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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chilluppp

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
radhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
killer update yar
ok was really longgggggggg one
but still wanna read moreeeeeeeeee
 
omggggggggggg
u have written it really well yar
really
awwwwwwwww
sajan roxstar
loved their scenes
enjoyed reading the update
i dont know when it ends yar =(
 
sammy is extra cute
but ye kya
new twist
onmgggggggggg
really u know how to bind us all
but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooooooooooooon
thnk u so much sara...
loved ur coment..
n will try to update asap..

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1gunjan7

Hey Radhi OMG!!ShockedWhat a totally emotional n touchyCryCry.and OMG!!ShockedWHat a Mindblowing Shocking Twist ShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked...............................

4/5 for writing such an emotional and suspensefull SS..WOW!!ClapClapClapClapClapClap.....................

SUPERB work SweetyThumbs UpStarStarStarStarClapClapClapClap.........

Extremely well written update and What a rocking story and your story is getting interesting and mysterious day by day ...............Mindblowing story line.....Thumbs UpClapClap.............................

U know dear u wrote it so well that I had tears in my eyes the whole time i was reading your update .........Cry.............Samrats condition when he came 2 college n faintedCry and then during Flash back part when Samrat came to gunjans home and conversation between Sajan and sajan crying ManCryCry..........and then samrat vomiting Cryand not telling gunjan his condition that he did vomit blood ..CryCrygunjan caring 4 samrat n samrat falling 2 sleep in gunjans arms .....Man each n every scene u wrote was just Fabulous and so so touchy n so Emotional Cry..that imagining while reading it I had tears in my eyes reading n imagining samrats conditionCryCry...........But I must say this RADHi in such  a story it is very important 2 show proper emotions in such conditions and RADHI Dear u expressed Samrat n gunjans emotions and samrats condition Perfectly and FANTASTICALLY...............ROCKING Thumbs UpClap..................

and The Twist Man WOW!! what a TwistThumbs UpShockedShocked..this twist has completely shocked me n I am speechlessShockedShockedShocked..................Now I am even more confusedConfusedConfusedShocked..........But twist was superb................yaa I also thought that Samrat ko Brain tumour nahi hoga and  gang is lying 2 Gunjan ................And Samrat kissi shock ki waja Samrat ki assi condition hui hogii..... Yaa I even thought their is some Mystery behind Samrats condition...................................................................................

BUT BUT BUT Even in my wildest imagination I never thought that Samrat was not mad But He was Made MADShockedShockedShockedShocked ..And when I read this in the last part of update I was Like Fully Shocked and said 2 myself WHAT??ShockedOMG !! ShockedWhats this ??ShockedShockedShocked
ShockedShockedShocked
But I must say this.....What an Awesome , amazing and 100% Shocking twistThumbs Up...........ShockedShockedShocked...........With this twist your story is going in a Great direction.that is filled with suspense and Mystery.WOW!!WinkBig smile................

LAGTA HAI CID KO BULANA HOGA...WinkKya KHAYAL HAI RADHI CID KII HELP LAIN( ACP PRADYUMAN KII Help lein Or DAYA Ko Bulayein))WinkBig smile.MYSTERY SOLVE karney and ur help ke liyeBig smile..Wink.JUST JOKING........But Seriously I loved this TWIST COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY ..WOW!! MARVELLOUSClapClapClap.


Man Now me thinking WHO IS Behind this ?? Who deliberately made Samrat Mad?? and Why didnt Gang tell Gunjan that Samrats parents died in car accident??Confused......Whats going On??????????ConfusedConfusedConfusedConfused..................So many Qs and one answer ----RADHI ........As u r the who only knows whats gonna happen next.......WinkSmileSO Plsss Update Soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn plssssssssssssssssssssss...WinkBig smile..............................Really Anxious and Excited 2 know the further part of story..................................

But I must say this Either gang is hiding some major thing from Gunjan or May be gang also doesnt know the complete Truth ....ConfusedBut Jo bhi hai I think Now Gang ko Gunjan ko Clear Answers deney hongey as Gunjan Gang kii BAND jaroor bajayegii......and in the begining WHY DID Nupur said 2 mayank that Samrat kii halat ke jimedar Hum log hain Why?? Confused.........and Gang told Gunjan that samrat was behaving madly and used 2 get crazy so thats why they send him to mental asylum...WHY DID THEY LIE?? or DID Someone made them think that samrat was going MADShocked..BUT WHO??Confused.........But I feel that something else also happened 5yrs back also and this someone made Samrat Mad BUt Who is it ?? and WHY?????????????????Confused......is it sheena?? and where is Sheena??? ....ConfusedConfused..

