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My Last Desire... Sajan ss !!! (Complited) (Page 96)

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
THANKS for d PM dear! i just love ds part,pls continue soon

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool_tuli

OMGG radhi... amazing update... a cute one... m soo happy that finally sajan confessed their love... But poor Gunjan she has to face sum troubles now...
Lez c wat happens next... m waiting for d next part... plsss update this one soon hun...
Overall... fattang update... loved it allooot Hug


hey tuli thnk u so much for beautiful cmmnt...

love u jaana
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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ar_sajan4evr

heyyy radhiiiBig smile

lovelyyy update
esp sajans convo n sams proposal...EmbarrassedWink
bt d end part was interstnggg
cont sooon dis tym n thnx 4 d pm


Hey richu thnk u so much yaar...

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gunurlove

Very Nice Part Radhi...
Sajan love Confession Was AWESOME...very Cute scene...Embarrassed
Lovely update...now everything is fine...
waiting for the next part...n revealing Gunjan n Shashank mystery...
plz update soon...


hey rija thnks for beautiful cmmnt..

btw next part me mystry reveal ho jaayegi...

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Hey frnds here is the part of my last desire...
n its the last part... here is the part hope u
like it,, thoda boring haii bt plzz bear with it...
thnks to all frnds who liked my story...

thnk u so much guysss



PART 20




Gunjan:"aapka Khoon nahi hu matlab?"

Bauji:matlab ye ki aaj ke baad tum us paagal se
shaadi karne ke khawab chhod do warna tumhaara is
ghar se bahar jaana muskil ho jaayega...

said arrogently...


Gunjan:par bauji... bt he left...
n Gunjan fell on floor n cried her heart out..
hearing her cry Nupur came to her...

Nupur:Gunjan kya hua tuje tu aise kyu ro rahi hai???
socked to see her like this...
Gunjan hugged her n sobbed...

Gunjan:diii bauji ne meri or Samrat ki shaadi ke
liye mana kar diya...

Nupur:kya ?? par kyu Gunjan??? tum or Samrat ek
dusre se pyar karte ho...fir...

Gunjan:Bauji ko lagta haiii ki Samrat paagal haii
or wo meri shaadi use nahi karwana chahte...

Nupur:Gunjan tu ro mat sab thik ho jaayega...

Gunjan:kuch thik nahi hoga dii mein Samrat ke bina
nahi jee sakti.. dii.. muje Samrat ke paas jaana
haii...

Nupur:accha chal uth hum Samrat ke paas chalte haii.

n then both went to Samrat's home.. Samrat
opened the door..n as soon as Gunjan saw samrat
hugged him tightly... n started to cry...

Samrat:Chashmish kya hua?? aise kyu ro rahi ho???

Gunjan:Samrat i love u Samrat...

Samrat:to tum is liye ro rahi ho coz u love me..

Gunjan:shut up Samrat...

Samrat:accha chalo pehle andar chalo...
both broke the hug n took her in... n Saw dr.Shashank
was also there...

Dr.shashank saw her crying n socked to see her like
this..

Dr.shashank:Gunjan kya hua beta????
asked in shoft tone...Gunjan cried more...

Gunjan:wo bauji ne...

Samrat:kya kaha bauji ne??? aaj tum humaari shaadi
ki baat karne wali thi na????

Gunjan:Bauji ne humari shaadi ke liye mana kar
diya...

Samrat:kyaa??? par kyu???

she again hugged him n sobbed...

Shashank:Gunjan hua kya sab kuch bataao muje..

Gunjan narreted everything...

Gunjan:Bauji ne ye bhi keh diya ki mein unka khoon
nahi hu... meine kya galti ki ..??? sirf apne
pyar ko paana hi to chahti hu...

shashank put his hand on her head...

SHashank:jaanti hu mein yaha kyu aaya hu??? kyunki
Samrat ne muje phone kar ke tum dono ke baareme'
bataya tha... or tum dono ki shaadi hogi jarur
hogi...

Gunjan:par bauji kabhi nahi maanenge...

Samrat:par Chashmish...

"wo thik keh rahi haii mein kabhi nahi maanuga."

every1 turned n saw bauji was standing at door...

Mayank:par kyu Bauji ??? Samrat or Gunjan ek dusre
se pyar karte haii...

Bauji came to middle.. n also socked to see
Shashank there...

Bauji:Shashank tum?????? socked...

"Shashank: haa mein...

Bauji:tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??? he asked with
a scrared n strict tone...

