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My Last Desire... Sajan ss !!! (Complited) (Page 53)

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cant w8t for next part

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Hey frnds here is the next part of this ss...
hope u like it.. by this part if i hurt u then sry..
as i dont knw wat u all expect frm me...
i knw u all want to knw further story.. bt in this case
i also want to show wat hapopen between them when story
is procesiing bt i promise from the next part ..
i will unfold the story slowly slowly...
sry again if i hurt any 1...


PART 11


Gunjan came to the hall n every1 stood up...
G:benji wo samrat tumse milba chahte haiii....
benji smiled....
B:main bhi use milna chahta hu...
G:ha chalo par benji use kuch jyada yad dilane ki koshish
mat karna wo waise bhi ek sath aap logo ko dekhke
stressed haiii....
B:thik haiii...
G:or jiju muje un doctors ka name or address chahiye...
M:thik haii aaj tume sab mil jayega.... nupur chalo
chalte haii...
Su:hum log bhi chalte haiii muje jald se jald london
jana haii...
n mayur n adhani left..
D:gunjan hum bhi chalte haii agar koi kaam ho to call
kar dena....
G:thik haiiii dia ...
D:chalo dodo...
U:bbye gunjan or sammy ka khayal rakhna..
G:ji uday bhaiya n smiled...
n benji n gunjan went to room...
samrat smiled seeing benji n tears started to drop frm
benji's eyes seeing samrat n his smile...
he ran to him n hugged him....
S:benji tum ro kyhu rahe ho??
they broke the hug.... n gunjan smiled...
G:benji is liye ro raha haii taki tum uske sath nahi
rehte... na masti karte ho jaise pehle karte the...
S:benji ro mat ab hum teeno milke masti karenge..
kyu chashmish???
B:ha sam...or hum fir se basket ball khelenge jaise pehle
khelte the...
S:ha kitna maza aata tha na...
B:gunjan samrat kitna badal gaya haiii....
maine un logo ko bola tha ki sam ko waha mat bhejo par'
wo nahi mane... aur sam wild ban chuka tha... kisi ko
bhi marne lagta tha.. aur use control karna bahut
muskil ho gaya tha... said with sad face...
par gunjan samrat thik to ho jayega na???
S:are benji me thik ho jaunga ab muje pehle ki tarah roj
chakkar bhi nahi aate... aur jab sir dukhta haii or
chakkar aate haii to chashmish muje thik kar deti haii..
saying with smiling face....
G:ha benji samrat bahut jald thik ho jayega hume humara
samrat.... aur...
B:tume tumhara pyar.... aaj bhi samrat se pyar karti ho
na????
gunjan had tears.....gunjan sat beside samrat...
n staring at samrat n put her one hand on his cheek...
G:ha aaj bhi ise pyar karti hu...
S:chashmish tum mujse pyar karti ho??????????????
gunjan nodded...
gunjan couldnt take it any more... she confessed her love
in front of him bt the circumstanses he was able to
understand wat it meant.. n hugged him.....
n samrat hugged her too....
S:agr tum mujse pyar karti ho to main bhi tumse pyar
karta hu thik haiii......
n dats it... world stopd there..... wat samrat said....
n benji was witness.... they confessed their love ...
bt he wasnt in state to understand wat he was saying....
n wat he was doing...gunjan hugged him even more tightly.
it was like all planed by god..... it was the most
januable moment of their life... gunjan n benji knew dat
samrat was nt in his real sense... n he didnt knw hw
it mean for gunjan...bt though it was enough for
gunjan to live rest of life ... n she was waiting for
this moment from long time... she knew samrat's state...
bt in future if he alright n will nt love her.. this
moment will give her strange to live her life...
B:gunjan ye samrat...
gunjan broke the hug n wiped her tears....
G:samrat tum or benji baskeball kheloge????
S:ha chashmish ... said exitedly....
benji chalo main ball le kar aata hu...
benji understood dat gunjan wanted to be alone...
B:ha chalo sam.. gunjan  hum bahar haiii....
Gunjan nodded.....

