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My Last Desire... Sajan ss !!! (Complited) (Page 57)

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 3:08am | IP Logged
Wao awsm updt yar.
superb ,totaly outstanding.
luv d sajan scenes.
nd samrat innocence .
aww..... he ws so cute.
excellent job dear.
vry vry nice.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luvmu
vritika

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
hey radhiHug
wow mindblowing update dear...Clap
loved it to the core..awwwwwwwww the confession was shoooooooooooo cute dear...
loved it alott....Heart
i was visualizing the whole scene in  my mind..it was dammm good yrr and the benji sam convo and their bb match was too good yrrrClap...it remines me of the the old mjht daysssUnhappy....awwwww im missing them soooo muchCry...
and
omg omg omg omg omg omg Silly
sajan's room part was......
mannnnnnnnnnnnnnn....Day DreamingBlushingDay Dreaming
loved it yrrrr....
and aagay nai pata chashmish oos larkay ne oos larki ke saath kya kia thaROFL
 he is soooo innocent mannn...and his innocense is making me love him evenmoreBlushing
u wrote it beatifully radhi..i can't stop praising u for this beautiful updateClap...amazing yrrr...and im sooo sorrry for the late reply dear...but u rockkkk girll...!!
keep rockin
ggThumbs Up....muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
thanks alot for the pm...plzz continue soon..
love,
gunjan mariya..



Edited by gunjanmariya - 03 March 2011 at 3:42am

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edited my rp on pg 53
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Hey frnds i knw u all were waiting for the next update of
this ss..... so here is the part.... i knew  m stratching
story bt its necessary.....
here is the part ...... n u will come to knw soon y m
writing all these scenes... i mean sajan's close ness.
hope u all like it...

PART 13

samrat was brushing his lips with her... n she was lost
in his love.... both were kissing each other.. n then
gunjan was feeling his love... for the first time she was
feling world's best thing. aftr sumtimes samrat broke the
kiss n said in innocent state...

S:chashmish aage nahi pata ki us ladke ne us ladki ke
sath kya kiya tha jise wo pyar karta tha.. Dr.shashank
muje wahase le gaye the....

n gunjan had tears in her
eyes.... she put her hand on her mouth n ran from there..
S:chashmish ro kyu rahi thi..???? gunjan ran to another
room n locked it n stood with the support of door... n
slowly sat down n cried her heart out......samrat came
to this room n heard her sobs... he knocked the door...


S:chashmish tum ro rahi ho chashmish... m sry chashmis
ab main tume nahi sataunga chashmish... i promise pakka
promise god wala promise chashmish.. chashmish aage se
koi shetani koi shararat nahi karunga chashmish..
chashmish muje sach me nahi pata haii us ladke ne us
ladki ke sath aage kya kiya jise wo pyar karta tha..
sach me chashmish.. muje nahi pata main tume kaise
manaau us ladke ki tarah main bhi tumse pyar karta hu
chashmish par main uske jaisa nahi hu na main pagal hu'
ek dum paagal.. sab log sach hi kehte haii...

G(in mind):jo pyar muje chahiye wo muje mil raha haii
par muje khushi nahi dard ho raha haii kyunki main janti
hu wo us haalat main nahi haii....
n heard samrat 's words....n gunjan heard his sobs....

G:samrat ro raha haiii... aur wo ye sab kya bol raha haii
she immidetly opened the door.. both saw each other..
n rushed in each others arm...
S:chashmish muje nahi aata tumse pyar karna ...jaise
tum muje karti ho....
they broke the hug... n wiped his tears....

