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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sashazmohit

Shockedy u ending soon abhi baki hai sab kchBig smile


ab kya baaki haii yaar????

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
Very Nice Update.ClapFinally Truth revealed...Smileand last twist...!!Shocked I think...ab toh sirf NEIL ki hi entry bachi hai...as a SHEENA brotherLOL Please,update soon...Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 4:28am | IP Logged
tht was sooo niceee part ab plzzz aur entry nahiii just sajan ko together karo
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Hey frnds here is the nxt part of mystry...
n still one mystry is unrevealed so i have to add
2 or 3 more parts as Gunjan is Shashank n Padma's
daughter... so this Ss has 5 or 6 parts more...
here is the part njoy it...



PART 17



G:kon haii tumhara bhai?????????????

benji took out his cell n hid behind his back...

Sh:neil... she shouted...
G:neil??????? she was confused...
kon neil mein kisi neil ko nahi jaanti...
Sh:wow great.. jo ladta tumhare pyar me paagal ho
chuka haii.. tumhe wo bhi nahi pata ki kaun haii...
bhul gayi Gunjan tum... jisne tume propose kiya tha
par tumne thukra diya tha...

Flashback...

when Gunjan realised dat she was in love with
Samrat...she was Singing a Song ...

Kya hua ye jo hua ye dil ne chaha wo hua ye...
kab hua ye jab hua ye dil bhi na jaane kyu hua ye..
dhadkane bhi bin puche tham gayi...
saari haddo ke paar haii kuch aur nahi ye pyar hai.
do dilo ki ye kahani mithi si ye khich taani...
hoth bhi to bin bole hans gaye...
saari haddo ke paar haii kuch aur nahi ye pyar hai.

sum1 was watching her n memorized by her beauty...
he was non other than Neil... who just come
for sheena's addmision...

he tried to ran to her bt she went before he could
reach her...

I just love her.. kya khubsurti haiii... kya aawaz
haii... muje ye ladki chahiye kisi bhi haal me..
pehli baar neil malhotra ne kisi ko pyar kiya haii..
pehli hi nazar me muje diwana bana gayi wo...


nxt day... gunjan was coming to college...
she was entering college...

sum1 pulled her aside...
Gunjan scared...he was non other then Neil
G:chhodo muje...
N:hey relax... mein koi tumhe kidnap nahi kar
raha hu... plzz meri baat suno...
G:kon ho tum>> she annoyed...
N:hii mein hun neil...
G:neil par mein tumhe nahi janti hu...
N:pata haiii.. par bahut jald jaan jaaogii...
mein bhi tumhe nahi janta.. hum dono ek dusre ko
bahut jald jaan jayenge.. n started to carress
her hand... gunjan felt sumthing strange..
n slaped him...
G:muje kuch nahi jaanna haii dur raho mujse...
n tears started to fal frm her eyes...
she wiped her tears... bt tears wasnt stopping..
she went to college...she saw Samrat n wiped her
tears n control her tears...
Samrat also saw his chashmish n ran to her...
S:he chashmish...
Gunjan tried to smile n gv him small smile...
Samrat saw her red n swollen eyes...
G:hii samrat...
S:chashmish kya hua????? asked worriedly...
G:samrat muje kya hoga?????
avoiding eyecontect with him...
S:chashmish tum mujse kuch chupa rahi ho???
G:nahi to Samrat...
S(in mind):mein chashmish se akele me baat karunga.
S:accha chalo koi baat nahi.. chashmish muje tum'
baad me music room me aake milna muje tumse kuch
baat karni haii...
said seriously...
G:kya hua Samrat??? sked worriedly...
S:nthing tum music room me aajana..
n left..
G(in mind):ye Samrat ko kya hua????


after 2 hours At music room..

Samrat was sitting there n Gunjan entered...

