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suggest me the name of this sajan ss

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 1:47am | IP Logged
hey frnz nw a days i m missing my sajan a lot so i started an ss on sajan .....
its ss so i didnt write character sketch....  i knw m also writing 2 ffs but dont worry i will
update ffs n ss regulerly.....
here is the part read it n do comment hwz it..... n also tell me should i cont or nt...........
n plz suggest me a name of this ss...............

part 1


A girl was sitting on the bench in airport of London....she was looking dam happy.... she wore spects...
And a januable smile was playing on her lips..... she was waiting for her flight.....
she is non other then our Gunjan .... Gunjan Bhushan nope nt Gunjan bhushan
she is nw Dr. Gunjan BHushan today she completed her practice n nw she is doctor...
Dr. Gunjan Bhushan....

Gunjan's POV:
aaj me bahut khush hu  sirf is liye nahi ki mene bauji ka sapna pura kar diya Dr banke .....
par is liye hu ki aaaj me 5 saal baad wapas ja rahi hu apne city me mumbaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
mera saher.......... jaha mere zindgi ki haseen yuadein juri haiiiiiiiii... jise me kabhi nahi bhl
sakti... meri di nupur i really missed her.....mere frndzzz mayank ops also jiju...
benji dia adhiraj suhani aur ........ aur uday bhaiya she said all these with a smile aur SAMRAT....
she stopped
smiling.... sabse jyada muje khushi is baat ki haiii ki me samrat se milungi... me dekhna chahti
hu ki samrat kaisa haiii..??? 5 saal ho gaye samrat ko nahi dekha aur na hi use baaat ki haiii
kya aaj bhi wo waisa hi hoga wahi cute sa chehra... wahi januable smile jise dekhne ke liye me
kuch bhi kar sakti hu.. wahi flirt... wahi basket ball champ.. wahi sabka fav.... aur wahi mera best
frnd..... aur sayad mera pehla adhura py...... a tear came out frm her eyes n she wiped it n smiled
mene apne aapko promise kiya tha ki me is baat ko kabhi yaad nahi karungi....... bas samrat
me ek baar mumbai  aa jau fir me tumse bahut saari baate karungi.. nahi nahi me use bilkul
bhi baat nahi karungi 5 saal me ek baar bhi muje call nahi kiya ..sayad wo muje bhul gaya haii
nahi aisa kaise ho sakta haiii samrat aur apni chashmish ko bhul jaye that's not possible..
wo to chahta hi nahi tha ki me london jau.... par me janti thi ki agar me samrat se dur nahi gai
to use uska pyar kabhi nahi milta ... me janti hu wo apne pyar ke sath khush hoga ..
ha shuru shuru me muje miss kiya hoga meri itni aadat jo thi koi bhi kaam mere bagair nahi
hota tha.. but sayad dhire dhire wo muje bhul gaya hoga aur ab sayad use meri aadat bhi nahi
hogi....  n smiled bas dekhna chahti hu samrat me tume.....
then she heard announcement n came out frm her thought... n she was really happy
tha she was goig to meet her samrat...sry her best frnd samrat (dont wry he will be her soon)..
she took out her mobile n called..................

