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My Last Desire... Sajan ss !!! (Complited) (Page 8)

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
oyeeee do cont.... this was very nyc!!!!!

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged

hiiiii

awesome ff
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intresting concept
cant wait 4 more
con soon
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oooooo what happens next???  cant wait!!!

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awesome update
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update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged

Hey frndzzzzzzz...... come back with a new part hope you
liked it pplzzz guys tell me hwz it????
here is d part...

Part 3

mayank n nupur turned n socked to see gunjan at door...
gunjan was also socked n confussed... she couldent figure
out wats goig there... she slowly came towards mayur...
n mayur were confussed n scared.....
G:di aap ne abhi kya kaha???????
nupur nw scaredddddd
N:gunjan wo wo me tu dekh samaj ne ki koshish kar
she thought gunjan heard everything
G:di aap kya bol rahi thi ki me kya nahi seh paungi aur
aap muje kya nahi batana chahti?????
M:gunjan wo....
G:ek minute jiju n raised her hand...
me di se kuch puch rahi hu....
Diii bolo kya nahi bata sakti aap samrat ke bareme???
N:wo gunjan wo bas me...
G:kya me di aage bataeye mera dil betha ja raha haiii
muje kabse lag raha haii ki aap log mujse kuch na kuch
chupa rahe ho par kyaaa??? mene suhani ke aakho me bhi
kuch dard dekha.. aur sabki aakho me nami dekhi
aisi kya baat haii jo aap log muje nahi batana chahte..
mayur remained silent n gunjan continued....
jab bhi samrat ke bareme puchti hu aap log baat ko
taal dete ho..aur jab last time pucha to aap mujpe
bima wajah gussa ho gayi kyu??? di aisi kya baat haii??
aur samrat kaha haiiii??? ja se aayi tab se me puch
rahi hu koi iska jawab nahi de raha....
M:wo gunjan aisi koi baat nai haiii but gunjan cut him
G:jiju plzzz mujse juth mat boliye... me janti hu
ki aap log samrat kaha haii wo jante ho aur
ye bhi jante ho ki wo aaj mujse milne kyu nahi aaya??
kyunki me janta hu samrat kabhi chashmish se dur nahi
reh sakta...
N:dekh gunjan muje iske bareme tujse koi baat nahi karni
haii aur na hum ye jante haii ki samrat kaha haii..
G:par kyu di??? aap kyu nahi batana chahti ki samrat
kaha haii??? aisi kya baat hui haii ya aisa kya badal
gaya in 5 saalo me???
N:bahut kuch badal gaya haii gunjan behtar yahi hoga ki
tu aaj ke baat kisi se samrat ke bareme koi bat nahi
karegi na uske bareme kuch bhi kisi se puchegi...
G:par kyu di aisi
M:gunjan tumhe nupur ne bola na ki samrat ke bareme
kuch bat nahi karni to fir kyu???
he felt guilty coz he had never talked with her like
this .....gunjan was socked hearing this from mayank's
mouth as she knw samrat was his best buddy... he
consider him like his younger bro.....
G:jiju aap bhi ... aap ye sab keh rahe haii ki me samrat
ke bareme kuch na puchu??? kaise jiju kkya aap mahi
jante ki me samrat se kitna .... agar aap meri jagah hote
aur aapko di ke bareme kuch na batau to kaisa lagega??
aap aisa kaise keh sakte haii..
N:dekh gunjan me tujse fir ek baar keh rahi hu plzzzz
samrat ko bhul ja.....
G:kaise bhul jau di agar me aap ko kahu ki aap jiju
ko bhul jao to kya bhul paao gi kabhi???
mayur were silent.,,,
G:nahi bhulegi kyu???? kyunki aap unse bahut pyar karti
haii ... me bhi samrat se pyar karti hu.. me bhi use
5 saal me door rehne ke bawjood nahi bhula payi balki use
aur pyar karti gayi...kaise use bhul jau me ...
plzz di bataiye...
M:gunjan plzz baat ko samjo...
G:nahi jiju... aap nahi samaj rahe haii.. aap ko to samaj
na chahiye na aap to di se pyar karte haii.. thik haii
agar aap log kkuch batana nahi chahte to me khud pata
laga lungi ki samrat kaha haiii
n about to go
N:tu janana chahti haii na ki samrat kaha haiii???
me tuje batati hu...
gunjan turned.... mayank was totally socked n scared
n also confussed n couldnt figure out wat was nupur
goig to tell gunjan about samrat??? truth???
N:samrat mumbai me nahi haii wo tere jane ke baad hi
yaha se chala gaya tha..
G:kya par kyu?? wo to excel kabhi nahi chodta uski jaan
bastih aii excel me...
N:wahi wajah se jis wajah se tu samrat se dur gayi thi
sheenaaaaaaaaaa...
ha sheena .. tu bhi is liye hi use dur gayi thi na
taki samrat ko uska pyar mil jaye kyunki sheena ne
aisi shart rakhi thi ki wo samrat ke sath tabhi rahegi
jab samrat tumse dur rahega...
tears started to come out from gunjan's eyyes..
wo hume bhi chod kar is liye chala gaya haii kyunki
sheena nahi chahti thi ki wo hamare sath dosti rakhe
is liye wo dono mumbai chodke chale gaye..
bas ab khush ya aur kuch sunna haii tuje...
samrat ab hamara dost nahi haiiii....
mayank was totally socked n many questions he wanted to
ask to nupur but it was nt right time as gunjan was there
gunjan couldnt control herself n ran from there to her
room.... n fell on bed n started to sry even more....