Shashank:wahi jo bahut saal pehle karna chahiye
tha...

every1 were confused at their convo...

Bauji:Gunjan tum chalo... held her hand n abt to
drag...

Gunjan:bauji mein aap ke sath nahi aaungiii
mein yahi rahungii Samrat ke paas... mein kisi or
se shaadi nahi karungiii...

Bauji:chal meine kaha na...
n again draged her... bt Gunjan pullled her hand
jerk...

Gunjan:meine kaha na mein nahi aaungii...

Bauji slaped her...

Shashank:Shashiii
he shouted at bauji...

Shashank:tumhaari himmat kaise huyi meri beri par
hath uthane ki,...???? Shashank asked in
angry tone... n went to Gunjan who held her cheek
with her hand while crying badly...bt when she
heard shashank's words she lifted her head to see
Shashank... n totally socked...

Bauji was abt to speak bt Shashank cut him...

Shashank :ek lafz nahi shashi ...ek shabd nahi...
meri hi aakho ke samne meri beti ko maarne ki
tumhaari himmat kaise huyii... kya is liye tum
meri beti ko mujse le gaye the...

asked angrily...
when Gunjan Nupur n Samrat was damn socked...

Shashi:tumhaati beti is liye tumse le gaya tha
kyunki tumne meri biwi baccho ko mujse cheen
liya the...

matched his voice...
Gunjan slowly went to bauji...

Gunjan:kya mein aapki beti nahu hu...? said while
stammering...

Bauji:agar hoti to kabhi mere khilaaf jaane ki
koshish nahi karti... tum to is Dr. Shashank ki
beti ho...padma or shashank Gupta ki beti...


every1 were hell socked.. Gunjan took her steps
back...Samrat saw her broken.. n went to her n held
her...

Samrat:Chashmish... Gunjan turned n looked at
Shashank...n slowly went to him...


Gunjan:kya sach haii sir ki mein aapki beti hu...??
Gunjan asked in sock state...
Shaashank just nodded...

Gunjan:aisa kaise ho sakta... mein to bachapan se
mere bauji ke paas rahi hu...wo mere bauji haii..
wo mere pita haii.. to fir mein aapki beti kaise
hosakti hu...

Shashank:kyunki isne tumhe mujse cheen liya tha...
shashanksaid angrily while pointing at him...
Shashank started to cry...

Shashank:pata nahi tha ki is tarah muje apni beti
ko sacchai batani padegi ki wo meri beti hai...
ki is insaan ne mujse chheen liya tha...

Gunjan:muje aapse cheen liya par kyu...sir kyu
aisa kiya... ???

Shashank:shashi or mein bahut acche dost hua karte
the.. hum ne college bhi sath kiya or padma
ot tumhaari mom bhi college ki dost thi... hum
charo bahut khush the.. aur fir shashi ke ghar
me Nupur ka janam hua to... hum sab khushi ke
jhum uthe... par padma ...use bhi apna khud ka
baccha chahiye... bahut udaas rehti thi wo...
or fir nupur ke janam ke 2 saal baad pata chala ki
padma maa banane wali haii humare ghar khushi aane
haiii... humne shashi ke ghar jaa kar khush khabari
sunaayi or waha jaa kar pata chala ki bhabhi ji
bhi maa banane wali haii... to hmaari khushi dugni
ho gayi..samay ke chalte hum sabse jyada karib aa
gaye... or fir pata chala ki padma ko beti hone
wali haii or bhabhi ji ko ladkaa... shashi ke ghar
ka waris tha wo... dono ko ek sath hospital laaya
gaya... or tab us waqt raat ka time tha or koi
doctor available nahi tha... or padma use kisi bhi
haal mein uski beti chahiye thi.. or shashi use
kisi bhi haal me uska beta chahiye tha... par
meine socha ki pehle padma ki delivery kar ke
mein bhabhiji ki karunga... par padma ki delivery
me bahut complications the... is ;iye time
lag gaya.. par fir bhi meine bahut koshish karke
apne hath me apni angel ko pakda... it was the
best moment of my life.. pari lag rahi thi tu ...
par uske baad jaldi se meine bhabhi ji ki delivery
karne gaya...or delivery me kuch galti ki wajase
bhabhi ji or uska baccha dono marr gaye...
jab shashi ko ye pata chala ki dono marr chuke
haii or humaare ghar beti huyi haiii... or usme
meri galti thi... meine use kaha ki apni galti
sudharne ke liye or maafi ke liye kya kar sakta hu
to usne kaha ki mein tumhe use saup du... par
mein ek baap tha aisa kaise kar sakta tha padma ko
kya jawab deta...??? to meine use bahut samjaa ne
ki koshish ki par wo nahi maana or wo tumhe
cheen kar le gaya... padma toot gayi... or wo
tumhe le kar morena chala gaya uske ghar... koi
nahi jaanta tha ki wo kaha haii...fir kuch saal
baad pata chala ki padma kabhi maa nai ban sakti
haii wo aaj bhi mujse naraz haiii or baar baar apni
beti ko use wapas laane ki zidd karti haii... padma
ki tabiyat bigad ne lagi is liye mein use hamesha
ke liye london le gaya...fir jab london
mein tum muje mili to muje pata chala ki tum meri
beti ho.. par tumhaari aakh me meine shashi ke
liye pyaar dekha tha.. uska sapna tum pura karne
aayi thi...is liye mein sirf anjaan ban kar tumhe
apne paas rakhne laga...or padmaa ko meine apni
bahen ke waha bhej diya tha.. kyunki mein jaanta
tha agar padmaa ko pata chal gaya ki tum humari
beti ho to wo tumhe kisi bhi tarah paane ki koshish
karti.. 2 saal baad use shaq hone laga ki mein
humari beti ke baare me kuch janta hu or wo kai
baar london ke hospital ki visit bhi le chuki haii..
is liye fir mein use mumbai le aaya... or meine
sunjeevni join karli... or 3 saal baad tum bhi
india wapas aa gayi apne bauji ka sapna pura karke..


