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Angel.Khushi Senior Member
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged

awesome dear... please don't separeate maneet. please.......... why can't this sam and rahul understand that maan loves geet? please make maneet together....update soon

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Plz update it!
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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged
hey ash,

plz update revenge too ... with maneet moments offcourse  LOL

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged
PART 6


HI GUYS, I'M UPDATING PART 6. THIS IS FOR MY ANGEL MARDE. HOPE U GUYS ENJOY IT.



FLASHBACK (MAAN AND GEET) STARTS


Maan was late from work. He was really tired and he entered his room to meet an angry Geet.

Geet : phir se late

Maan : sorry Mishti. Meeting tha. isliyae late hogaya. sorry... plzzz

Geet : no... no sorry...

Maan : sorry bola naa mishti...

he came near her and sat beside and gave her a small peck on her cheeks. And made a baby face.

Maan : sorry Mishti darling. (baby face)

Geet : ok. ok. dinner kiya?

Maan : i'm not hungry.

Geet : but i'm hungry. bohut bhookh lagi hai... ufff...come...come, lets go and have dinner.

she dragged him to dinning table.

Maan : you didn't ...

Geet : nope. i was waiting for you.

Maan : jenny...jenny (shouted angrily)

Geet : why are u shouting?

Maan : why didn't she ...

Geet  giggling.

Maan : why are u laughing?

Geet : they are at servants quarters.

Maan : what? they left you here alone?how dare they?

Geet : Maan...Maan

he was not listening and was  trying to phone jenny and gayathri. Geet was calling him but he paid no attention.

Geet : MAAN BHAI...

Maan suddenly turned back with shock. he was in shock that she called him bhai again.

Geet : Opps. sorry. Maan, i want you to feed me today. that's why i asked them to go. actually shouted at them to go. sorry.

Maan : kya?

Geet : hai. now come and feed me. i'm hungry.

Maan was looking at her as she was an alien with two heads. she again shouted at him which made him ccome back from his shock.

Maan :haan

Geet : come, i'm hungry.

Maan was feeding Geet and himself. she sometimes made him angry by turning her head left and right which made Maan difficult to feed her. But, he liked her plaful nature. she was sitting on the table and her on the chair. she sometimes giggle seeing him irritated by her playful act. Maan was really happy because this was the first time she was talking with him without asking about Sameera and Rahul. He always wanted her to forget about Sameera and Rahul, but it was not possible. But he was happy that atleast she is friendly with him. After having their dinner, Maan lifted Geet from Dinning table and went to bedroom. He then laid her on the bed and gave her a small peck on her forehed and lips. He then went to his room  for changing his dress. Late at night he heard a knock on the door. He opened the door and saw his Geet standing outside his room.

Maan : kya hua Geet? tum teek hoona?

Geet : yes Maan. ek baat puchu?

Maan : haan Geet, pucho.

Geet: Can i sleep with you? mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai. please.

Maan was shocked hearing this.

Maan : kya?

Geet : move.

she went inside his room and laid on his bed.


   Maan POV (starts)

What? She want to sleep beside me. Ohh God. Ab meih kya karu? how can i sleep with her? how can i control my feelings? ye ladki mera death ka reason hoga. that's for sure. How can i sent her back? but she looks so scared. God, please give me strengh.

   Maan POV (ends)

Geet : Maan...come

Maan : haan.

He laid beside her but kept a distance from her. But she rolled near to him closing the distance between them. She kept her head on his chest and hugged him. It was really difficult for him to sleep like this. He was having all type of weird thoughts but seeing her peaceful sleeping face, he relaxed. He hugged her back and slept. And before sleeping, he thanked God for making his wish fulfilled. All he wanted was 'his Geet' beside him.


FLASHBACK ENDS


PRESENT

Sameera entered the room to find her baby sister sleeping peacefully in bed. Sameera's were filled with happiness seeing her sister after months. But her heart ached with the thought that she is going to be an unwed mother. She hated Maan for that. She hated all Khurunas for her sister's condition. Sameera went near Geet and slowly touched her face.

Sam : Princess utto ... ur didi came...utto...(with tears)


pre-cap : Sam and Maan shocked


Note : if u like this part, please press like button and also give some comment. sorry for short update.

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Edited by Ash534 - 05 July 2011 at 8:55am

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
loved dupdate...
cont. soon...
plz also update ur other ff....
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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Awesome part.... loved it
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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
gr8 part
Awww Maan doesn't lyk it wen geet calls him bhai
Precap sounds interesting---Wonda y Maan & sam r shocked
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
loved that cute past moment.............
when i was opening this ff i was worrying and feeling sorry for maan that geet might say she doesnt know him and maan's life will b shattered but u didnt even tell anything abt that.............yaar pl cont soon

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