G:samrat ro mat chalo yaha se.... n took her to the
room n made her sit on bed n made him drink water...
gunjan sat beside him.. samrat put his head on her
shoulder...
S:chashmish main accha nahi hu fir se tume rula diya par
chashmish sach main muje nahi pata fir us ladke ne kya
kiya... main tumse waisa pyar nahi kar sakta. jaise
tum karti ho...
G:kis ne kaha tumse ki tume pyar karna nahi aata.. ha...
agr tumhe pyar nahi karna aata hota to tum muje kiss
thodi na karte... said with broken voice...
S:chashmish use pyar karna kehte haii na...???
G:ha..
samrat moved his head n held her by shoulder n
again brushed his lips with her.. n gunjan responded soon
n closed their eyes... this time it was too long...
second time it was so passionate.. like they were
celebrating their love... n slowly they landed to bed..
gunjan's arm was in his hair....
gunjan n samrat was still kissing her... after sumtimes
they broke the kiss... n samrat put his head on her
shoulder like hiding his face in her neck.. n put his
arm around her stomuch n gunjan was moving her hand in
his hair n he slept soon... n tears were flowing out from
gunjan's eyes........

GUNJAN'S POV:
kya ho raha haii humare sath kuch samaj me nahi aa raha..
pehle to samrat ki aisi haalat... jise meri rooh kaamp
uthti haiii.. jise dekhke main tadap uthti hu...aur fir
ye janne ki koshish ki samrat ko kisne pagal kiya haii..
is koshish main me sayad ye bhi bhul gayi ki samrat ko
thik bhi karna haii... muje usko thik bhi karna haii..
aur is chakkar me kyu maine apne pyar ka izhar kiya...
wo bhi tab jab samrat na to iska matlab samajta haii aur
na janta haii... aur is haalat me bhi wo mujse keh raha
haii ki wo mujse pyar karta haiii janti hu wo is halat me
nahi haii ki wo samaj sake ki wo jo keh raha haii uska
matlab kya haiii aur uska asar muj par kya hoga...
hamesha main chahti thi ki samrat bhi mujse pyar kare aur
wo mujse pyar kar bhi raha haiii par wo sach nahi haii
aur mein ye janti hu...ise badi aur badkismati kya hogi
meri ki main jis insan se pyar karti hu aur jo main use
chahti hu wo muje mil to raha haii par wo kuch bhi sach
nahi haii sab badal jayega sab chhut jayega jab samrat
thik ho jayega...bahut takleef ho rahi haii muje is sab se
aur samrat ne aaj muje kiss. aur wo bhi mere lips pe...
aur main hamesha use ye sab chahti thi.. usne muje kiss
kiya bhi aur maine bhi apne pyar ko mehsoos kiya par is
dil ko kaise samjau ki itne door na jaye ki waha se wapas
aana muskil ho jaye.. itne saalo se maine apne dil ko
sambhal ke rakha haii yaha tak ki apni nazro ko bhi taki
koi pahechan na le.. par aaj hum ne jo kiya ... sirf
bhram haii mera aur insan ko bhram me nahi jeena chahiye
kyunki mein janti hu ki jab ye bhram tootega tab mein
bhi toot jaungii... aur ye ek na ek din jarur hoga...
muje khud ko sambhal na hoga..... samrat ek to pehle se
hi thik nahi haiii.. aur meine uske samne apne pyar ka
izhar karke bahut badi galti kar di haii... sayad isi
liye wo bol raha tha ki wo paagal haii.. muje samrat ko
thik karna haii aur main hi use aur paagal bana rahi hu..
abhi muje apne dard ke bareme na soch kar apne pyar ke
bareme soch na haii ... uske gunehgar ko dhundhna haii
jisne samrat ki ye haalat ki haiii...aur sath sath use
wo samrat banana haii jaise wo pehle tha.... plzz god
help me plzz...

she slept in thoghts... its still hurting her...
coz samrat's love meant her a lot... n no1 can desribe
hw she felt nw... she was going throght all these...
it was hardest moment to still stay with samrat...
bt for his sake she had to... for her love. she had to..

