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My Last Desire... Sajan ss !!! (Complited) (Page 48)

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nice part.......

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part 9 and 10 were awesome
gr8 work
cont soon
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plz dont do this to us.....Cry plz come back soon..... plzzzzzzzzz
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Hey frnds here is the part.... n plzz guys ab request mat karna...
m really damn busy... n i dont knw when will i update next
update of all ff n ss.... i hope you all like the part.. plzz tell me
hws it??????????
u all knw dat m hv left IF bt if possible i will be surely back...
bt i cant promise you... if i get a channce to go to cyber cafe
i will dafinetly update........sry frnds bt i hv personal problems...
m missing u badly guys... u all were waititng 4 ud na.. just 4 u
all i came to cyber cafe ghar pe sab ko bola stdy karne ja rahi hu....
i knw juth bola bt 4 u i did it sryyyyy...............
n i dont knw when will i update my next partssssss....

PART 11

HE OPENED THE LETTER N STARTED TO READ IT...

DEAR SAMRAT,

 FIRST OF ALL SRY.... i knw ki tume  ye 'SORRY' world
pasand nahi haiii... par abhii jo tumhari aakho me aasoo haii wo
sirf aur sirf meri wajah haii.... plzz samrat apne aasoo poch lo..
main janti hu dii ne tume bahut sunaya hoga... plzz samrat...
(samrat wiped his tears)main janti hu ki jab tak ye letter tum
tak pohchega tab tak main tumse door ja chuki hogi... samrat
main janti hu ki is waqt tumhare dimag me kai sawal hoge...
jo tum mujse puchna chahte ho.... is liye maine tumhare paas
apna letter chhoda haii taki main saare sawal ke  jawab to nahi
par kuch sawal ke jawab de saku.... main janti hu ki tumse gussa
ho .. bahut gussa ho ki main tume chhod ke chali gayi????  aur
hona bhi chahiye... akhir maine kiya hi aisa haii samrat... par
samrat iske piche bhi koi wajah thi... tum jante hona main bauji
ka sapna pura karna chahti thi to is wajah se muje london jana
para.. i knw di ne tume bola hoga ki sheena ki wajase main ja
rahi hu ...par main doctor banna chahti thi is liye jaa rahi hu
samrat...(he knew she lied she never wanted to hurt him by
saying dat coz of sheena she left).. samrat tumne fir se rona shuru
kar diya... plzzz mat ro... its hurt me samrat jab muje pata chalta
haii tumhare aasuo ki wajah main hoo..(samrat quickly wiped
tears).. so i hope ki tume tumhare sawal ka jawab mil gaya hoga
ki me kyu chali gayi?? ab dusra sawal hoga ki???? maine tumhe
bataya kyu nahi???? samrat ye tum acchi tarah se jante ho ki agar
main tume batati to tum muje kabhi nahi jaane dete.... sach kaha
na??? is liye aur akhri baar tumse mili kyu nahi????  uska jawab
sayad mujse behtar tum jante ho.... ye tum jante ho ki na kabhi
me tume bbye keh paati na tum muje... is  liye jab gayi to tume
na bataya.. na dekha.. kyunki muje jaate huye na tum dekh paate
na main jaa pati... uske liye again sry... maine promises tode haii
tumhara sath rehne ka promise... tumse kuch na juth bolne ka...
well ab main chali gayi hu.. matlab main tumhari life main ab nahi
hu so tume meri baat manni padegi... tum apni zindgi waise hi
jeeyoge jaise pehle jee te the... i knw muskil haiii aakhir main jo
nahi hu.. i knw stupid joke tha... samrat maine aaj tak tumse
kuch nahi manga ..par aaj mang na chahti hu.. plzz samrat mere
bareme kuch janne ki koshish mat karna ki main kaha gayi ...
aur kab aaugi...aur na mere paas aaneki.. plzz humari kismat main
yahi likha haiii... aur agar nasee b main hoga to hum jarur milenge
tum bas sheena ke sath khush rehna aur muje kuch nahi  chahiye
.. samrat tume lagta hoga na ki main kitni selfish hu.. airf apne
bareme socha... uske liye again sry.. par main yaha tumhare liye
kuch chije chhod kar gayi hu... jo hume ek dusre se jodti haii...
humari dosti ko aur gehra banati haii... is letter ke sath tume jo
keys di haiii usse mere cupboard kholo...
(samrat opened it n socked to see the things.... )
usme dancing couple haiii jo tumne muje thik karke diya tha..
aur  wo rose day par rosess..... (samrat saw roses....) har ek
occation ka har ek rose jo tumne muje diya tha....... samrat waha
ek card bhi hoga jo tumne muje Rj hunt ke waqt diya tha....
(he saw all cards hade been given by him to her...)
yaad haii wo card jab tumne school me diya tha jab teracher ne
tume xmz ke time punish kiya tha aur maine tume samjaya tha
par tum kuch nahi bole sirf ek card de kar chale gaye....

