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In the prelude you've said this part is a bit boring, of course it isn't. But it's the most difficult for one person to think on behalf two persons and also pen it. You have to think of Armaan's questions as well as Riddhima's answers and it should sound logical too!!Confused You've done  a convincing job of it and without confusing the readers either. Of course how you managed to script such a long part about their feelings is above me. Kudos for it.!!!! Clap


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Originally posted by kavyaa

just read d instalment...mind u it was NOT boring in anyway... luved d part 2 bits...
 i know wat m gonna say is crazy bt i wd luv 2 see d drunk ridz againEmbarrassedWink.... think about it.... a drunk ridz wud be just tooooo gud.... just once plzzzzzz...... Tongue
do rply 2 me...Smile
Wink
Heyyy !!! awesome part zeffff !!! yea i agrreeee !!! a drunk ridz again would be sooo coooll !!!
loved how you showed armaan's feelings ! and its good that ridzi realiised her mistake too !!!
update soon !
love yaaa !

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Originally posted by kavyaa

just read d instalment...mind u it was NOT boring in anyway... luved d part 2 bits...
 i know wat m gonna say is crazy bt i wd luv 2 see d drunk ridz againEmbarrassedWink.... think about it.... a drunk ridz wud be just tooooo gud.... just once plzzzzzz...... Tongue
do rply 2 me...Smile
Wink




oyee tanz...they have reached to a level where they can not control at all...ApproveLOL...jab dekho mauka dhoodhte hain ek doosre se chipakne ka..LOL...remember the previous part arm's house incident ..........ErmmWinkLOL

talli ridzyyy ...WOHOOO...thats DANGEROUS my dear
Stern Smile....shaadi se pehle hi sab kuch ho jayega...LOLEmbarrassed
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kavyaa

Originally posted by sjain

Originally posted by kavyaa

just read d instalment...mind u it was NOT boring in anyway... luved d part 2 bits...
i know wat m gonna say is crazy bt i wd luv 2 see d drunk ridz againEmbarrassedWink.... think about it.... a drunk ridz wud be just tooooo gud.... just once plzzzzzz...... Tongue
do rply 2 me...Smile
Wink




oyee tanz...they have reached to a level where they can not control at all...ApproveLOL...jab dekho mauka dhoodhte hain ek doosre se chipakne ka..LOL...remember the previous part arm's house incident ..........ErmmWinkLOL

talli ridzyyy ...WOHOOO...thats DANGEROUS my dear
Stern Smile....shaadi se pehle hi sab kuch ho jayega...LOLEmbarrassed
LOL

hehe i agreeWinkLOL
... bt i trust zappy she wn let dem do aham aham on large scaleEmbarrassed be4 marriageLOL & thoda bahut toh chalega naWinkLOL... hehe... bt still i want 2 see a talli ridz & an authorotative armaan trying 2 control a talli ridz... it wud be fun... remember d song "nahi nahi abhi nahi abhi karo thoda intezar"... hehe bahut mazaa aayega ya talli ridz ko dekhne mein aur zappy toh hai he AR ko control karne ke liye toh tension kaiki?? hehe... *giggling* poor zappy kaise rokegi AR ko?? heheTongue

fully agree with you tavnvii bahut mazza aayega!!Embarrassedtalli ridzyLOLbut i must say saadi se pehele hi sab kuch ho jayegaa but if zappy is goona write it then i am sure ki ahem ahem limit mein hi rahega!!LOLEmbarrassed*gigiling*

plss update the partt soon

sakshiStar



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