( sry if i bored u with this POV)

NEXT DAY..................


sun rays fell in gunjan's eyes... n she opened her eyes...
n saw samrat was sleeping hugging her... so close to her.
his hair was blowing.... she smiled seeing him as he was
looking so cute while sleeping.... she slowly freed her
self n put his head on pillow n made him sleep properly..
n properly covered him with bedsheet n carresed his hair'
n slowly bent her head n kissed his forhead n whispered
G:i love you...

n then went to washroom.... she made breakfast...
n went to room n saw samrat still sleeping...
G:ye so raha haiii i hope iske sir par jo mujse pyar
karne ka bhoot sawar ho gaya haii wo utar jaaye..
warna use aur takleef hogi... sayd maine hi galti ki haii
par maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki meri baat ka us par
itna bada asar hoga. ab muje har ek kadam sambhal kar
rakhna hoga... aur sath sath apne aap par control karna
hoga taaki wo jyada aage na badhe... kyunki meri ek
galti us par bhari pad sakti haii...  apne pyar ka
izhar karne ki galti kar chuki hu.. aur uska asar bhi me
dekh chuki hu.. ab muje samrat ko jald se jald thik karna
haii....


she took her lappy..n started to collect information..
she was sitting on sofa... n door bel rang... she went
n opened the door... nurse was at the door...
G:come..
N:dr. wo sab information nikali haii..
G:ha bolo kya pata chala...??
N:wo jo dr haii na samrat shergill ka usne aap ke dost
ka operation hi nahi kiya tha... wo to use paise diye
gaye the wo drama karne ke liye... aur use sock diye
jaate the paagal karne ke liye.. aur is liye bhi dono
doctors ko paise diye jaate the..
gunjan was socked......................
G:kya ???
G(in mind):tabhi samrat us din hospital me us room ko
dekh kar dar gaya tha or chillane laga tha...
N:haa aur un logo ko itne paise diye gaye the ki wo dono
ho doctor ab london shift ho chuke haiii.... aur london
me bahut famous doctor ban chuke haii....
G:london me??? par ye sab tume kaise pata chala???
N:dr ji unka name address to maine computer se nikala
haii par waha ek sweaper haii jo ye sab janta haii par
use dhamki di gayi thi ki kisi ko bhi kuch na bataye..
kyunki tab aap ke dost ke saaath sath dusre dost bhi ..
G:wo sweaper kon haii??
N:wo waha pichle 15 saalo se kaam karte haii...
aur unhe paiso ki jarurat haii.. maine unhe bola jitne
paise chahiye milenge par muje sach batao...
G:kya tum muje unka pata de sakti ho??
N:ha ... n gave her addres...
G:thnk u...
N:dr ji wo us sweaper ko bhi paise dene padenge to ..
G:wo main unhe de dungi...
N:aur mere paise...???
G:paise tumhe aaj shaam tak mil jayenge....
N:thik haii main chalti hu...
n nurse went....
G:samrat ko sock diye jaate the... kitna suffer kiya hoga
isne.... use abhi meri jarurat haii muje apne dard ke
bareme bhula kar uska dard samajna hoga....

n went to room n saw samrat awake.. she put file on
table... n went to him... n satbeside him.. samrat smiled'
seeing her.. n hugged her...gunjan smiled...
G:gud morning samrat...
S:gud morning Dr.chashmish.... broke the hug...
G:ab fresh ho jaao me jaldi se nasta lagati hu ok..
S:chasmish tum mujse katti to nahi hona????
G:kyu main samrat se katti kyu hogi???
S:kyunki kal mene tume rula diya...par chashmish sach me
muje nahi pata tha ki us ladke ne us ladki ke sath kya
kiya???
G:kis ladke ne samrat tum kal bhi yahi bol rahe the...??
S:wo chashmish pata haii kal jab tum muje Dr.shashank ke
ghar chhod ke gayi na to mein aur dr.shashank park me
khelne gaye the said exitedly.. like a child who got
his lost fav toy....n he was smiling...n seeing him
gunjan also smiled...

aur fir pata haii waha na ek ladka tha uske sath na ek
 ladki bhi thi aur wo na ek dusre se pyar bhi karte the
jaise samrat or Dr.chashmish karte haii haii na???
asked innocently n gunjan's heart pinched... she controled
her tears...

fir pata haii usne us ladki ko kiss kiya n told everything....
bt fir Dr.shashank muje waha se le gaye n made sad face..
gunjan smiled seeing his childish behaviour...