G:Samrat... Samrat saw Gunjan coming towards him..
Samrat remained silent... She went to near him
she was now worried...
G:Samrat kya hua??? tum aise kyu beithe ho?????
S:wahi to mein tumse puchna chahta hu chashmish'
ki tume kya hua hai???
G:Samrat meine bola tha na ki muje kuch nahi hua
haii...
S:chashmish maan leta hu ki tum jo keh rahi ho wo
sahi keh rahi ho par tumhaari aakhe to kuch or hi
hel rahi haii... itni red eyes kisi ki tab hoti
haii jab koi rota haiii...
G:nahi Samrat ye to... bt Samrat cut her...
S:ek or excuse...Chashmish muje sirf sach sunna hai
or kuch nahi... he became angry on her...
n saw her face she was crying... he went to her
S:chashmish... n cupped her face in his hand...
she hugged him tightly... Samrat nw sure dat
sumthing was wrong with her... Samrat too hugged
her...
G:Samrat...
S:haa Chashmish bolo kal tum itna khush thi or aaj..
kisi ne kuch kaha kya????
G:Samrat wo Neil... samrat broke the hug heating
boy's name...
S:Neil??? kon Neil Chashmish..???
G:Samrat jab me college aa rahi thi to koi Neil
name ka ladka tha usne mera hath pakda or muje
khicha...
S:kon tha wo jisne tume??
G:muje nahi pata... n cried more...
n Samrat hugged her...
S:chashmish ro na bandh karo...chalo...
n wiped her tears...
wo jo bhi ho use bhul jaao... aaj ke baad mein hi
tumhare sath rahunga thik haii...
Gunjan smiled...
S:chashmish ye sab tumne muje tab kyu nahi kaha??
G:Samrat mein tume pareshan nahi karna chahti thi.
S:thik haii aaj ke baad mein bhi tumse kuch nahi
kahunga taaki tum pareshan na ho...
G:sry Samrat...
S:or dekho ab sry bhi bol rahi ho... ise accha to
tum aaj mere sath ice cream khaane chalti...
G:wow ice cream ..ok mein chalungii...
both smiled...

then at evening both went to ice cream parlour..
n Neil saw them to gether chatting n laughing...
n Samrat was flirting with her...

N:mein use pyar karta hu or wo kisi or se...



then Gunjan went to home...
n went to her room n socked to see Neil there...

G:tum??socked to see him...
N:ha mein.. Gunjan i love u Gunjan...
plzzz tum bhi mujse pyar karti ho na.????
he was plending...
G:tum andar kaise aaye?????
gunjan became angry...
N:tum pyar karti ho na mujse?????
G:haa pyar karti hu... par tumse nahi Samrat se..
mein tumse pyar nahi karti.. Mein sirf or sirf
Samrat se pyar karti hu.. plzz chale jaao yahase,,
mein tumse kabhi pyar nahi karungii...

n then Neil went

Flashback End...

Sh:uske baad usne do baar jaan dene ki koshish ki..
par humne use bacha liya... is liye mein Samrat ki
zindgi mein aayi taaki tum use door ho jaao or mere
bhai ke paas chali jaao... is liye  meine tume meri
or samrat ki zindgi se jaaneko kaha tha...
par tum tum tobina kisi ko bataye pata nahi kaha
chali gayi thi... bhai ne tume bahut dhundha..
jab use pata chala ki tum kahi chali  gayi ho...
usne tumhara bahut intazar kiya par tum wapas nahi
aayi or wo paagal ho gaye tumhare intazar me tumhare
pyar me...
is liye meine Samrat ko hi paagal bana diya ...
kyunki use maar nahi sakti thi... Rv ko property
jo chahiye thi... or muje Rv chahiye tha...
so humne shaadi karli or Samrat ko paagal bana diya
taaki property hume mil sake...

Gunjan was crying like hell...
she was the reason of Samrat's condition...
she was blaming other's for Samrat's condition
bt she was responsible for all these...

Su:agar tume property hi chahiye thi to bol dete
bhai ke sath aisa karne ki kya jarurat thi...

suhani n benji was also crying n socked hearing
their plan...