on other side A bubbly girl was irritating her hubby n just then her cell rang.... she saw gunjan
was flashing ... she was exited seeing this n smiling  so she immidetly pick it up ...
Girl:hello
G:hello diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii (she was also damn happy)
yes she was nupur n mayank..........
N:hello gunjan tuuuuuuuuuuu kaisi haiii tu??? aur kya kar rahi haii muje bata na bada maza a
raha hoga na waha london me????
G:di sans to lo me bilkul thik hu ... bas abhi airport par hu ... aur yaha itna bhi maza nahi aa raha
haii kyunki mere frndzz jo yaha nahiii haiii......
N:tu airport pe???? aksd confusinglyyyyyy
G:wo di actually me aap sabko mumbai aa ke surprise dena chahti thi mene khud hi exitement
me bol diya n make a sad face.......
N:kya tu mumbai aa rahi haiiiiiiiiiiiiii?????????????????????
G:haa di abhi ki flight se aur jiju kaise haii aur baaki sab???
N:mera kya haii gunjan tu to janti haiii mera pati ko waisa ke waisa hi haiii sadu...
aur diya aur benji wese hi haiiii jaise pehle the aur adhiraj n suhani bhi bilkul thik waise hi haii
aur uday bhaiya wese hi bhukkhad haii  aur......... but she stopped........ n she became sad......
G:kya hua di aap aur chup kyu ho gayi???? Expresss itni jaldi ruk kaise gayi??? ha said teasinly
N:kuch nahi bas aise hi wo mayank kitchen me gaya na to bas use hi dekh rahi thi...
tu bata tu kaise hai???
G:me to thik hu.... aur aap ne sabke bareme bataya par samrat ke baareme nahi bataya dii
wo kaisa haiii ??? use bol dena me use baat bhi nahi karni wali 5 saal me muje
bhul hi gaya haiii....
hearing these naupur lost in thoughts................
N(in mind):kaise batau gunjan ki samrat bilkul bhiu thik nahi haiii... wo ab pehle jaise hasta
khelta samrat nahi raha ..uske sath jo hua agar tuje pata chal gaya to tu hum mese kisi ki
maaf nahi karengi.... aur hum tuje kabhi pata nahi chalne dunge ki wo kaha haii.....
kyunki agar tuje pata chal gaya ki wo kaha haiii aur kis haalat me haiii ...to tu mar hi jayegiiiii
tu sue is tarah nahi dekh payegi.... me janti hu ki tu samrat se kitna pyar karti haiii ... is liye
to 5 saal me kya hua tume pata nahi chalne diya.... aur tumhari bhi bhalayi isi me haiii ki tu
samrat se na mil..........
gunjan was waiting for her reply
G:diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kaha kho gayi?????????/
N:nahi wo bas kahi nahiii....
G:ab to batao samrat kaisa haii??/
N:gunjan wo ye dekh mayank aa gaya le use baat kar???
(in mind)sry gunjan me samrat ke baareme tuje kuch nahi bata sakti)
just at that time mayank again came to the room n nupur gave him phone...
M:hey saali ji kaisi haiii aap ???? wese aap meri shaadi me nahi aayi thi to uski aapko saza
jarur milengiiii.
G:hello jiju me bilkul thik hu...... aur aap jante the na ki mera aana possible hi nahi tha....
M:ha wo to haiiii aur batao....
G:bas kuch nahi me aaj mumbai aa rahi hu...
M:kya aaj?" n also lost in thoughtssssssss
in mind) ye yaha aa ke hi samrat ke baareme puchengi hum kya jawab denge????/
G:jiju ab aap kaha kho gaye????????
she again heard announcement
G:jiju me chahti hu meri flight ka time ho gaya haiii mumbai aake milti hu.....
M:haa bbye we are waiting.......
then he cut the call... n looked at nupur who was totally loost in her thoughts
he went to her n placed his hand on her shoulder..... nupur came out of thoughts

N:mayank usne fir se samrat ke baareme pucha tha.......
M:janta hu tumhaer chehre ka rang dekhke muje pata chal gaya
N:mayank phone pe to mene baat taal di par wo to ab mumbai aane walii haiii
hum 5 saal se juth bol rahe haiiiiiii.
M:janta hu nupur par ab humare liye aur bhi muskil hoga use face to face hum juth nahi
bol payenge tum to janti ho gunjan ko ....
N:ha mayank me janti hu wo aate hi samrat ke baaareme puchegi...
M:kitne dino tak chupayenge hum nupur .... ki samrat ab...... use ab chupana muskil hoga
N:par hum try to kar sakte haiii na tum jante ho ki agar gunjan ko samrat ke baareme pata
chal gaya to kya hoga???
M:janta hu is liye pehli baar mene gunjan se juth bol raha hu.....
N:ab kya kare???
M:sabse pehle gang ko yaha bulate haiiiiiii
N:ha thik haiiii
Mayank called every1....... on other side gunjan's plane took offffff..........
after an hour.... every1 reached mayank's house.....

