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monaya_sajan IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 9:49am | IP Logged
outstanding yaar...........
but plz do 1 thing ...........from next tym if u give concept 1st n den actual update a few days l8r, edit d concept n continue der...yaar continuity mein prob hota hain..........baaki superb...
hope u dont mind dis small little piece of my advice...........

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Oh palak i luv u swty.
ur a sW*Hrt dear,luv d os.
it ws superb,awsm ,fantastic.
it ws totaly totaly different baby.
it ws out of dis world.
today ur os shws dat luv has no boundaries.
amazing yar,it ws out of dis wrld.
u rck jaan.
plz plz do write mre os swty.
luv u
vritika

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
tht was soooooooooo niceeeeeeee

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
awesomeeee os yaar loved it it was beautiful do write more

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
cant believe it
im 2 sad
u r 2 gud
luv it alot
it was superb 
cant say anything

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1gunjan7

Hey Dear Palak OMG!! Wow!! what an Awesome n beautifull Story ....just superb Os dearClap...Very well written Os , Amazing and Excellent DialoguesThumbs UpClap......the story is rocking .......Everything from Hospital scene to Samrat coming to save n help his love Gunjan 2 Saving her from his fake parents to Gunjan wanting 2 be with samrat and loving him so much that even after finding out he is a vampire She still loves him and wants to spend her whole life with him Each n everything in Your Os was Fantastic...Clap...even the End or should I say Beginning of Sajans new life in another world everything was Just SuperbClapClap...................Mindblowing piece of Work Palak .............ClapClap

Thanks 4 Pm Hugand Dear u r a very good writerThumbs Up So plss Do write More SS n OS PALAKSmile....................

And Dear one more thing If u donot mind In UR THIS OS U have By Mistake in Many PLACES written the Character name As MOHIT when it should have been SAMRAT....Beginning mein Gunjan part mein Mohit mentioned many times....HERE is One  place ----------------------------
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scene shifts to hospital where gunjan is left alone in the icu and seeing the machines she gets scared..and asks how did this happen?and her head starts aching..n then she gets flashbacks as to how she was finding MOHIT"......plss do change it 2 Samrat...Smile..I hope U didnt mind me pointing this out 2 U Dear............

AND dear Do write more Os n Ss n plss Pm me whenever u write another New SS or Os......And one more thing palak the song Selection for ur os is SuperbClap..Takatey rehtey tujh sanj savery is a lovely song ..Clap..I Even imagined Sajan in this song while reading ur Os and I am sure Sajan would have looked Droolable in this Song Day Dreaming...they would have looked lovelyClap....................once again Fabulous and Superb Os ..............ClapClap..........

Love GunjanSmile..........



wowww a very long comment..thanks..that means u ve gt avery big heart..lol..every1 has gt...soo i ve made the changes sweety..thanks soo much for commentingggggggggSmile

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
awesome os totally loved it
very beautifulEmbarrassed

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
it was awesome... :)
Pleas post ahead... :)

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