Shashank sobbed...

"aur aage ki kahani tum jaanti ho bacchi ..."

Shashank said while sobbing...

"aapne kyu kabhi mujse nahi kaha ki aap mere papa
haiii... u r my daddy my papa..."
GUnjan said while plcing her hand on his shoulder..

"kyunki tumhaai baateon mein apne bauji ke liya
bahut pyar dekha tha.. or mein apni beti ko ye
nahi batana chahta tha ki wo ek dhokha haii wo
toot jaati..."

GUnjan n shashank hugged eachother.. n while
sobbing badly...

then GUnjan slowly went to bauji...

"aap ne kyu aisa kiya bauji...?? nahi bauji nahi
mr Shashi Bhushan.. aapne kyu ek baap se apni
beti ko cheen liya...muje apne papa se dur kyu
kar diya kyu muje juth kaha ki aap mere papa ho
aur meri maa marr chuki haii... jab ki aap mere
papa the hi nahi or meri maa zinda haiii...kyu
kiya aapne aisa.. kya mila aapko,..."
Gunjan nw totally broken...

"badla lena chahta tha mein... use meri biwi ko
cheen liya kyunki wo apni biwi ke sath tha...
usne mere ghar ke waris ko cheen liya tha ...
meine aulaad ke badle aulaad hi to mangi thi kya
gunaah kiya meine..."
Shashi said with out any shame...

"kya Gunaah kiya??? aapne ek baap ko apni lauti
beti se door kar diya ek maa ko itne saal tadpaaya.
bacchi hone ke baujud ek maa ko apne bacche ke
liye tarsaaya... ye gunaah kiya aapne ki mujse
mere papa cheen liye meri maa cheen li aap ne...
aap ke paas to nupur di thi na??? fir fir kyu...??
mere mummy papa ke paas to sirf me hi thi or aapne
use bhi cheen liye... mein aap ko kabhi maaf nahi
karungi..aaj tak meine aapka pyar paane ke liye
aapko bhagwan ki tarah puja.. aapka hukam sar aakho
par rakha.. aapka sapna mera sapna banaya.. aapne
jo dayra banaya tha uske bahar kabhi kadam nahi
rakha... par fir pata chala ki ye to dhoka tha ek
badlaa... kabhi maaf nahi karungi mein
aap ko..."

Samrat went to her n made her hugg... n sobbed
badly...

"Gunjan" shashi was abt to touch her...

"dur raho mujse mein aapki beti nahi hu... chale
jaao aap yaha se..."
n again hugged Samrat..

"Shashank ise samjaao ki ye bachapana chhod de.."
shashi said

"ab or nahi shashi bhushan... wo meri beti haii
or mere paas hi rahegi... Gunjan Gupta haii
wo padma or shashank Gupta ki beti... chale jaao
yaha se chod do meri beti ko..."
shashank said angrily...

"Gunjan chalo yaaha se..."shashi commanded...