Rv:suhani... meri pyari behnaaa
he came to her...
humne koshish ki thi... par.. par tumhare parents
ko sheena ke plan ke baareme pata chal gaya...
to humne unse kaha ki wo saari property hume
de de hum use kuch nahi karenge...
par unhone chal chali... hume haa  keh diya or
yaha se chale gaye...
firdusre din hume pata chala ki wo to apne bete
ko bachane india pahoch gaye haiii...
so muje majburan unka accident karwana pada...
muje laga... unko soirf chot pohchegi...
bt wo to sidha upar hi pahoch gaye...

or in sab me hhumara sath diya is dr ne or unke
dost Dr.mishra ne...

n lauged evily...

every1 were hell socked that... then killed
Samrat's parents too...

every1 didnt knw wt to say knw they were in
biggest sock...


Benji held Gunjan as he coud understand her
condition...

Rv:ab yaha kyu khade ho chale jaao yaha se...
tum logo ko sach sunna tha humne bata diya...

nt Get Out...
Gunjan slowly went to Samrat who was laying on
sofa... Benji n Suhani n Gunjan held Samrat..
n made them sat in car...
n drove off to home...Gunjan N suhani were
crying constantly...


AT home...
Benji n Adhiraj n Mayank made samrat layed in his
room... n Benji told every thing to them n they
were hell socked... n Adhiraj specifying Suhani
n Gunjan went to her room n locked it...


n kneeled down to floor n cried her heart out...

G:Sab kuch meri wajase hua haiii... Samrat ki is '
haalat ka zimedar or koi nahi sirf or sirf mein
hoo... meine apne pyar ko maar daala... apne
haatho se use is haalat me pohcha diya...
Sab kuch meine kiya meine... apne samrat ke har
dard or har takleef ki zimedar mein hu sirf mein..
meine apne Samrat ko paaagal bana diya meine...

n heard knock n heard Samrat's voice...

S:Chashmish chashmish...

Gunjan quickly wiped her tears n opened the door..
G:Samrat ... n hugged him...
S:chashmish tum ro kyu rahi ho... sheena ne tumse
kuch kaha na??? usne pehle bhi tumse mujse door
kar diya tha,... aaj usne tume rula diya na
chashmish... par ab mein use bata dunga ki mein
use nahi tumse pyar karta hu...
tum ro mat chashmish... hum India chale jaayenge
humare ghar or hum wahi rahenge...
G:ye sab meine kiya haii Samrat tumhe jo takleef
mili haiii wo meri wajase mili haii Samrat...
S:nahi chashmish wo to us dr ne muje pain diya tha
par ab mei thik hu ab muje pain nahi hota haii...
G:Sab meri wajase hua haii samrat muje saja do
Samrat...
n cried more n more..
Samrat broke the hug...
S:chashmish tum ro mat plzz hum India chale jayenge
hum yaha nahi rahenge...
n wiped her tears...
G:haa Samrat hum India chale jaayenge...
hum yaha nahi rahenge...

on otherside Gang

D:maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki wo sheena or uska
husband Rv is hadd tak jaa sakte the...
samrat ki paagal disgusting...
said anhrily...
N:mann to karta haii ki dono ko garam oil me daal ke
gujiye banadu dono ko...
said angrily...
A:par ab karna kya haii... unhone crime kiya
haii uski saja to unhe milni hi chahiye...
B:Saja milegi jarur milegi...
M:par kaise benji humare paas koi proof nahi
haiii or court proof mangti haii...
B:wo actuallly jab wo log apne karmo ki daastan
bata rahe the tab meine apna cell nikal ke
sab kuch record kar liya tha...

n showed them video...

N:is Dr ki to mein...
said angrily...
M:dont wry nupur tumhe kuch karne ki jarurat nahi
haii London police unhe nahi chhodegi...


then police arrested Rv sheena n dr n dr's frnd...