G(in mind):to samrat ne is liye wo sab kiya taaki usne'
sab park me dekha tha... aur meine kaisa react kiya
aur uski wajase samrat khud ko paagal bol ne laga tha..
S:ab to mujse naraj nahi ho na??? katti nahi hona??
G:nahi hu samrat par muje promise karo ki aaj ke baad
tum apne aap ko paagal nahi kaho ge???
S:promise.. par katti to..
G: main tumse katti nahi hu.. aur na kabhi
hogi... aur ab chalo jaldi se fresh ho kar aao ...

n samrat went to washroom... n did breakfast....
S:chashmish hum aaj bhi Dr.shasahnk ke ghar ja rahe haii??
G:ha samrat.. wo mein dr. hu na to muje hospital me
patient ko thik karna padta haii....
S:pr chashmihsh dr.shashank bhi to dr.haii ???
G:to wo bhi honge.. hospital me main tume padma aunty
ke paas chhod ke jaa rahi hu...tum kal unke sath
maza aaya tha na.. aur aaj to benji ko bhi maine bola hai
ki wo tumhare sath rahega...
S:sachi chashmmish ??? his face was grinig...
G:haa.. sachi..
both went to shashank's house... dr.shashank has already
left to sanjeevni..
P:are gunjan tum aao na???
G:aunty wo samrat ko yahi chhod ke jaa rahi hu..
P:haa wo shashank ne muje bataya tha...
G:aunty wo humara ek frnd benji bhi aayega...
P:koi baat nahi beta ise apna hi ghar samjo....
G:thnk u aunty... aur samrat tum..
S:bilkul bhi masti nahi karunga... par agar aunty ko
mere saath masti karne ka mann hua to???
padma n gunjan laugheed....
P:hum dono masti karenge samrat..
B:aur main bhii... benji entered...
B:namaste aunty..
P:namaste beta.. so ab hum teeno milke masti karenge..
B:chal samrat bahar basket ball khelte haii,,
S:ha chalo main ball bhi laya hu.. n both went out...
p:are beta beitho na???
P:nahi aunty wo muje thoda kaam haii is liye muje jaana
haii par plzz samrat ka khayal rakhna????
P:ji beta...
gunjan was abt to go....
P:gunjan.. she turned..
G:ji aunty...
P:wo tumhara name kya hai???
G:ji???
P:wo tumhara pura name...
G:gunjan Bhushan...
padma socked hearing this...
P:aur tumhare father ka name shashi bhushan...
G:ha aunty aapko kaise pata......????
padma soon recovered from the sock...
P:wo bas aap ke papa humare dost hua karte the..
is liye... gunjan smiled...
G:accha aunty main chalti hu...
padma smiled a bit...
n gunjan left...
P(in mind):to shashank mujse ye chupa rahe the... yahi
haii meri bati... gunjan bhushan nahi gunjan gupta....
shashi bhushan ki nahi shashank n padma gupta ki beti..
gunjan gupta.. unki ek lauti beti... or meri jaan.....
aur aaj muje meri beti mil gayi haii.. aur is baar main
use khud se dur nahi jaane dungi.....chahe iske liye
muje kuch bhi kyu na karna pade....
n tears were streaming frm  her eyes....

gunjan went to bank to get money...
then she went to sweapers house.....

precap:
every1 in london... n gunjan notice sumthing...



Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting  4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word.......


LoveHeart
Radhi...Wink



Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 04 March 2011 at 4:00am

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amaiznggggggg update dear
loved it to the core
really superbbb n fantastic
enjoyed reading it =)
awwwwwww
first scnes so romantic
sammy extra cuteeeeeeee
 
gunjun pov
hats off
very well written =)
u have done a great job
keep rockingggggggggg
 
pklzzzzzzzzzzz continie sooooon
cant wait to read more =)
update all ur ff n ss
 

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wow radhika..... its awesome
very very very nice update
superb Clap Clap

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