Su:hey mayank hey nupur
M:suhani abhi hii hello karne ha waqt nahi haiiiii
U:ise kya hua nupur subah subah tea nahi pee kya???? agar nahi pi to muje de do....
M:shut up uday mene yaha tum logo  ko naste pe nahi bulaya serious baat karni haiii
B:kya bbattt haiii mayank tum itne seroiusssssss
N:wo benji gunjan ka phone aaya tha wo abhi ki flight se mumbai aa rahi haiii????
All:kya??????????????????????????????????????????
M:ha aur wo samrat ke baareme bhi puch rahi thi.......
D:par mayank sammy to....
M:janta hu dia bas ab ye soch na haiii ki ab hume kya karna haiiii kyunki ab gunjan yaha hogi
aur hum use jyada der tak nahi kuch bhi chupa sakte....
A:par mayank hum sab samrat ki haalat jante haiii....
Su:aur jo bhai ki haalat haii agar gunjan ne dekhli to???? n she started to sry...........
N:suhani plzz ro mat........
D:ha suhani abhi hume gunjan ke baareme sochna haiii ki use kya kahenge jab wo samrat ko
nahi dekhegi........
N:wo aate hi piuchegi samrat kaha haiii muje use milna haii......
U:to isme konsi badi baat haiii use bol dena ki samrat to........
B:shut up udayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy angrily...
A:hum sab jante haii ki samrat jis halat me haiii us halat me hum gunjan ko nahi bata sakte...
M:aur hum ye bhi jante haiii ki gunjan samrat se kitna pyar karti thi... sirf samrat nahi janta tha...
aur wo london bhi samrat ki khushi ke liye hi to gayi thi......
D:gr88 mayank... jis wajase 5 saal pehle gunjan samrat se dur gayi thi hum wahi wajah
batayenge aur gunjan ko use dur rakhengeeeeeeeee......
N:ha hum use kahenge ki samrat ki khushi ke liye use dur rehh......
A:ha ye thik rahega.......
M:par kabhi na kabhi to use pata chalega ki ab kuch pehle jaisa nahi raha hum sab ne use juth
bola haii...
Su:par mayank abhi ke liye to hum juth bol sakte haii na baad me kuch aur soch lenge...
N:haa mayank
n then every1 lost in thoughtssssssssssssss
their life of college before 5 years n during 5 years........
on other side gunjan was in plane n also smiling dat she is goig to meet samrat n frdss

Kaha haiiii samrat??? kyu 5 saal se sab use juth bol rahe haii???? kya gunjan samrat ko
kabhi dhundh payegi????? kya samrat gunjan kabhi mil payenge??????
kya kabhi gunjan ka pehla adhura pyar pura ho payega????

hey its first part hope you all like it....
if u like it then hit the like button n do long comment okkkkkkkkkkk
m waiting 4 ur comment

Love'
Radhi...Wink

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 2:15am | IP Logged
great concept !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap
continue soon....
name......
what about 'hamari adhuri kahani'????
actually i m very bad at selecting name Embarrassed

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 2:27am | IP Logged
amazinggggggggggggggg start dear
omggggggggggggggg
how can i wait for this one yar
its damn intreresting
m in love with it
 
itnaaaaaa suspense
plzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooon
 
n about name
mujh sy to mt hy pocho yar
m really bad in this =((
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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 3:50am | IP Logged
  Radhika, I' ve replied in your your similar thread in the FanFiction Forum.....! I have also suggested some good names. Do check.
 
 Ekta


Edited by Sajan_Ekta - 17 December 2010 at 4:16am
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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 358674

great concept !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap
continue soon....
name......
what about 'hamari adhuri kahani'????
actually i m very bad at selecting name Embarrassed


nice work Clap n yes i agree hamari adhoori kahani z perfect name

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 4:39am | IP Logged
interesting!!!
though i have my own guesses...ur maintaining suspense very well


edit: was listening to some songs...so, i got this in my mind
as this story is very much within Mumbai n has past included...why not "Once upon a time in Mumbai"


Edited by kavya.b - 17 December 2010 at 4:45am
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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 5:38am | IP Logged
this SS's concept is unique and showed first phase that gun is in one sided love with samrat and i guess samrat would be in love with her but never realized it when she was with him and with concept ppl  r hiding sam's condition means here true and unconditional love will lead them to reunite so why not unconditional love 

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Posted: 17 December 2010 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Awesome Start !! Clap
I Have Some Names In My Mind :

 
- " Every Heartbeat "

 - " Dangerously In Love "  LOL

 -  "Cant Lose What YOU Never Had "

 - " Breathless Without You
" Day Dreaming

 - " A Whole New World "


These Name Was SOME Of Them !!
Hope YOU Like Them Jee =)) Embarrassed
Add Me To PM List Dear . . .
Continue Soon < 3 ! Embarrassed



Edited by SaJan_Sana4ever - 17 December 2010 at 6:33am

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