SG and MN love story..(FF) - Page 8

Posted: 13 years ago
ayeshoo u neav told me bout this FF 
THNAK GOD mujhe patta chal gaya its so awesome
but 1 gthing i didnt like was part 1 nd 2 ws so short
nd second of all yaar party itni boring aur mayur ki meeting main kuch toh honna chahiye tha itni kaam talkingsss yaar but next time zaroor karna nd next time dinner ke alag alag scene bhi dikhana lyk sayank scene mayur nd sajan scene aloone somewhere alone in da house jaise sajan or else mayur kissi bhanne se bathroom or else kahee aur challe jayee toh please next time tohra fun hunna chahiye waise barra mazaa aya that woh 4 ek dosre ke barre main soch rahee the nd nupur kame to office just for mayank shooo shweet nd next time do PM
nd add me in PM list nd next time PM zaroor karna 
if you hve any other FF's ur writing den do PM those too or next time zaroor yeh walla PM karna ill comment for sure šŸ˜Š
LUVED IT!!!!!!
amazing FF ayeshoo
Luv sanaya
Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeeeee updt aishu loved it mayur ki first meeting main they started thinking about each 4 og them were thinking about each other soo cool nupur wnt to office 4 mayank continue soon


Posted: 13 years ago

hey ayesha...the part was so cute.....

all the 4 thinkin abt eachother...awwwww........

waiting for nxt part..........do cont soon....thnx for d pm!šŸ˜›

Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous update.....cont soon
Posted: 13 years ago
tht was soooooooooooooo awesome love it
Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update.....
this reminded me abt the song dance pe chance marle.. oh soniyaa dance pe chance maarle
šŸ‘ very well done
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely !!!!!!
mn meet bina ladai great !!!!
nupur ke kya irade hai .........šŸ˜‰
amazing , waiting for the next part .........
Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry! Guys! Maine apna ff 2 days update nhi kya...beacuse i was busy.. 
now here is my part 4.. SaYank at GunUr home..!!!
Enjoy..

It was Night
Samrat called Mayank..
S:Hi Mayu!
M:Hi Sam!
S:Sun! Tu khud araha hai??? Ya mein pick karo???
M: Tu Pick karle..
S:Thek hai! I'll be there at ur home in 30 mins..
M:30 mins???
S:Haan! Abhi ready honay ja raha hon..kyun? kya hua???
M: Mein already ready hon..
S:Ohh! Ab tu mera wait kar..
M:Chal thek hai byee!
S:Byee!
GuNur home!
G:Di tumne khana bana lia???
N:haan bas..sweet dish mein gajar ka halwa rehta hai..
G:Ohh! Tum ready ho jao.. mein halwa bana deti hon..
N:Thek hai!
G:šŸ˜Š
Nupur went to change..and Gunjan was making Halwa..
SaYank Scene 
M: Ye Sam kaha reh gaya??? he tried to call Sam..But he wasn't picking the call..
M:Ufffoo! Sam call bhi pick nhi kar raha..
At that time Samrat came.. Mayank came out..
M:Tu agaya.. šŸ˜” 
Mayank was really in anger.. bcox Samrat came in 1 hr..šŸ˜†
S:Haan! wo sorry!
M: Mein kbse ready tha..or tera intezar kar raha tha..
S:Sorry..Tu intana bekaarar kyun ho raha hain? Nupur se milna hai???
Samrat was in a mood to tease Mayank..
M:Shut up! Tu mujhe Nupur k name se tease kyun kar raha hai???
S:Nhi..wo tere face se pata chal raha hai k tujhe Nupur se milna hai..
M:Dekh bahut hogaya..Mein tujhe Gunjan k name se tease karoga..
S:Sorry! Aj toh Nupur tujhe pe fida ho jayegi..  Tu itana handsome lag raha hai..
M:Car rokh! mein khud chala jaoga..
S:Ohh! Sorry! Mayu! Tu bhi na bahut saddu hai! Mazag bhi nhi samjhta..
SaYank reach GuNur home..
SaYank rang da bell..
Gunjan comes and opens the door..
G:Hi!!
S:Hi!
GšŸ˜Š..Hi Mayank..
M:Hi!
G: Come inside..
Nupur was shouting in washroom..She don't knw that SaYank came to they home.. 
N:Gunjan kaha hai tu??? Mein apna dress bahar room bhool gaye..
G:Tum log betho..Mein ati hon..
SaYank sat in the sofa..
G:Di kya hua??? Ahista bolo..Samrat or Mayank agaye hai..
N:Ohhh! tu ne mujhe bataya kyun nhi???
G:Diii! kaise batati ..tum washroom mein thi..
N:Acha Sorry..!! mujhe meray clothes doh..bed pe hai..
Gunjan gave da dress to Nupur..
G:Ye lo di!
N:Thnx!
Nupur is ready and she comes out of the washroom..
G: wow..Di.. Asuall ur looking beautiful..
N:Thanx! meri pyaari behan tu bhi kafi pyaari lag rahi hai..šŸ˜Š
G:šŸ˜³
N: Ab bahar chale..
SaYank was talking..
M: Kaha hai ye log?? ab tak nhi aye.
S:Mayu..Chill ajaye gi.. i understanf tujhe Nupur se milna hai..intezar nhi ho raha..
M:Tu phr se shuru hogaya..
GuNur came out of the room..
N:Hi guys!
SaYank:Hi..
N: Tum log betho..Mein abhi ati hon..
Nupur said slowly on Gunjan ear.. 'Chal meray sath'
G:Kaha???
N:Tere sasural! Arey un dono ko khana nhi dena..kya wo dono aise hi bethe rahey gey..
G:Sorry! 
GuNur:Hum abhi atey hai..
SaYank:Okie!
GuNur went in the kitchen..
n: Gunjan! tu ne gajar ka halwa bana lia???
G: Haan di! 
Now GuNur kept the dinner in table..
GuNur: Khana ready hai..
GuNur and SaYank was sitting on the dinning table..
They all had dinner..and had alot of fun..
by mistake Nupur throw the bowl of kheer on Mayank..
N:Ohh sorry..
M:It's okie!
N: Ao mein tumhe washroom le chalti hon...
M: Thek hai..

Okie! guys!! Thats it for today..
Precap:SG and MN talk in alone..šŸ˜‰
Do comment and tell me.. How was my part 4..

Love Ayesha šŸ¤—




Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx Guys! for ur lovely comments..
love u all..
Ayesha šŸ¤—
Edited by Ayesha_LuvSaJan - 13 years ago

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