"kiss hakk se aap muje chalne ko keh rahe haii..
koi nahi hu mein aap ki ... jaao yaha se...
mein apne mumma papa ke sath rehna chahti hu
unke dushman ke sath mera koi vaasta nahi haiii...
or aapne sahi kaha tha.. ki mein aapka khoon nahi
hu,... or muje garv haii ki mein aapka khoon nahi
hu... aaj se aapka or mera koi rishta nahi haii..."

"paraya khoon paraya khoon hota hai chalo Nupur
yaha se..." Shashi said while making disgusting
face...

"nahi baujii... aap ne jo kiya galat kiya bahut
galat kiya...mein kabhi us ghar mein nahi aaungi.."
Nupur said while crying...

"thik haiii to aaj ke baad mera koi rishta nahi
tumse.."shashi declared n left the house...

Nupur called Mayank... n Mayank came... n took
Nupur with him...

Samrat made Gunjan sit on sofa...

"Chashmish tum to kyu rahi hu tumhe to khush hona
chahiye ki tume tumhaare dad mil gaye... or tum
hamesha chahti thi naa ki tumhaari bhi mom ho to
dekho tumhaari mom bhi tumhe mil gayi..."
Samrat tried to pecify her...

then Shashank came n sat beside her... n held her
hand..

"m sry beta.." Shashank apologised...

Gunjan hugged him...

"i love u papa..." Gunjan said soflty...whie
hugging Sshahnk tightly..


"i love u too beta.."shashank replied..

"n i love u both of u guys..."Samrat said
smilingly.. he too went n hugged both...

"papa i want to meet mom..." Gunjan  said while
boking hug...

"chalo milaa deta hu..."Said while smiling...
both got up n Samrat too...

"Samrat tum bhi chalo..."Shashank said to Samrat..

"nahi sir mein chahta hu ki aap log family time
spend kare..." Samat replied with a cute smile..

"or tum bhi to humaare family ke member ho humare
beti ke hone wali pati or humare hone wale daamad"
Shashank said teasingly..while Samrat n Gunjan
blushed... nw happiness spread in air...

then they went to Gupta house...
Padma opend the door... Saw Shashank  Gunjan n
Samrat on door...

Padma:are Shashank aap aa gaye... aur Samrat
Gunjan tum dono thik ho na beta...
Padma asked motherly...

Gunjan quckly hugged her...
padma was first socked... n saw Shashnk was smiling..
padma too hugged her...

Gunjan:mein thik hu mom...
Gunjan  said softly...

padma was even socked... her daughter...
Padma looked at Shashank asked questionlly
n Shashank nodded...

padma:Gunjan meri beti... n showered with kisses
on her face...
bahut tadpaaya tune muje... ab khud se dur kahi
nahi jaane dungii aise hi rakhungii apne sine
se laga kar..
n hugged her..

Gunjan:mein bhi kahi nahi jaungii mom... aapke
paas hi rahungii aise hi...

n tears were slowing frm both's eyes...

Samrat:i think hum log bhi ya ha haii...

Padma:pehle thik se muje meri beti ko dekhne to
do...

n looked at her frm head to toe.. n every1 were
smiling...

then padma showerd her with lots of love...
n then made her eat dinner... n also made eat
to Samrat... both goth their parents..
then GUnjan forgot her bitterful days' event...
n then padma n Shashank made her sleep...

after days passed..in few days.. padma n Shashank
showed her with lots of love... n Gunjan again
joined hospital with her papa... n on otherside..
Samrat daily went to mayank's home to learn
bussiness...n as per Gunjan's rqst he also complited
his greduation online... then in less than 3
months...Samrat joined his own company...
n Gunjan was success ful doctor... bt Gunjan
fully supported Samrat.. n always be with him when
ever he need her... both have lunch together
daily... n daily Gunjan checked him up...
nw Samrat was fully recovered...

almost more 6 months passed... nw samrat  became
successful doctor ofcourse Gunjan supported him..
daily went to him...Gunjan said she wanted to
spend more time with her parents n Samrat also
agreed as he too wanted to do sumthing on his own
feet... Samrat n Gunjan just went ahead..never
turned n looked behind... they were happy in their
new life...life is going on smooth way...

one day Samrat asked Shashank for Gunjan...
n padma n Shashank aproved...

on dat day...
at Gupta house...

Samrat:sir kya aapki beti ka hath mere hath me
denge...??? aur mein use... before complite his
sentence...

Shashank:tumhe ye kehne ki jarurat nahi haii ki
tum use zindgi bhar khush rakhoge...use jo chaiye
wo doge.. ye sab hum jaante haii... aur hume
is rishte se koi problem nahi haii Samrat...
balki mein to khush hu ki meri beti tumhaare
sath rahegi ab...