I am going crazy WinkLOLSmilethinking Whats going to happen next in your SS So RADHI PLSSS DO Update fast Radhi plssssssssssWinkSmile...Once again Outstanding Ss and Fantabulous and stupendous Update......................ROCKING SSThumbs UpStarStarClapClapClap..and Totally EMOTIONALCry......I still get tears in my eyes when I imagine Samrats condition....CryCry....................

Thanks 4 Pm RadhiHug..and HAPPY VALENTINE DAY TO U ALSO DEAR Hug and Happy valentines day to all my buddies n everyone in IFSmile........

Love GunjanSmileSmile.....................................................


Hey Gunjan diii thnks for januable commentttttttttt....
well di u will get all ur answers in next few updates
but till u have to wait...
 
n Diii mystry solve karne ke liye CID ki jarurat nahii haiii iske liye sirf Radhi hi kafi haiiii
 
ok dii try to update asap..
 
Love u 2
Radhi...

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
mindblowin update

susupense..!!!! let out the raaz...sooon
plz...continue soon

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged

hey frnds here is the part.....
i knw its nt interesting part but plzzz for this part forgive me..
but i promise next part will be rocking.....

PART 10

they saw samrat.....................
gunjan was staring at him...n went to him n sat beside him....
put her nad on his shoulder..... samrat turned n saw her in tears..
he put paper n pen on table......
S:chashmish... chashmish tum ro kyu rahi ho.....???????
n wiped her tears...
gunjan hugged him....
G:kuch nahi wo bas fir se aakh me kachra chala gaya tha.....
they broke the hug.....
S:chashmish ye bhi doctor haii inhe dikhado.. ye tume thik kar
denge....
G:nahi ab nikal gaya ...  ab chalo ghar chalte haiii...
Sh:gunjan agar kabhi bhi meri help chahiye to kisi bhi waqt
muje call karna ... aur ha yaad rakhna mein hamesha tumhare
sath hu....
G:thnk u sir...
n went him n hugged himm. n samrat saw them.. n
Dr.shashank saw him staring at him...
Sh:tum hug nahi karoge??????
samrat immidetly went to them n shashank hug sajan....
n gunjan placed her hand on his hand......
then they broke hug....
Sh:ab dhyan se ghar jana aur gunjan samrat ki medicine le kar
jana....
G:ji sir....

they drove off to home.....
whole way gunjan was lost in her thoughts........
G(in mind):aisa kaise ho  sakta haiii koi samrat ko paagal kyu
karega???? par di jiju suhani sab ne to ye bola tha ki use
brain tumor tha.. aur principal ne bhi to yahi bola tha...
pehle hi me toot chuki thi jab muje samrat ki haalat ke bareme
... aur ab ye samrat ko kabhi brain tumor tha hi nahi?????
to fir uska us din ghar par samrat vomiting karna.. use chakkar
aana... aur jab muje sab pata chal gaya haiii to gang mujse juth
kyu bolenge?? aur to aur samrat ke parents ki death????/
aut sheena sheena kaha haiii?? samrat jo galti se bhi kisi ko
hurt nahi karta ... us insan ka koi bura kyu chahega????
kuch samaj nahi aa raha haiii??? kya ho raha haiii....
n looked at samrat he was playing with puzzle....
muje sab janna hoga kisi bhi kimmat par...
muje mera samrar chahiye.......... kisi bhi haal me.....

they reached to home...n call the nupur...
G:hello dii...
N:gunjan tu??? dekh gunjan sry.. but gunjan cut her..
G:di muje aap sab se milna haii abhi.......
N:thik haiii hum sab aate haiii.....
gunjan cut the phone...
G:samrat tum TV dekho me lunch ban kar aati hu.......
S:chashmish baad me kuch meetha milega na???
G:ha samrat or wo bhi chocolates...
S:wow u knw i love chocolates... jaldi jaao or khana banao baad
me muje chocolate khani haiii....
gunjan smiled n went to make lunch for himmm....
After she came back to him having dish full of food in her hand...
G:chalo samrat khana kha lo...
S:nahi chasmish muje TV dekhna haiii....
G:samrat plzz kha lo baad me tv dekhna...
S:nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii chashmish muje nahi khana.....
G:lagta haiii aaj Dr.chashmish ko bhi bhukha rehna padega..
S:kyu wo kyu bhukhi rahegi????
G:kyunki Dr.chashmish tab tak nahi khayegi jab tak samrat nahi
khayega........
samrat made face....
S:thik haii khilado......
n gunjan made him eat.....
S:nahi chashmish ab nahi  khana haiii....
G:samrat dekho sirf thoda sa rehta haii ab..
S:nahi chashmish ..
they were arguing... n gang entered to the hall...
n saw they were arguing.........
N:samrat...............