aur wo card jab tumne friedship day par muje diya tha....

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aur jab school me me chup chup resti thi tab tumne muje apni
book me likhke diya tha.. use dekhke main hasne lagi aur teacher
ne muje punish kiya tha..
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aur yaad haiii hum smiles banate the..........


aur ye cards to tum itne dete the... aur teddy bhi ....
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aur wo wala teddy jab main vacation ke liye gayi thi...  aur wapas
aayi to.. diya tha.

aur bahut kuch... aur omg main bhi na kaisi bhulakkad hu
ye to puchna bhul ho gayi ki kaise ho?? i hope nw u r fine...
ab main nahi hu waha tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye to iska
matlab ye nahi ki tum apni medicine skip karo n all....
sab kuch time par lena.. aur check up ke liye bhi jaana ok.....
plzz samrat... is dost ka itna sa kehna maan lena. plzzz......
un yaadon ke chakkar main sab bhul gayi...aur tume fir se rula
diya..... iske liye meri taraf se ye smiley ...

i knw main thodi stupid hu... ki tume chhod ke chali gayi aur
tume ye sab dikha rahi hu... par ye sab main yahi chhod ke ja
rahi hu tumhare paas aur main yaha se humari dher saari yadain
le kar ja rahi hu.. opps sry ye batana bhul gayi sath sath tumhari
ek pic bhi.....  samrat ye ek ek chij maine sambhal ke rakhi haiii..
ise main tumhare hawale karti hu samrat....

At last i hope maine tumhara waqt barbad nahi kiya........
but i will miss you samrat.......
(n saw marks of tears on paper.....)
n just remember........

                                                                            Tumhari chashmish....

S(in mind):chashmish tum kyu muje chhhod ke chali gayi kyu???
tumne mujse jo manga haii wo main tumhe dunga chashmish...
n kneeled down....n cried his heart out.....
gang knocked the door..... samrat opened the door... n every had
tears seeing his conditons n their gifts n all stuff......
samrat packed every thing in a bag.. n took bag with him....
Su:bhai kaha ja rahe ho???
samrat didnt say anything.... n walked to his way....
M:use jane do....
samrat reached his home n kept this bag in his wardrobe.....
he was lost totally lost..... gang reached to his house...
n tried to talk with samrat... but no respense........
M:samrat kuch to bolo samrat.......
samrat was feeling like vomiting... n he rushed to washroom...
n gang followed him.. n saw blood ..........every1 hell socked....
n samrat fainted... gang took him to the hospotal....
Doctor said he had  tumor.....
Flashback ends....................................................