Samrat:par sir aap jaante haii ki pehle mein
paagal tha kya uske baad bhi...

"SAMRAT" Samrat turned n saw Gunjan was standing
there...

"Chashmish wo mein.. bas.."

"shut up Samrat jaanti hu ki pehle humaari shaadi
ko le kar jo hua tha wo galat tha par plzzz
Samrat ise fir se matt dohraao... bhul jaao wo
sab kuch wo 5 saal... wo sab kuch... aaj hum
khush haii sath haii bas.. mein tumse bahut
pyar karti hu Samrat... aur ise jyada muje kuch
nahi chahiye samje.."Gunjan came to him n smacked..

"dekha sir aapki beti ne to shaadi se pehle hi
muje maarna shuru kar diya..."
said playfully...

"bhai Samrat ab sir nahi papa khoge ...aur agar
aisi galti dubaara ki na to sirf Gunjan se hi nahi
mujse bhi maar padegi..." Shashank warned him
while smiling..

"aur mujse bhi..."padma came forward n hit him
playfully...

"sry papa...sry mom..."

"hmm dats better..."padma said...

"aaj hi pandit je ko bulvaake shaadi ki date nikalva
deti hu...aap chaliye mere sath mandir..."

n padma took Shashank with her...

"mera sry kaha??" Gunjan asked...

"wo mein tumhe personally dena chahta tha..."
n held her in his embrace... n kissed her cheek..

"pehle kyu nahi kaha ki aaj tum mera hath mang ne
ghar aa rahe ho?" Gunjan asked in face anger...

"wo surprise dena chahta tha..." n Samrat kissed
her on other cheek...

"kya baat haii aaj bahut pyar aa raha haii..?"
Gunjan asked...

"kyunki muje apni biwi se pitna nahi haiii ..."

both hugged...n then they broke the hugg..

"accha chalo ab celebrate karte haii..."

"haa chalo" Gunjan said n abt to go.. bt Samrat
held her...

"kya hua?? celebrate karne bahar nahi chalna kya??"
Gunjan asked confusingly...

"agar ghar pe hi celebrate kare to...kha ma kha
bahar logo ko hume dekh kar sharam aayegi...
to be mrs.shergill"

Samrat said in romentic voice...n before Gunjan
could understood anything..Samrat atteched his
lips with her lips... n held her tightly..
frm her waist... n Gunjan put her arm around his
neck.. n pulled him towards her...n their soft kiss
turned to passionate...

{Do u really like this whole SS????}
[picture abhi baki haii mere dost... for epilouge screll down]

IMP NOTE:
this SS going to end so i want long cmmnt...
n want over all cmnt...

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting  4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word...


Love'
Radhi...



Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 05 July 2011 at 5:18am

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EPILOGUE READ AT UR OWN RISK...

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EPILOUGE...


Finally wedding day arrived... they were damn
happy dat finally they were going to become 1...
n then baarat come n soon wedding start..
padma n Shashank happy dat finally Gunjanis going
to marry Samrat her love her life...
Shashank n  padma made a grand wedding... all
doctors n VIP persons invited.. after all its
their oly daughters wedding... every1 were damn
happy... Suhaani n Adhiraj was constantly giving
advice Samrat n Samrat annoyed... n more over Mayank
giving his extra sense... bt Samrat make fun of him
n Mayank made face... Dia n Uday was pulling
Samrat's leg n making fun... on other side...
Nupur was making Gunjan ready...  Gunjan saw
herself in red bridal dress... n blushed as she
imagined Samrat was saying looking awesum...

"aahaa.. koi bahut sharmaa raha haii... Gunjan
tu abhi sharmaa rahi haii to aaj raat ko kya karegi
?? kyunki sab jaante haii ki Samrat Shergill ka
dusra name besharam haii...aaj to tu gayi Gunjan
waise bhi Samrat tuje chhodta nahi haiii or aaj
raat to tumhaari first night or wedding night haiii
finally Samrat ka wait khatam hua... to ye sharam
yahi chhod do.. kyunki aaj tumhe Samrat nahi chhodne
wala... hhaa"Nupur said while teasing her...

Gunjan blushed hard... n recalled her memory when
she spend moment with Samrat...