In mayur's room as gun jan went
M:tumne gunjan se juth kyu bola ki samrat mumbai me nahi
haiii...use sach kyu nahi bata diya..
N:mayank hum humari galti ki wajase samrat ko to kho hi
chuke haii ab gunjan ko nahi khona chahte...
M:par wo samrat ke bareme kya sochegi ki samrat ne aisa
kuch kiya hoga???
N:wo me kuch nahi janti me gunjan ko toot te hua nahi dekh
sakti bas aur humne yahi decide kiya tha ki hum use wahi
wajah batayenge.. ki sheena jise samrat pyar karta tha
is liye wo samrat se door gayi.. aur samrat bhi hum se
is liye door chala gaya...
M:par nupur..
N:mayank me is bareme koi baat nahi karna chahti hu..
ab so jaao rat bahut ho gayi haii
n went to washroom....


on otherside Gunjan's POV:
nahi samrat kabhi aisa nahi kar sakta..wo excel chood de
aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta Excel to uski jaan thi wo sheena
ki wajse Excel chhod de... ?????aur frndzzz frndzzz to
uski family the life the wo aise kaise chod sakrta haii
jarur kuch galar femi hui hogi.. warna samrat aisa kabhi
nahi kar sakta .. di ne kaha ki wo sheena ki wajase unko
chhod ke chala gaya... n started to cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
kitna khush tha wo excel me uski life excel thi..
she get up from her bed n the n open her bag n took
out a book from her bag n open it n took a pic of
samrat which lies between pages... n carresed it n
closed her eyes n ters came out from her eyes..
i missed you samrat... hum kitne khush the na......aur
humari college life.....

Flash backkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
A boy was playing basket ball in basketball court...
n he did the last basket.n again he won n victory smile
crossed his lipssssssss. n he turned n gave flying kiss
to girlssssssss.... n seeing this girls were very happy
n totally fida on him n his style.. n every movement..
he is non othe then SAMRAT SHERGILL...
S:hey vivky never chellenge me again ok...
aur agar karni haii to harne ke liye taiyar rehna..
V:sry .. samrat n bent his head...
benji came n hugged hiiimmmm
B:congo dude u again wonn....
S:thx dude...
B:so college ki aan baan aur shaan n also har ladki ki
jaan ab kya karna haii ??? match to jeet gaya....
sab jante haii ki basket ball me tujse koi nahi jeet
sakta...
S:ha wo to thik haiii.... n started to look here n there.
B:dude tu khush nahi haii ki tune us vicky ko uski aukat
dikhadi.. u r the best dude...
S:ha dude...
?(in mind):chahe koi kuch bhi kahe koi bhi compliment
kyu na de par mere liye sahi kya haii aur mene ye sahi
kiya ye sirf ek hi ladki bata sakti haii wo haii
sirf meri chashmish...
B:sam sam
samrat came out from his thoughts...
S:ha bol na
B:kaha kho gaya tha??? aur bar bar kise dhundj raha haii
us sheenaaaaaaaaaaaaa ko???
S:nahi dude sheena aaj late aane wali haii... use kuch
important kaam haii isliye me to chashmish ko dhundh
raha hu aaj subah se jabse college aaya hu tabse ek baar
bhi use nahi dekha...
B:oh to tu chashmish ko dhun but stopped as he saw angry
face of samrat...
B:sry fir se galti ho gayi humari gunjan aur tumhari
chashmish ka ek hi address haii ...
S:thik haii me use mil kar aata hu...
n went from there..
B:ha sam ja use jake mil le warna tuje chain nahi milega