n samrat n benji left the room....
gunjan went near window... n starng at sky...
G:aaj mene apne pyar ka izhar kiya to wo is haalat me
nahi haii ki wo samaj sake.. aur usne bhi kiya par main
janti hu ki wo is halat me nahi haii ki wo samaj sake
ki uske jo kaha uska matlab kya haii... main janti hu
bhagwan ye sab aapne kiya haiii.... uske liye thnk u..
thnk u so much.. sayad yahi pal muje samrat ke thik hone
ke baad jee ne ke liye sahara denge... kyunki sayad
samrat ke thik hone ke baad wo wahi samrat ban jayega jo
muje apni best frnd manta tha... maine hamesha is pal ka
apni zindgi me intzar kiya tha par meri badkismati to
dekho.. humne jo kaha wo sirf kehne ke liye tha wo sach
nahi tha.. aur na sayad kabhi sach hoga.... plzz bhagwan
agar aap wo sab sach nahi kar sakte to koi baat nahi par
me apne samrat apne pyar ko is halt me nahi dekh sakti
plzz god use thik kardo........ plzz its MY LAST DESIRE..
aaj ke baad aapse kuch nahi mangungi... jo hamesha samrat
ke dil me alag se jagah chahti thi wo bhi nahi plzzzgod
listen my Last Desire...... n closed her eyes n folded
her hand... n two tears droped from her eyes...

on otherside... samrat foound his basket ball n they
went to basket ball court n they were playing....
no doubt samrat was nt all right bt in basket ball
he still champ... it was his passion  n he proved
every time... when samrat did basket.. we could see the
jhalak of our handsome cool boy samrat...
the same exitement the same paaion the same talent....
nthing changed.. the same expression....
finally he won the match.....
both came in .. samrat was very excited....
S:chashmish chashmishhhhhh he was shouting in excitement..
gunjan came to hall... n saw samrat happy....
gunjan was smiling seeing her...
G:kya hua samrat???
S:chashmish maine benji ko fir se hara diya yes i won...
n saw victory smile on his face...
benji was also happy seeing samrat... n they were
confident they they could get their samrat back....
G:gud samrat .. chalo main tumhare liye energy drink
lati hu....
n gave him energy drink,...
n wiped sweat of his face...
B(in mind):college main bhi aisa hi karti thi jab bhi
samrat basket ball khelke aata tha.. n smiled....
just then gunjan's phone rang..
G:hello..
N:gunjan
G:dii..??
N:gunjan wo hum city hospital gaye the par hume samrat
ke doctor ke bareme koi kuch bhi batane se inkar kar
rahe haii....
G:thik haii main hi jati hu...
n cut the call..
B:kya hua gunjan ??
G:wo mujse city hospital jana haiii...
B:par samrat..
G:wahi soch rahi hu .. main use fir se waha nahi leja
sakti... aur main use akela bhi nahi chhod sakti..
B:kya main use ghar le jaau .. waha sab se paas..
G:nahi benji tumne dekha nahi samrat ka reaction jab
usne tum logo ko dekha tha... wo aap logo par fir se
trust nahi karega.. aur wo tumhare sath is liye haii
kyunki tumne use tab paagal nahi samja tha....
B:gunjan kya tum kabhi unki galti ko maaf nahi karogi.??
G:main kaun hoti hu  maaf karne wali.. par unki galti
ki wajase samrat ne jo suffer kiya haiii... n broke her
voice.. ye faisla samrat hi karega ki use kya karna haii
par tab jab wo thik hoga...
B:to ab kya karna haii...??
G:wahi soch rahi hu..
jst then an idea strike in her mind...
G:dr.shashank ke ghar.... samrat wahi safe rahega...
she called  dr.shashank.. n asked for help.. n he said
yes...
G:benji tum jaao. main samrat ko wahi chhod dungi...
B:agar meri jarurat padeto call kar dena...
G:ok bbye..
benji smiled n bbye sam..
S:bbye kal hum fir se khelenge thik haii..
B:ok bbye...  n hugged n benji left...
G:chalo samarat hum chalte haiii....
S:kaha jana haii chashmish ??
G:wo hum dr.shashank ke ghar ja rahe haiii...
S:kyu???
G:tume ghar me hi rehna haii???
S:nahi chalo bahar unke ghar chalte haii par wo fir se..
G:nahi injection lagayenge thik haii..
samrat smiled ok.
they gor ready n gunjan drove off to shashank's house..
Dr.shashank n padma were there...
padma opened the door...
P:jee..
padma n gunjan was feeling strange seeing each other..
G:wo dr.shashank??
dr.shashank came frm behind...
Sh:are gunjan come in.. padma ye  mere hospital ki bahut
acchi doctor haii....
sajan came in... padma gave them water...
G:sir main ise yaha chhod ke ja rahi hu wo muje city
hospital ja rahi hu...
Sh:thik haii...
S:chashmish tum kyu ja rahi ho?? main yaha akela nahi
rahunga...
G:main hospital ja rahi hu tume chalna haii fir muje
mat bolna ki wo log tume le gaye...
S:nahi main yahi rahunga.. he scared...
G:dats gud... thnks sir thnk u aunty...
n sry for trouble....
Sh:beta is me sry kehne ki koi jarurat nahi haii tum
meri beti bhi to ho...
gunjan smiled n hugged him... n shashank too hugged her..
after shashank's word padma 's mind on its duty...
P(in mind):meti beti??? kahi gunjan meri beti to nahi..
jarur shashank mujse kuch chupa rahe haii....
they broke the hug.... n gunjan went to padma..
G:thnk uaunty.. n hugged her..
n padma felt strange.. n feel gud...
P(in mind):aisa kyu lag raha haii koi aapna haii...
kahi sach me gunjan humari beti to nahi...  pata nahi
muje meri beti kab milegi..
they broke the hug..
n went to samrat..
G:main jaldi aa jaungil..
S:ok plzz jaldi aana.. n made sad face...
n gv him chocolate,.. so nw he was smiling...
n gunjan left...
P:ye gunjan koun haii??
Sh:meine bola na dr haii...
 samrat chalo hum garden me chalte haii...
n shashank avoid eyecontact ...
before padma could ask anything shashank n samrat left..
P:jarur ye mujse ye kuch chupa rahe haii par main ye
jan kar hi rahungi ki meri beti kaha haii....
shashank took samrat to the park...
n they were talking... n chatting.. n then  samrat saw
a girl n boy n heard their convo...
B:main tumse pyar karta hu..
G:maim bhi tumse pyar karti hu...
boy gv her a rose n kissed her both cheeks n forhead
n then lips... shashank looked at samrat n saw in
direction where samrat was continuesly looking....
shashank moved his gaze...
Sh:samrat chalo hum ghar chalte haii...
n tool him to home back...
Sh:padma samrat ke liye fruits lana...
padma brought fruits for samrat...
Sh:ye lo khaao..
S:muje nahi khana.. chashmish kab aayegi..
Sh:wo aajayegii tum ye lo khaao...
S:nahi ..
P:laao me khila du....
n put one peace in his moouth... as she asked lovingly..
he couldnt refuse...
n padma made him eat loving ly n they were talking so
freely.. n laughing n smiling.. n shashank was very
happy seeing padma ..after so many years she laughed...