"chalo Gunjan pandit ji ne bulaya haiii..."
padma came n took hold of her n then Nupur n
padma took her downstair... Samrat turned n saw
his angel was coming... n lost in her... he was
totally memorised by her beauty... he came out of
his thoughts when Gunjan sat beside him.. n blushed
seeing his gaze... then they gaze met n lost in
each other.. then heard pandit ji was chanting mantra.
so they smiled... n then did all retuals...
finally filled her mang with sindoor... n little
sindoor fell on her nose... n Gunjan closed her
eyes n felt the moment want to capture this moment
in her heart forever...this was one of the best
moment of her life...then Samrat tied Mangalsutra
around her neck... n A silent tear droped frm her
eye...A tear of happiness dat finally she was his..
onli his only Samrat's... They both stood up..
n held each others hand n took seven round...
nPandit ji declared them Husnband n wife...
this was the best day of her life nw she was totally
his... even her name is with Samrat...
MRS.GUNJAN SAMRAT SHERGILL... then took blessings
frm elders..n Gunjan cried so much as she was
finally leaving her parents... n padma n Shashank
also cried so much... bt Samrat promised them dat
every Sunday they will come to meet them...
n after final farewell they reached shergill
mansion...At door Suhaani did aarti of both of them
n welcum warmly...n then Gunjan pushed the kalash
of full of rice.. n then steped in red water..
n walked leaving her foot print behind...
after all retual at home finally Suhani took
Gunjan with her n made her sit on Samrat's bad...
n then giggled n left room ... Gunjan was looking
around... she had so many times came here...
n also slept beside Samrat in the same room.. bt
today sumthing was different.. nt sumthing its
like everything changed... yahh she was touched
with the decoration of the room... n then again
looked around... n then saw so many pics of her
on wall...she smiled... then saw their old pics
of their college...n then looked at side table..
one of her pic n other was her n Samrat's pic...
she got up frm bed n went near pics...n recall the
memory of their college life... Samrat entered the
room n saw Gunjan was lost in the pictures...
he smiled n silently locked the door... n without
making any noise he went to her n hugged her frm
back having his arms around her waist... Gunjan
felt him hugging her... she smiled n felr him
so close to her... he slowly kiss her cheek n
smiled...

"puraani yaadein taza kar rahi ho???" Samrat asked

"haa humaari college ki yaadein kitni haseen yaadein
thi na ye...??" Gunjan again recalled their memory

"haa bahut haseen thi ye yaadein .."n tight his
grip on her...

"kaash ki mein wo college chhod kar naa gayi hoti..
" she said as she felt his grip tight...

"Chashmish... jo ho gaya use bhul jaao aaj humari
nahi zindgi ki shuru aat hone wali haiii so ab hume
khush hona chahiye right..." Samrat came in front
of her...

"kaise Samrat..? tumhe itni takleef mili 5 saal itna
dard saha fir bhi... ??" Gunjan asked guiltily...

"haa fir bhi kyunki us dard se bhi jyada mein tumse
pyar karta hu... jaanti ho ye ehsaas muje kab hua
jab tum muje chhod kar chali gayi thi..."

"aur ye sab puraani baaten chhodo aaj to humara din
haii .."Samrat added n smiled seeing her blush...

Samrat pulled her towards him... for the kiss

"Samrat..."

"tum to aise sharma rahi ho jaise hum pehli bar
kiss kar rahe ho... Chashmish jaha tak muje yaad
haii hum ise pehle kahi baar kiss kar chuke haii...

Gunjan again recalled their first kiss...

"matlab tumhe sab yaad haiii humaari pehli kiss..."
Gunjan asked confusingly..

"haa sab kuch yaad haiii humaara confession bhi
maanta hu ki tab mein apne hosh me nahi tha... par
us waqt humne jo bhi pal bitaaye muje saare yaad
haii... tumhe kya laga mere thik hone ke baad meine
aise hi tume i love u bol diya... nahi pyar to mein
tumhe pehle se karta tha... bas samaj nahi paaya
ki ye  pyar hai or jab samaj aaya tab tum jaa
chuki thi..." Samrat's voice cracked...
Gunjan saw pain in his eyes... the pain of their
seperation... n soon captured her lips with his
to ease his pain...n both lost in their passionate
kiss...Samrat pulled her more closed to him...
he wanted to live the moment nthing to remember ...
n both showed each other how much they missed each
other... n how much they wanted eachother...
no 1 wanted to break the januable moment..
then they finally broke the kiss as wanted to take
breath...n breathinf heavilyy,... n hugged each
other...then Samrat remembered sumthing n broke
the  hugg...

"kya hua??"Gunjan asked confusingly...