aur saari frustation humpe nilalega...
n smiled in mind .(wese bhi tu uske
bagair ya use dekhe bagair nahi reh sakta..
kyunki jo samrat sunday college off hota haii is liye
use dekhne uske ghar padhne ke bahene se ja sakta haii
wo college me use na dekhe apni chashmish se na mile aur
apne pure din ka aur apne dil ka haal na batade wo nahi
reh pata...aur uska khayal bhi to apni jaan se jyada
rakhta haii uski har khabar rakhta haii... kitna pyar
karta haii .. aur gunjan bhi is idiot ko kitna pyar
karti haii par pata nahi ye duffar kab samjega .. aur
us gadhi sheenahhhhhhhh ke piche pada haiii...

n went from there to canteen as their fav place.....
samrat went to library every1 was staring at him ..
but every14 kne dat he was there only coz gunjan was there
otherwise sam didnt kne the library word...
samrat saw gunjan was sitting on a chair n lost in her
book... sam smiled n mummerd
S:kitna padhti haii... meri cute si chashmish...
n went to her n sat beside her.. but gunjan didnt notice
him as she was lost in book....
finally samrat spoke...
S:kash koi itni importance apne best frnd ko bhi deta???
n made sad face hearing dis gunjan conserntration broke
n saw sanrat infront of her... n smiled...
G:samrat yaha kya kar rahe ho tum to basket ball khel
rahe the na???
S:wahhh chashmish na hii na hello... direct out of
syllabus ka questions start kar diya....
G:samrat tum ye kya bol rahe ho???
S:kuch nahi tum mere sath aao muje tumse kuch baat karni
haiii..
G:samrat tum jao muje padhna haii..
S:wat padhna haii chashmish.. tum mere sath chal rahi hu
dats final nomore arguments chalo....
he held her hald n made her stand n took her out of
library..
gunjan was staring at him as he held her hand...
n lost in him ... n did as he said....
then they sit on stair.....
G:ab batao kya haii kya baat karni thi???
S:chashmish me kya tumse aise hi nahi mil sakta kya??
G:samrat...
S:accha thik haii batata hu..
n told her his whole story.... when did he get up ???
bla bla bla n last he won match ...
S:so chashmish aaj me jeet ke aaya hu ..muje kya gift
milega???
G:samrat tum aise challenges kyu lete ho???
S:sry chashmish me janta hu ki tume ye sab pasan nahi haii
par tum to janti ho na ki jab bat basket ball bike aur
chashmish par aati haii to me khud ko control nahi kar
sakta...
G:janti hu samrat... par me ye bhi janti hu ki samrat
kabhi koi galat kam nahi karega ryt..
S:ryt chashmish as usual.. kyunki samrat ko chashmish se
behtar koi nahi janta khud samrat bhi nahi ..
n smiled n gunjan also smiledddddddd..

sry have to stop here...............cozzzzz Sleepy

Precap;
flash back continue and...................sry cant tell

kyu bola juth nupur ne gunjan se?? kyu nahi bata rahi
nupur gunjan ko sach??? akhr samrat haii kaha???
kya gunjan ko kabhi sach ka pata chal payega??? ya
uska pehla pyar hamesha ke liye adhura reh jayega????

wait 4 next updates.....


hope u will nt bore this part...
if u like it do comment m waiting 4 ue comment

Love'
Radhi...Wink

 


 



Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 11 January 2011 at 2:49pm

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Hiiiii
Awesome update
Loved it
It's getting more and more interesting
Can't wait 4 da next update
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
wonderful update....cant wait to know where samrat is and why nupur lied about him......i hope gunjan doesnt believe what nupur said and listens to her heart.....cont soon

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