Su:aur is tarah hume pata chala ki bhai ko....
n cried...... gunjan had tears....
M:tumhare jane ke baad wo bilkul toot chuka tha..... humne
samrat ke parents ko bhi infoorm kiya tha.... wo log india aa
rahe the aur unka car accident ho gaya.... aur samrat ne apne jee
ne ki saari umeede chhod di... sheena bhi pata  nahi kyu kab
kaha chali gayi??? uske baad wo kahi nahi dekhi humne use
dhundhne ki koshish ki par wo nahi mili....
N:aur fir samrat ka operation tha but wo successful nahi raha...
A:humne bahut koshish ki par samrat ki dimagi haalat itni bigad
gayi thi ki use hume......
B:yeh sab hua tumhare jane ke baad....... aur yahi sach haiii jo
hum tumse chhupa rahe the.....
G:par ye sach nahi haii benji.....................
every1 was hell socked.....
B:kya???
G:ha samrat kabhi paagal tha hi nahi.....
All:wat???????????????????????????? they didnt belive on their ears..
G:ha samrat ko na tumor tha na uska koi operation hua tha..
aur na wo paagal tha...
M:par gunjan samrat ki haalat..
G:use paagal kiya gaya haiii................................
n dat was the biggest sock........... evry1 speechless.......
G:ha aur ye sach haii humne samrat ke saare reports fir se
karvaye....
N:par aisa kaise ho sakta haii??? doctors kyu juth bolenge???
G:par jo reports aaye haii wo yahi keh rahe haiii...
kuch to hua tha jo na aap log jante ho na main???
M:par koi samrat ko paagal kyu karna chahega????
G:yahi to pata lagana haii is liye to aap logo se puch rahi hu
ki mere jane ke baad kya hua tha....
A:jo hua tha wo hum bata chuke haii...
G:par ab bhi kuch missing haii......
Just then suhani's phone rang.....
she picked it up... n talked to the caller.....
Su:wo adhi muje london jana padega....
A:kyu???
Su:wo property jo bhai ke name haiii aur  shares  jo bhai ke name
haii wo Ranvijay bechna chahta haii....
G:ye ranvijay kon haii????
Su:wo humara cousin haiii...... bade papa ka beta......
par waha bhai ki sing chahiye.. par abhi uski haalat nahi haii ki
wo sing kare... ek to wo pehle hi humari saari peopety jo bhai
ke name thi wo le chuka haiii..... ab use ye bhi chahiye.....
M:suhani tum london jaao.. aur sab shot out karo...
aur gunjan ab hume kya karna haii.....
G:wo sab maine soch liya haiii....
N:agar koi kaam ho to...
G:wo main aap ko baad main bata dungi..... abhi samrat ke
medicine ka aur juce ka time ho gaya haii....

gunjan went to kitchen n lost in her thoughts......
she made juce n went to room..... n sat beside him....
G:samrat...
he slowly opened his eyes.... n smiled seeing her....
n sat on bed....
G:chalo juce pee lo n medicine...
S:chashmish khane le baad chocolate to di nahi???
G:wo dungii promise par pehle ye pee lo...
without arguing samrat drank it n ate medicine....
G:wah samrat ne to aaj bina kuch bole hi medicine kkha li...
S:chahsmish muje benji se milna haiii......
gunjan smiled..........................
G:thik haii abhi bula kar aati hu....
gunjan was abt to go samrat held her hand n made her sit again
n kissed her cheek...  gunjan was surprised.... n was smiling...

precap:
sajan moments n gunjan went to city hospital....

well if you like the part plzz dont res do comment...
n silent readers hit the like button.. m waiting 4 ur comment...
ur comments are very precious for me....missing u all badly..

CryCryCryCryCryCry

LoveHeart
Radhi...Wink


Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 21 February 2011 at 3:36am

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Aww, Radhika.....we will miss you too.......but be assured.....we will wait patiently for your next update. Do take care and all the best in life.Smile And yes.......the update was simply lovely.......loved reading this .

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Hi,

This was beautiful. And you are leaving us in middle of a big suspense.Cry

Anyways...I can understand your problem. But please do try to complete your ff.

Bye. tc.

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