"wo aaj humaari wedding night haii to tume kuch
gift bhi to dena padega na...???"Samrat said
mischievly/.. n Gunjan felt shy...
he went to wardrobe n come with a wraped box..
n gave to Gunjan... Gunjan unwraped it n saw the
image... it was her image... made by Samrat..

"ye to wahi aakhe haii jo tumne banayi thi,, or ye
to mein..? Gunjan was stuned seeing the picture...

"haa wo mein tumhaari hi pic bana raha tha..."

"oh to is liye tum chupa rahe the mujse... aur
iski smile... Samrat tumne ye kaise kiya..."
Gunjan said still staring at picture...

"mein kya karu tumhaari smile haii hi aisi...
accha ye batao acchi lagi??"

\"acchi nahi Samrat bahut acchi lagi.. thnks...
n kissed him on his cheek... n then Samrat took
her pic n hanged on the wall...n turned n starting
at her... gunjan also looking at him n saw his
star... the desire.. the passionate desire...
he slowly went to her n carry her in his arm...

"Chashmish tum na bahut bharrii ho gayi ho..."
Samrat said cutely..
she hit him playfully n said his name "Samrat"
n Samrat placed her on bed n sat beside her so close
to her...

"accha baba sry par ek baat kahu... ?? u r looking
stunning... n breath talking... "Samrat said
while whispered last word... n went close to her..
n Gunjan's heart beat became fast... n Samat softly
droped a soft kiss on her forhead n Gunjan closed
her eyes... n droped kissed on her both cheek...
eyes..n then chin...Gunjan lost in him totally n
moaned his name "Samrat"...
then he started to took off her jewellery...
n kissed her every where... he took off her mang
tika.. he veil... n her ear rings n kissed her
earlobe n softly bite them...then took of her
nekles n kissed her passionatly around her neck...
n then pulled pi frm her shoulder n her dupatta
fell frm her shoulder... n held her frm both
shoulder..n kissed her deeply on her shoulder...
n Gunjan slowly held him frm his waist tightly..
feeling very weak... as Samrat took her sumwhere
else...out of the world...

HE slowly made her half layed supporting her back
on bed... he slowly took off his sherwani...
went nea her... n held her cheek... n started to kiss
deeply on her neck.. making Gunjan shivering..
n also bith her neck...n nuzzling his nose ..
as he loose her hair... n gave wet kissed...
Gunjan held his shoulders for support as was feeling
so weak...n Samrat slowly put his arm around her
ack..n started to carresed sensiuly... Gunjan slowly
moaned his name... n Samrat was totally lost...
n when he was carresing her back... she felt the
dori of her blouse was there... n he pulled it..
n opened it... slowly slided her blouse frm shoulder
n started to gave passionate kisses wet kisses..
on her shoulder.. n Gunjan was feeling his touch...
he held her frm her waist n statrted to carresed it..

n they made love...{sry for edit its againts rules of IF...}
n sweet song played...

Kisi ko sapna lagey tu, kisi ko behti hawaa
Kisi ko bas baaton mein, kare pal mein yahaan wahaan
Kisi ke sau jhoot sun le, kisi ka sacch bhi gunaah
Kisi ka bas yaadon mein, kare hulchul saara jahaan
Te amo me te amo
Tu chhaanv hai, tu dhoop hai
Te amo me te amo
Tere hazaron roop hai
Koi samjha nahin, jo bhi hai bas khoob hai
Falling so crazy in love
Te amo me te amo
Tu chhaanv hai, tu dhoop hai
Te amo me te amo
Tere hazaaron roop hai


Kabhi lagey raaton mein main khwaabon se baatien karoon subah unhi
Khwaabon ko main kaabu karoon
Kabhi lagey taaron se bhi, unche udaane bharoon
Kabhi lagey baadalon se jaibein bharoon


Te amo me te amo
Taare ginu tere liye
Te amo me te amo
Saare chunu tere liye
Khwaab saare bunu tere hi tere liye
Falling so crazy in love
Te amo me te amo
Taare ginu tere liye
Te amo me te amo


Kabhi lagey mili nahin, tumse main khwaabon mein bhi
Kabhi lagey kahin toh hai ristha koi
Kabhi lagey chhu tumhe, yunhi khayalon mein hi
Kabhi lagey nahin nahin chori nahin


Te amo me te amo
Tu paas hai par door hai
Te amo me te amo
Jaata nahin yeh noor hai
Teri chori bhi yeh manzoor manzoor hai
Falling so crazy in love
Te amo me te amo

Te amo me te amo
Jaata nahin yeh noor hai


AFTER 1 years...
Gunjan gave birth a baby boy... n Samrat named
Rythem... as he was the apple of Gunjan's eyes...
n Samrat's jaan...


