tell her to check internet for the translation.There may be the new Chinese words.
Then the whole Shashank interruption was very good.I could feel their irritation very well.But the most irritating one is one and only Armaan.The way he irritated Ridhima.....Angryoh God.....when will he stop his stupid jokes in serious situations?I felt really pissed off when Armaan was trying to avoid Ridhima's questions.But afterall he is my baby,I cant be mad at him.The whole update was fantastic till the last para.The scene were Armaan was sitting in parapet and Ridhima coming to his home at night and console him,making him sleep..i couldnt get continuity in that scene.I felt the scene was not in place or it was a dream of Armaan.So I didnt like the last para very much.But when i started to read the next update,then only I got the continuity and I got the answers for the questions in my mind.So eventhough i was confused earlier,when i read the next update,i could relate to the last para.Now I like that scene also.
Then...I have to tell something about the making out scene.The scene was intense,passionate and you really describe the whole scene fantastically.But nowadays I feel that the making out scenes are becoming a little repetitive.I am not saying there should not be any make out scene.There must beWink.But add something new to it so that it looks different.The last one or two making out scenes are almost like this one.I felt so.I hope you will add some more spices to it,next time.Love u.....Heart

 
i dont know what else they can do while making out..LOL lol!! sorry.. bad joke.. and no offense to anyone.. nor you.. LOLTongue
but really, i dont even remember the last time they had made out before this.. maybe my imagination wasnt worded well.. Tongue
and i'll surely convey the suggestion to them on your behalf.. LOLLOL 
but Armaan may take offense to that..Tongue lol!
 


Edited by zephyrr - 20 December 2010 at 8:04am

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 6:32am | IP Logged

i havent started writing.. not yet.. so i cant guarantee a complete update.. but i'll try putting something up.. latest by 12 or 1..

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zephyrr

i havent started writing.. not yet.. so i cant guarantee a complete update.. but i'll try putting something up.. latest by 12 or 1..



coollll..will wait
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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zephyrr

ihavent started writing.. not yet.. so i cant guarantee a complete update.. but i'll try putting something up.. latest by 12 or 1..

ab uptd chahiye toh wait toh karne parege yaar par plz uptd kar dena

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Waiting Rachna......

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Posted: 20 December 2010 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zephyrr

i havent started writing.. not yet.. so i cant guarantee a complete update.. but i'll try putting something up.. latest by 12 or 1..



aigght Zappy..:) we will wait till then  but do complete it...plzzz plzzz

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