on otheside gunjan inquered abt samrat's dr. bt all in
vain ...
Gunjan n nurse...
G:jitne paise chahiye milenge par muje 5 yrs pehle ki
saari infomation chahiye....
N:dr, ji wo me aap ko kal aapke ghar pohcha dungi...
par kisi ko pata nahi lagna chahiye...warna meri
naukri chali jayegi...
G:nahi pata lagega.. par kal muje saari information
chahiye...
N:thik haii...
n gunjan left... n drove off to shashank's house...
G(in mind):janti hu me galat kar rahi hu ... par muje
kaise bhi karke us dr.ke paas pahochna haii....
she reached there..
S:chashmish tum kyu late aayi main kab se tumhara wait
kar raha tha..aur pata haii aunty ne muje kya kaha..
n tols whole story...
gunjan saw samrat very happy...
G:hum chalre haii
P:aate rehna ..
G:thik haii bbbye aunty bbye sir..
they bid bbye n in way gunjan saw samrat lost in his
thoughts....
G:samrat kya hua???
S:kuch nahi.. chalo jaldi ghar chalte haii....
G:kyu itni jaldi kyu haii??
S:wo muje bhukh lagi haii...
G:oh to tume bhukh lagi haii???
S:ha chalo na jaldi chashmish..
they reached.. samrat direct went to his room..
n started to paint image...
gunjan was suspicious ...she made dinner..
n called samrat samrat ate dinner himself...
n gunjan was suprised....
n also ate medicine...
G:kya baat haii aaj samrat ne sab kuch kha bhi liya aur
medicine bhi kha li..???
they after that.. gunjan was still confussed...
G(in mind):ye samrat kya kabse socj raha haii???
S:chashmish ab sab finish ho gaya na???
G:ha kyu???
S:kuch nahi tum room me jaao main aata hu..
G:par tum jaga ja rahe ho???
S:chashmish jaao na  dekho main hamesha tumhari baat
manta hu na aaj tum meri baat mano...
G:accha thik haii par tum ja kaha rahe ho???
S:wo bas bahar garden me ja raha hu.. bas 5 minute
me aajaunga .. tum jaao...
G:ok..
n gunjan went to room,.. n samrat went to garden...
n came back with a rose...
gunjan just came out of washroom.. n saw samrat..
G:samrat tum ye red rose kyu laye??/
samrat went near her.. n offerd her red rose...
n gunjan took it... n he was looking at her...
S:tum muje pyar karti ho na??
G:ha main tumse pyar karti hu.. she was totaly lost in
hi chocolaty eyes...
samrat went near her...(actually he was doing which he
saw in garden)
S:main bhi tumse pyar karta hu.. n pulled her near him..
as in park boy pulled girl near hi..
they samrat kissed her forhead. gunjan closed her eyes.
they kissed on her both eyes n then both cheeks..
gujan hand around his neck n they were puling each
other near each other.. then samrat slowly bent his head
n brushed his lips with her.. n rose which was i gunjan's
hand fell dow...n both were kissing.... n pulling more
n more close to each other.... totally lost in their
wolrd.. both have lost their sense... samrat was doing
what he saw in garden... n gunjan was lost in his love..
then samrat broke the kiss..........
S:chashmish aage nahi pata ki us ladke ne us ladki ke
'sath kya kiya tha jise wo pyar karta tha......
dr.shashank muje waha se le gaye......
n gunjan had tears in her eyes.............



