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PART 12 A

 

Maan was lost in her smile and excitement. He was happy to know that she liked him and also wanted a baby like him. She saw him staring at her and her cheeks turned into light pink shade. He saw this and smirked. He laid her on the bed and lay beside her. He kissed her lips and put his hand around her waist. She put her head on his chest and hands around him. They slept like that cuddling together.

 

MORNING

 

Maan woke up with a smile on his face. He looked at Geet who was sleeping beside him with her head on his chest and hands around his waist. He smiled seeing her cuddled closer to him. She was looking like a baby angel. He smiled and kissed her forehead.

 

Maan : Geetu utho naa' its morning

 

Geet : sone dho naa

 

Maan : Jaan wake up'

 

Geet : Hmmm

 

Saying this Geet cuddled more closely to him. He smiled seeing this.

 

Flashback (at the time of pregnancy)

NIGHT

 

Geet was cuddling close to him and Maan was looking at her lovingly. She opened his eyes and smiled at him. He too smiled at her and gave a peck on her lips. Suddenly Geet said something which made him shock.

Geet : I want Chocolate Ice-Cream  from Dippin's Chocolate Tree.  NOW.

 

Maan : Kya??

 

Geet : Haan'

 

Maan : But Geetu, its late night. It will be closed.

 

Geet : if you don't wanna come, just say it. I'll go out.

 

Maan : OK Geet. Give me 1 min to wear my vest at least.

 

Geet : Hurry up.

 

Maan made Geet wear jacket and made her sit in his car. They drove to Dippin's Chocolate Tree but it was about to close. But Maan's one word made the already closed Kitchen re-open. He order special Chocolate Ice-Cream with extra Chip and cream. When the order came, she grabbed it and started eating like a small child. He saw this and was smiling. Ice-cream was all over her face which tempted him to lick off from her face but he controlled it and wiped it off with a tissue.

 

                    

 

Chocolate Ice-Cream  

 

After having Chocolate Ice-Cream, she was really happy. She just gave him a small peck on his lips which gave him a big shock. Because Geet never kissed on his lips. He was really happy and carried her back to the car. When they reached home, she threw her jacket off and jumped on bed. Maan came back running and saw her jumping on the bed like a kid. But when she saw him, she just stopped jumping and lay on bed like a good girl. He just smiled and took off his shirt and vest and joined her. She snuggled closer to him.

 

Geet : When will baby come? I want baby to come fast so that I can go and see Di.

 

Maan : (ST) OMG not again.

 

Geet : aap sun rahi ho naa?

 

Maan : Geet' Baby will come soon. Now sleep.

 

Geet : Nahi' I'm not feeling sleepy. I wanna see TV.

 

Maan : But its late Geetu.

Geet : Just 10 mins. Please Please (Making baby face which made Maan melt)

 

Maan : OK. But only 10 mins.

 

Geet : Thank You

 

She again kissed his lips. Maan was having shock after shock. He then got up and switched on TV in their room.

 

 

Maneet Room TV

 

 

Cont'

 

 

Note:Feeling sleepy yaar. Will continue later'. Part B will be big one' Promise.

Edited by Ash534 - 12 years ago
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Waiting For It ...
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Loved It... It Was Brilliant ... 😛😛
Loved it All ...
I thought the flashback was adoreable...😆😆
loved they way he remembered their past..
it was soo sweet... 😳😳
can't wait for maan and Geet to finally become one xx 😊😊😊
Please Continue x
Edited by Nazmaa - 12 years ago
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nice and lovely

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