both turned n saw gang there...................
gang had tears in their eyes as they saw samrat after a long time.
samrat saw them  n stood up.... gunjan put the plat on side table.
n stood beside samrat... benji saw his best frnd  after a long time..
seeeing them samrat remember sumthing...............
S:dekho mayank see  me paagal nahi hu mayank
me paagal nahi hu.....
he was insisting them... with tears....
he went to nupur..
S:nupur .. nupur mein paagal nahi hu.......
then adhiraj suhani dia.. n last benji..
B:ha samrat tum paagal nahi ho.... mein janta hu...
S:benji ... benji mein nahi jaunhga me....
suhani told to guards ....
Su:aap ise le jaao..................
S:nahi mein nahi jaunga................... nahi jaunga mein.....
he was yelling .......................
At present
S:nahi cchod do muje main nahi jaunga mein paagal nahi hu...
he was crying n gunjan was socked to see him like this....
she held samrat...
G:samrat... kya hua samrat... koi nahi le ja raha hai tume dekho.
tum yahi ho .....
samrat hugged gunjan tightly...
S:nahi chashmish mein nahi jaunga ye log fir se muje bhej
denge.....
SU:nahi bhai hum aisa nahi karenge....
S:nahi muje kuch nahi suunna chashmish mein waha nahi jaunga.
gunjan made samrat sit on sofa...
G:ye lo paani pee lo... aur ro mat
n wiped his tears.... koi tume nahi le jayega.....
samrat agaainnn hugged her...
S:nahi chashmish main tume chhod kar nahi jaunga.....
G:ha samrat mein tume kahi nahi jane dungi ok...
n started to move her hand in his hair....
S:chashmish main...
G:shhhhhhhhhh...... samrat chashmish ke paas hi rahega kahi
nahi jayega..... accha chalo hum andar chale jate haiii..
samrat broke the hug... n saw every1...
Su:bhai ..
but samrat clutched his hand on gunjan's hand...
gunjan took him to the room....n made him sit properly...
G:ab chalo so jaao...
samrat held her hand n made her sit in front of him..
n hugged her...
gunjan rememberd the day when samrat came to her..
n thet night he slept hugging her...
G(in mind):samrat aise tabhi sota haii jab wo disturb hota haii..
n samrat slept hugging her.... he fell in deep sleep....
gunjan made him sleep properly n covered him with bedsheet..
n close the door of the room n came out to the hall.....
B:gunjan wo samrat thik haii???
G:ha thik haii....
M:gunjan hume yaha achanak ...
G:muje aap logo se baat karni haiii...
N:bol gunjan kya baat karni haii...
G:muje jaana haiii ki mere jaane ke baad kya kya hua???
B:gunjan jis din tum jane wali thi tab hum college me the...
Flashback..............
samrat n benji was playing basket ball.....
S:pata nahi benji par aaj muje kyu itna strange feel ho raha hai??
B:kyu kya hua??? tabiyat to thik haii na??
S:ha thik haii ..par aaj chashmish ne college aane se mana kar
diya na nupur aur diya aayi aur  to aur suhani or mayank bhi
college se chale gaye .. aur abhi college khatam bhi nahi hua...
(benji knw the reason y)
B:to isme kya haii??? (hiding truth)
S:idiot chashmish kabhi college miss nahi karti aur mayank wo
kabhi bhi bunk nahi karta....
B:ha par sayad kuch kaam hoga... wo samrat muje kich jaruri
kaam haii to chalta hu..
S:ab tu kaha ja raha haii????
B:wo ha wo..
S:kya wo kaha ja raha haii??
B:wo dad ne bank jane ko bola tha to bas wahi ja raha hu....
S:accha thik haiii bbye....
n benji went...
S:ye bhi chala gaya.... ab kya karu??? sheena bhi nahi haii...
chashmish ko phone karta hu..
he tried her number but it was switched off......
S:ye chashmish ka number kyu switched off aa raha hai??
kahi use kuch hua to nahi... he was worried...
just then sheena called him n he went to her...
At night there is no sign of gunjan n her news....
he was worried so he directly went to her home ....
n jumped into her room.. n saw it was empty....
S:ab ye chashmish kaha chali gayi???
he went down staircase....
n saw every1 sitting there except gunjan...
he went him n gang socked to him...
S:tum log itne sock kyu ho??? aur chashmish kaha haiii
chashmish ... chashmish he shouted for her....
N:wo london chali gayi haiiii said  to samrat directly....
samrat was hell socked but then he laughed..
S:nupur majak bandh karo or batao chashmish kaha haii???
subah se use na dekha haii na use baat ki haii....
N:maine bolana wo chali gayi haii...
S:chashmishhhhhhhhhhhhh.............
he found her in whole house but no sign of her...
he opened her warbrobe.. but it was empty....
S:chashmishhhhhhhh he shouted...... her books was nt there...
he came to the hall.. he shouteed like hell....
S:mayank tum sach batao chashmish kaha haiii??? muje use
milna haiii...
M:wo chali gayi samrat....
S:nahi tum log juth bol rahe ho wo muje kaise chhod ke ja satti
haiiii????
B:samrat ye sach haii gunjan chali gayi haiii..
he was socked again as sum1 snatched his world...
tears were streaming from his eyes........
S:nahi chashmish muje chhod ke nahi ja sakti....
M:samrat ye sach haii ki gunjan chali gayi haiii london....
he shouted ....
S:par kyu mayank???
N:iski wajah bhi tum ho samrat...
S:main??
N:ha tum.. na tum sheena se pyar karte na sheena ko tumhari
or gunjan ki dosti se problem hoti na sheena gunjan ko wo sab
kuch kehti aur na gunjan college chhod kar hum sab ko chhod
kar jati....
S:sheena ki wajse????
B:ha samrat kal gunjan ko sheena ne bulaya tha..
pata nahi unke bich kya baat hui .. par waha se aane ke  baad
gunjan ne ye faisla liya ki wo tume chhod kar yahase chali jayegi.
kyunki sheena nahi chahti thi ki wo tumhare sath rahe...
aur gunjan tume har haal me khush dekhana chahti thi....
to wo chali gayi.........
S:chali gayi?? aise kaise chali gayi??? muje bina bataye?????
Su:kyunki bhai  wo janti thi ki agar wo tume batayegi to na
tum use jane doge aur na wo jaa payegi is liye last time usne
tume dekha bhi nahi.... kyunki wo ye bhi janti thi ki agar wo
tume dekhegi to uska jana aur bhi muskil ho jayega.....
S:chashmish ne aisa kiya???????  muje chhod ke chali gayi???
apne best frnd ko..... bina bataye bina dekhe??? taki meri
life me koi problem na ho..............
D:usne tumhare liye ye letter bhi chhoda haii aur ye uske dusre
cupboard ki keys haii.. usne bola haii ki mere jane ke baad
samrat ko de dena.....
he was stutue......  he took keys n letter from dia....
n went to her room n locked the door.... he was crying like hell
n he was look like a dead person... his chashmish left him...
for his happiness.... he was lost........ wothout his chashmish
he is no more..... no more genuine samrat.....