Precap:
gunjan's pov.... n further story..




Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting  4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word.......


LoveHeart
Radhi...Wink



Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 01 March 2011 at 11:21am

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
heyyyyy radhiii

lovelyyy update
sajan confessed dere luvv..althgh sam dint understood nythng bt still..d way dey did it was realyyyy vryyy sweeeeet
n den d shashank,padma n gnjn thng..
goddd..ab ye ek aur mystery haiiiii
n den d end part..where sam gve gnjn  a rosee..n also kissssed her..omggg
well all dat he did was in innocense....whereas it meant alotttttt 2 gnjn..
bt d last lyn dat sam said...was realyyy hurtng 4m gnjns povvv
thnx 4 d pm
n
cont sooooooooooon


Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 03 March 2011 at 4:03am

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
OMG!! Wow!! Radhii What an Excellent, fabulous and totally rocking update.............Very very well written........Each scene n Dialogues from start to finish was just amazing and Mindblowing....Perfect updateThumbs Up......Ur update was so good that I am speechless today .I have fallen short of words to express how good your update was....I loved reading the update n imagining each scene a lotttttttttttt........Day Dreaming....Lovely and wonderfull story.....Ur story line is progressing really well....Good work Radhii..........ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap......................................

Every scene n dialogues from Samrat meeting benjii N Benjii running N hugging Samrat,to benji N Samrat playing basket ball N scenes in Dr. shashanks home N Samrat n Padma bonding every scene was FabulousThumbs UpThough I liked each scene n dialogue of Sajan but I just loved these 2 scenes --When Gunjan confessed her love 4 samrat and Samrat who also loves Gunjan But As He is not in his senses so he doesn't understand this feeling N what it meant also innocently said 2 gunjan that he loves her also and Hugged her.This scene was really very very Cute and lovely SmileSmileClapClapLoved it a Lottt.....Thumbs Up.......and after seeing watching the girl n boy express their love 4 each other in the park I also thought N imagined Day Dreamingthat Now Samrat will also do this N give rose 2 gunjan N will innocently kiss her and He did it SmileWow!! What a sweet n cute sce
neDay DreamingEmbarrassedBlushing ClapBut Samrat doesnt know n realise what this meant 2 Gunjan................But Samrat also loves his chashmish in his heart and I am sure one day when he is completely well he will confess his love 4 Gunjan.....

Whole update was Stupendous and Fantabulous.......Just SUPERB n AWESOMEThumbs Up....

What I am thinking is Gunjan is Dr shashanks n Padmas daughter so Why doesnt padma know this  fact? and Why is gunjan's surname Bhushan? and why isnt she staying with her real parents and Why was padma saying meri beti merey pass wapis kab aayegii?? Whats the mystery behind This? Why n what is Dr shashnak hiding  from His wife?? So many Qs And Only U know the answers RADHI..So DEAR Do Update Soonnnnnnnnnn PlssSmile....

Thanks 4 pmHug...and Once again Oustanding and rocking Update ..Well  Done RadhiiClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap..

Love GunjanSmileSmile.........

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Edited by 1gunjan7 - 01 March 2011 at 1:00pm

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wen wil edit ur cmnts guys....
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Hiiiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved benji and sammy scene
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

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