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SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKE IN THIS BECAUSE I HAD NO TIM TO CHECK.

 

PART 7a

 

Sameera entered the room to find her baby sister sleeping peacefully in bed. Sameera's were filled with happiness seeing her sister after months. But her heart ached with the thought that she is going to be an unwed mother. She hated Maan for that. She hated all Khurunas for her sister's condition. Sameera went near Geet and slowly touched her face.

Sam : Princess utto ... ur didi came...utto...(with tears)

Geet slowly opened her eyes and looked blankly at Sameera. Sam was so happy and hugged Geet and kissed her forehead.

Sam : how are you feeling now princess? Are you ok?

Geet didn't respond but looked at her without any expression on her face. She was having a confused face.

Sam : Aise kya dhek rahi ho Princess? Talk to me. Are you ok?

Geet : Sorry. But aap kon hai? Do I know you?

Sam was shocked to hear this and she looked at Geet. She suddenly rushed out controlling her tears and hugged Rahul. Seeing her tears others were worried.

Rahul : kya hua Sam? Tum ro kyun rahi ho?

Sam : Rahul'. Woh Geet , Geet

Maan : Kya hua meri Geet ko?

Sam : She.. She..

Rahul : Sam what happened? Say..

Sam : she is not recognizing me. She lost her memory.

Rahul, Maan Dev and Vicky : KYA????

Rahul : aisa nahi ho saktha'

Vicky : I will call the Doctor now.

He rushed to call the Doctor. Doctor came back and asked them to wait till he checks her. Everyone was waiting outside and they were tensed. Sam was crying and NT and myra consoling her. Maan was much tensed seeing all this. He just wants to take her away from all and live in their beautiful world. A world of Maan and Geet. He remembered how she used to talk about baby to him when they were in their small paradise.

 

Flashback

 

Geet was sitting on bed resting her head and seeing Maan getting ready to go to office. She smiled at him and he too smiled back.

 

Geet : Maan, ek baat puchu?

Maan : hmmm'

Geet : why is baby inside my stomach???

Maan (shocked) : KYA??

Geet : haan' I want Baby out in my arms. And I want to talk to him.

Maan : him???  (Amused)

Geet : yes, I wanna play with him and share my toys and chocolates. Kitana mazza 

            aayega'

Maan came near her and sat beside her. He took her hands in his and kissed her forehead. He smiled at her and loved the innocent eyes containing curious questions.

Maan : Baby will come soon Geet but you can talk to baby if you want now.

Geet : How? Baby is not here naa. Baby have mobile?

Maan was laughing hearing this.

Maan : no but we can talk without mobile. Watch me.

He bends down and patted her stomach softly and started talking to her stomach (Baby). She watched him confused.

Geet : ye aap kya kar rahi hu?

Maan : Baby se baat kar rahi hu.

Geet : aise??

Maan : hmmm' Baby can hear you.

Geet : really??? (Excited) But why is he not responding?

Maan : Baby will answer you once he come out. Now you can talk to him like this.

Geet : ok but I can't bend like you. So how can Baby hear me?

Maan : you need not bend. Baby can hear you.

Geet : ok. (Looking at her stomach) hi Baby. I'm Geet. How are you baby? Come soon.

Maan was smiling seeing her talking like this. But suddenly he was shocked hearing her say this.

Geet : you can call me Geet didi if you want. I love baby brother very much.

Maan : Geet ye kya bol rahi ho tum?

Geet : KYA?(innocently)

Maan : Baby is not your brother.

Geet : Kyun ?

Maan : well, err.. He is your '.

Geet : How come he is not my brother? (sad). I love him.

Maan : he too love you because he is your son.

Geet : But I want brother not son. I wanna play with him always.

Maan : Geet meri baat suno. He is your son because he loves you a lot, more than anyone. See all babies love their mom right? But brother will love his sister after mom and dad only. But you are lucky because our baby love you first, so you are his mom.

Hearing this Geet started to cry.

Maan : kya hua Geet? Ro kyun rahi ho?

Geet : I'm missing Mama and Sam didi. Why is she not here?

Maan : remember what I told you. You will have to wait for some more time.

Geet : hmm.. But tell me what the surprise is? I want to know.

Maan was now in dilemma. He was thinking what to say to her. Suddenly Geet asked.

Geet : Got it. BABY.

Maan : baby?(confused)

Geet : baby is the surprise naa?

Maan : haan.

Geet after thinking for sometime smiled at him. He sighed in a relief seeing this. She started talking again to baby.

Geet : hi baby. I'm your mama. So tell me ''.(she was going on talking and maan was smiling at her. )

Flashback ends

 

 

pre-cap : Sam and Maan shocked

 

NOTE : I'M UPDATING ONE MORE PART -B TODAY ITSELF. BUT IT WILL TAKE LITTLE TIME. IF U LIKE THIS PLEASE PRESS LIKE BUTTON AND ALSO COMMENT.

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Edited by Ash534 - 05 July 2011 at 8:57am

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wow sh elost her

memory poor geet
i hope she remember
maan fabulous update
pls yaar update the
other one love it
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn
muahClap


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aww poor geet
great part
con't soon
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loved it but was short.... she is back to normal i guess ??????//
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nice update
hope she backs to normal
precap s scary wat made geet and maan to shock
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Nice part.... Love the maan and geet conversation about baby... Very cute....

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