After 3 years...
A bight morning ...Gunjan came to rythem's room
n saw he was sleeping... she stopped at door
n statred at her son...n her pallu of her saaree
was blowing... n also her hair...she came to his
bed.. n sat ..n started to carresed his hair...
n kissed his forhead.. n stared at him... his
feature his same as Samat's same nose same cheek
same eyes...same speech.. same actions.. same
prankster n same basketball lover... the copy of
Samrat n sumtimes she called him junior Samrat...

"Rythem chalo utho..."

"no mom muje sona haiii..." Rythem said n turned
his face otherside...

"bilkul baap pe gaya haii...waha wo Samrat nahi
uth raha yaha uska beta.. mein to is baap or bete
se tang aa gayi hu... Rythem chalo nw get up baccha
papa ko bhi uthana haii chalo nw get upp..."
Gunjan tried to wake him up... Rythem slowly
opend his eyes.. n Gunjan carried him in her arms
n he slept on his shoulder...

"Gud morning rythem..." n kissed his cheek...
bt rythem didnt response...
then Gunjan took him in her room..while he was
sleeping on his shoulder...

"ye lo ye bhi so raha haii..."said n went to Samrat
n tried to wake him up...

"Samra utho.. Samrat..."

"Chashmish aaj Sunday haii no office... n aaj
tumhaara hospital bhi nahi haii... let me sleep
na..." again turned n sleep...

"oh god chhote bacche ko samjaa sakte haii par
is bacche ke papa ka kya kare...Samrat dekho
utho na..."again pulled him by shoulder...
he slowly opened his eyes n saw Rythem was sleeping
in her arms...

"Chashmish tum bhi na... give me rythe... "
n forwarded his arms... Gunjan held him to Samrat
n rythem opened his eyes... n Samrat made him
layed beside him... then Samrat kissed his cheek
n Rythem too kissed him back.. n then they hug
n slept saying..

"Gud night Chashmish..."

Gunjan hit her forhead with her hand...
she too went to bed...n hugged them...n kissed
their cheeks...

"Gud night..." n slept...

----- END -----



Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting  4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word...


Love'
Radhi...




Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 30 October 2011 at 12:14am

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
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dekh finally unress kar rhi hoon

yeah radhu tere last desire ke last update pe mera pehla comment
o.m.g
so amazing na yay! Yay!
Now abou the update

ahem ahem gala theek karlo pehle
ms mystery master finally sare mysteries
ka parda fash!! Ho gya
shashi is so urgghh uff
mere samne hota toh
uski toh uski toh uski toh
aise band bjate
ki kambhakht sat janam tak yad rakhta
how mean yr
isme shashank aur padma ki kya galti thI
jo usne bdla liya hmph hmph
n phir himmat dEKHO gunjan pe haq jama raha tha
uski toh...
Aise ki taise
bt yeh achcha hua gunjan was strong
usne jawab diya n went to shashank n padma
aww they are soo cuTE

n then sajan ki wedding plus romance ueEe
so happpy love u love u love u mumma.!


Now coming to the epilouge *blush *
sorry 18 plus ka tha par m 16 toh socha padh lo
yaha kaun itna shariff hai jo 18 plus dEKH ke ignore kar dey.! Blki yeh dekhke sb toh aur excited hojate hain hehehe
Ohk ohk coming to update-
wow yr so so so so romantic
mere cheeks tomato ho gaye
dekh dekh chal chod tjhe kya dikhega
yr kitna romantic likha tha yr
manna padega aj kal bhot sekh rhi ho kisi cheezo se ahem ahem samajh rhi hai na
hahahahahahahaha

but mumma schchi overall update was mINDBLOWING simply AMAZING in short MAZA AGAYA claps to u !

Sorry comMENT update ki tarah lamba ho gya
par u knw na main ek bar bolna shuru karo so cntrl my emotions
great job mumma
i m proud of u
aj apne prove kiya ap mere mumma ho hehe
will miss this ss
par phlease sequel ka mat sochna
warna main mar dalongi tjhe
itna kafi tragedy tha
love you loads mumma

love
kd (full form likh ke bezati nhi karani hehe)

Edited by sweetsurabhi94 - 07 July 2011 at 11:59am

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epilogue kab post  karegi?
update was awesome
loved family scene


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