HE OPENED THE LETTER N STARTED TO READ IT...

DEAR SAMRAT,
 FIRST OF ALL SRY....

sry will continue soon..... agar abhi likhungi to jyada long ho
jayega.... i will give u special update of this letter...

n it will be rocking..
 
Precap
flash back continue.....


well if you like the part plzz dont res do comment...
n silent readers hit the like button.. m waiting 4 ur comment...
ur comments are very precious for me....


LoveHeart
Radhi...Wink

 

 


 



Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 16 February 2011 at 10:52am

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OMG........radhi ... u r a rock star Thumbs Upu have done splendid work ..........what a twist n shock .......Amazing dear.........Clapenjoyed each n every part of ths SS ..........very well done Radhi n plss do me one favor plsss cont ASAP  can't wait .......

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
heyyy radhii

nyccc update
n i am still waitng 2 knw bout d thng.....related 2 sam...i mean d gang said sumthng else n d report says smthng entirely different
i hope dis letter reveals sumthng
thnx 4 d pm
n
cont sooooon


Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 16 February 2011 at 10:48am

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Awesome Update RADHiKAClapClapClap Fabulous Part. FB scene was too Good ,Very emotional sceneCry .I hope,very soon Sam's present condition ka 'REAL' reason unfold hoga. Eagerly waiting for Next Part so,Do continue soon.Thanx 4 PM.

-S O H A M.


Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 16 February 2011 at 7:45pm

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edited my rp on pg 44

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