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Part -3B

Maan : she is not going any where... she will stay with me... i have arranged for her medication...

Vicky : k... bhai... she will stay with u ... Now relax... go to geet ... she needs u now...

Maan left them and went to their (geet's & Maan's) room


MANEET'S ROOM



He was caressing her face' and she was cuddling close to him' he gave a kiss on her forehead' he always loved this feeling when she was with him. He closed his eyes and slept beside her. After sometime, Adi, Dev & Vicky came inside his room to say something and was shocked to see them in this position.(Her head was resting on his chest and hands around his waist and his hands around her embracing. They were sleeping like couples)

Adi , Dev, Vicky : Confused Shocked

Vicky : ye' bro ko kya hua? I mean ' he and geet???Confused

Dev : I don't know' Confused

Adi : he almost killed me when I accidentally said her mad'let's leave this room before he gets mad ' err.. I mean before he gets up'

They leave the room.

SAMEERA'S & RAHUL'S APARTMENT



Sameera was searching for Rahul in the whole house but didn't find him. she wondered where he was' suddenly heard a female voice from the other room , she opened the door of that room. She saw Pari (Vicky's Fiancee) standing there and arguing with Rahul.

Pari : I wanna go home now' Angry

Rahul : u can go home when Maan give Geet to us'Angry

Pari : u are talking as if she is a selling commodity sold by Maan Veerji..Angry

Rahul : just shut up' u will stay here till Geet come back home..Angry

Pari : what makes u think Maan Veerji have kidnapped her' she must have eloped with her Boyfriend' just like her sister Sameera' so.. go to Police station & give complaint instead of wasting time in me' now move.. I wanna go home'Angry

Rahul : I said' u r not anywhere.. So shut up and sit here'

Sameera entered inside the room' Pari saw her and was fuming in anger'Angry

Sameera : Rahul wat is this? What is Pari doing here?Confused

Pari : o' now Miss Sameera Handa, the innocent don't know why I'm here? (sarcastically)Angry

Rahul : shut up Pari'(to Sameera) Sam' don't worry now Maan will return Geet to us.. because his brother's to-be-wife is with us'

Sameera : but'

Rahul : no buts' Sam' it's been 3weeks without her' and this is only a way to bring Geet home'

Pari : Another drama'.. What u want now Miss Sameera Handa??? U got what u want' enough money and property' now why this Drama' say wat u want???

Rahul : just shut up' pari'

Pari : no.. I won't'. because of u all we suffered' our family suffered 'not any more'

Rahul : what u suffered is nothing compared to our damages caused by Khuranna family? Its nothing'.

Pari : ohh' really'.. Because of you two Veer papa had heart attack, Maan Veerji lost his faith in love... Our family lost happiness' because of u two'..

Rahul : because of Mr. Veer Singh Khurrana, I lost my mom ' my identity' everyone called me Ba****. Because of him, I lost my childhood. I lost'  (he broke down in tears)

Sameera came near him and put her hands on his shoulder' he looked at her with his tearful eyes and smiled' assuring he is ok. Pari was shocked hearing he is the illegitimate son of Veer Singh Khurrana, her future father-in-law' Rahul cont'

Rahul : he promised to marry my mom and impregnated her. He left my mom without saying anything.  She was an orphan' he knew no one was there for her'he just left ' (paused)

Sameera : Rahul'

Rahul : I'm k' I was born with a label Ba*****. I was a joke among other kids. They used to tease me everytime'...my mom died when I was just 9yrs'ranji kaka took me with him after my mom's death. Before she die she told me my dad's name.  Ranji kaka gave me food and sent me to school. But soon he was hospitalized due to heart attack and he died leaving me behind. I was all alone, no one to love me or take care. But then I was adopted by Mr. Armaan Handa & his wife Riddhima Handa' I was considered as a member of their family. They always treated me as a son' they sent me to School' I was happy with my life' I got a family' A dad, mom and a younger sister to love'Geet' they never treated me as an outsider'when I and Sam (Armaan's & Riddima's eldest daughter) fall in love with each other' they never kicked me out from their life nor they scold me. They accepted it. They told us that they are happy with it. I always thanked God for giving me such a family' but my so-called biological father never want his illegitimate son to have happiness. Again he took my happiness away from me. Dad and mom committed suicide when me and Sam where 19. We never knew what the reason behind it was. We hid our pain and tears for Geet's sake' she was a kid' we sent her to Boarding school' we did part time job for paying our fees and geet's' and for our daily bread. We struggled to live. But soon we came to know the truth ' it was not a suicide but they were murdered by him. I began to hate him more for taking all my happiness. So me & Sam decided to take revenge' to make him know how it hurts when u see someone u love is in pain' or when u lose someone who is close to u' but we thought to take 1st choice' we joined the same college where Maan was studying' made friendship with first and then made him fall for Sam. Made him believe that Sam was my Cousin Sister. I made him believe that she was innocent angel. We played with his feeling. But didn't succeed because of Geet's Accident. We needed money for her operation ' so we took his money and some property. But before we leave we needed to see Mr. Veer Singh Khurrana in pain' so we decided we'll leave him on the day of Maan's wedding with Sameera. But Maan somehow came to know about our plan and our entire plan was ruined. So we had to change our plan to hurt them' so I met my so-called biological father and told who I'm and what my life goal is. Also threaten him. He got an attack and was hospitalized. We fled with the money for geet's operation but before we reach Maan took Geet with him.  So' now we are left with only one option'. U'

Pari had tears in her eyes. But they heard someone from back weeping. They turned around and saw Myra (dev's twin sis ) . she was in tears.

Pari : Myra ' tum yaha ..

Myra: I followed Rahul ' when I saw him taking u in his car. (she turned to Rahul and said) toh' Aap hai Ranveer' Papa ka 1st beta??? Par aapka naam Rahul hai naa???

Rahul : my real name is Ranveer but I changed it' but how u know me???

Myra : I heard conversation between u and dad on that day. I heard u saying him that u are his son but I didn't see ur face' but u told dad ur name is Ranveer that day' and ur mom's name'

Rahul : Riaaha' her name was Riaaha'

Myra : I was shocked that day' I saw him begging u for ur forgiveness' and asked u to stay with him' I heard him say that he loved ur mom' and the marriage with my mom was a mistake' he never loved my mom' he married her because of dadaji's compulsion ' After u left, he had an take attack. (Paused)' he loves u very much Bhai'

Rahul : Don't call me bhai' I only have one sister' its Geet' And now' u both will stay here till I get my sister back'

Myra : but' Maan bhai is in U.S ' he don't have Geet with him' he is there for Business' he will never harm anyone' Even Dev & Vicky is with him'

Sameera : they are together' they took her away from me ' (crying)

Rahul : if anything happen to my sister' I will not leave u all Khurranas'

Myra: u r a khurrana too' u are my brother' don't forget that'

Rahul : don't u dare call me brother'I'm Rahul Handa'Son of Armaan Handa' that's my identity'now call ur brother and say him to come here with Geet'

Pari : Myra didi' don't do it' he is lying'how can Maan veerji take geet with him? He always respect Women'

Myra : Pari' we have to' we need to find the truth'

Pre-cap : A big shock for Sameera, Rahul and for Khurranas'


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awesome part............. precap is interesting... cant wait  to read the next part........... plzzz update soon

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Nice update.Hope geet gets cured early.I think so maan may marry geet and this may be the shock .

Please update now soon i can't wait for the next update.
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okay! One mystry reaveiled but another come out!! Wht is the shock they all are gonna hv??? I mean ur precap meant everybody, right?

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