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The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. (Page 108)

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:16am | IP Logged
awesome part
loved it
ha ha shanky was too funny

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shristi sarda Goldie
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:37am | IP Logged
wow...wat an awesome part......
armaan was just too amazing.......
poor ridz....
thanx for the pm and plzzz update asap..............

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:49am | IP Logged
zappy...
 
r v getting an update tonite?????

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Woww!!! Luvd it

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 9:49am | IP Logged
god..hw do u do it..!!u make us yearn 4 more n more..v r nva gona  gt enuf of ur updates eva if it is de longest.
luv de nok jhoks btw Ar...ur ff is quite a fun read..!!being hopelessly romantic cnt 4gt de wy u hv jotted down their moments....hv re read many tyms i guess..!!it ws fab indeed.
hope 2 c much of Ar bickering n romancing..nw tat their on their pre wedding honeymoon, Ar cn very much do wat their want.
 
hope u cont soon
ashu

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
oh ma god. superb update. it was hilarious, too romantic nd touchy. it ws filled wid various emotions. superhot part. nd d cheesy nd cheeky lines u use na m to ur fan of dem. he he.. loved d security check by shanky ofcourse. ma stomach ached i ws laughing dat bad. nd yeah m dying to read dere PRE WEDDING HONEMOON part.. LOLZZZ
u r a FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAB writer. jus overwhelmed to hv u  in dis fanfiction. seriously through ur words armaan and riddhima appear more beautiful. dere desire, passion ,love, emotions. god m falling in love wid AR more nd more day by day through ur updates ofcourse.... i jus luv u zappy. muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashluvdmg

god..hw do u do it..!!u make us yearn 4 more n more..v r nva gona  gt enuf of ur updates eva if it is de longest.
luv de nok jhoks btw Ar...ur ff is quite a fun read..!!being hopelessly romantic cnt 4gt de wy u hv jotted down their moments....hv re read many tyms i guess..!!it ws fab indeed.
hope 2 c much of Ar bickering n romancing..nw tat their on their pre wedding honeymoon, Ar cn very much do wat their want.
 
hope u cont soon
ashu

i  agree v seriously cant get ovr ur updates evn if dere wrld longest updates. so plzzzzzzzz dun stop writing evr

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Anokhee Senior Member
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Hey Rachna......

You know what I have NO words for this part. You have simply rendered me speechless....
I mean I love the way you make their relationship so realistic inspite of putting it as fantasy...
In the first installment, I was a little disappointed coz nothing much really happened. I was probably looking at this like a whole brooding part but it turned out to be just the opposite...
The second installment bowled me over and I couldnt help but smile while reading it and after that as well... You just mesmerize me with your parts so much that you often make me think about relationships and are they really so beautiful? Does one really feel the way Armaan and Ridhima feel? It's all so enchanting. And ever since Armaan gave Ridhima his house keys, I had a picture of them becoming real real real close and extremely comfortable like they've never been with anyone in their life and it's exactly becoming that way and its a treat to read... Trust me....
The extremely embarrassing things are becoming less embarrassing and soon they wont matter like her getting comfortable being with him without wearing her "Item"Tongue... I mean thats something people might get comfortable post-wedding only, I guess... But I had kind of guessed that thing in the beginning while I was reading it..... But you know what, it was actually cute to read rather than embarrassing or vulgar... Your way of penning down your words is simply enchanting... I really need to learn that from you.... And dude, I cant believe Shashank actually checked his bag for condoms! Really??? That would have been so so so embarrassing.... And I love their banter. It's so much like a typical lovers' tiff... And you know what, in some parts, I dont know why but I think the humor is too much like between Castle and Beckett... It just reminds me of them. I'm not complaining though... I love their banters too! And Ridhima is so cute... She didnt know any of the slangs he was using for a condom... I mean, even I didnt know the first couple of them, but I knew what he was talking about....Wink
And I swear I cant wait for the next part... I love the growing mental and physical intimacy between them. it drives me into fascination. And also, I forgot to mention, I Loved the line you used "Only if they knew what they were upto last night"... I just couldnt help but laugh at it.....
And last but not the least, the title, "To Hell With You"... To be honest, it didnt strike me first... I was thinking about it in the shower, thats when I realised Hell=Singapore and You=Ridhima... and I was like STUPID ME! But Then I fell in LOVE with the title.... You're indeed very very innovative
You're just superb!!!
Keep up the awesome work of yours!!!
Waiting really eagerly for the next part.....

Loads of Love,
Anokhee!



Edited by Anokhee - 10 January 2011 at 11:53am

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