After 2  days in India...
every1 happy dat Samrat was recovering very fast..
n Happy seeing Samrat in his old version...
bt still he was nt fully recover...
Gunjan still blaming herself for Samrat's conditions
whole 5 years Samrat suffer coz of her.. first
she left him alone.. n then he had to suffer the
horrible pain... she thought Gunjan made Samrat's
life hell ...
Samrat was sleeping peacefuly on bed n she was
standing nea window n lost in her thoughts
n tears were streaming...
just then Suhani came...
Su:Gunjan...
Gunjan turned n saw suhani...
G:m sry Suhani.. meri wajase Samrat ki ye haalat
ho gayi... m sry...
Su:nahi Gunjan...tumhe thodi na pata tha ki Neil
ke liye Sheena is hadd tak chali jaayegi...
hum sabko lagta tha ki sheena bhai se pyar karti
haii...galat tum nahi ho galat sheena haii jisne
Rv ke sath mil kar ye sab kiya hai...
wo sab guzra hua kal tha Gunjan use bhul jaao...
aaj tume bas sirf bhai ko thik karna haii..
tum doctor ho or wo tumhara patient haii..
bas use thik kardo...
G:wo thik haii Suhani.. bas use sirf ek sock ki
jarurat haii...
Su:matla confused...
G:Samrat ko agar fir se koi sadma lage to wo
use cope up karne ke liye apni saari mental
strengh laga dega.. or wo us hisab se sochne
lagega jo ek normal insaan sochta haii... us
raftaar se sochega jaise hum sochte haii...
or agar wo ye karne lagega to wo fir se pehle
jaisa ho jaayega...
Su:par ye hum karenge kaise???
G:pata nahi... is baar sab kuch meine upar wale
ke hath me chhod diya haii... muje nahi pata ki
wo mere pyar ke kitne imtahaan lena chahta haii..
bas prarthana karti hu ki wo mere Samrat ko jald
se jald thik karde taaki wo muje meri saza suna
sake... uske haalat ke zimedaar uske Chashmish ko
saza de sake...
n cried...n Suhani hugged Gunjan...
Su:Gunjan plzz aisa mat socho plzz...
then they heard Samrat was caling Gunjan...

S:Chashmish...
gunjan broke the hug n went to him...
G:haa Samrat...
Su:Gunjan mein chalti hu bhai ko sula dena..
n Gunjan nodded n Suhani soon left...
S:tum fir se to use sheena ki wajase muje chhod ke'
nahi jaaogi na...?????
G:nahi jaaungii... kabhi nahi...
S:mujse waise hi pyar karogi na??? he asked
innocently...
G:haa waise hi pyar karungii .. n kissed his
forhead...
S:waha kiss kyu diii muje yaha chahiye...
pointed towards his lips... Gunjan blushed...
S:are do na...
Gunjan forwared n kissed his lips softly.. then
Samrat held her tightly around her waist...
n Gunjan put her arms around his neck...
then they broke the kiss,...n breathing heavily..
G:chalo ab so jaao...  n made him layed...
S:tum muje sulado.. Samrat put his head in her
lap n Gunjan started to carresed his hair n he fell
in deep sleep.. then Gunjan kissed his forhead
n made him layed properly... n layed beside him..



precap:
Neil in India...



Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting  4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...


LoveWink
Radhi...






Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 May 2011 at 1:16pm

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
awesome update...
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oh no again this neil came well nice part hope sam recover soon thanxs for PM cont soon
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argh...Angrywanna kill dis sheena,neil n rvAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
loved sajan moment haayeeeDay DreamingHeart
samrat is recovering yeeeClapThumbs Up
awww poor gunji...can understand her pain...Cry
bt i know when samrat will totally recover she'll b fyn...
uff...D'ohnow wht the *beep beep* with neil...y hez cuming 2 india ???? m defo gonna kill himAngry
update soon i know u'll update after ur vacation bt wil wait 4 itSmileHug
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