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My Last Desire... Sajan ss !!! (Complited) (Page 36)

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hey frndsss once again Radhi here...
m sry for late update as m nt well.. i have high fever...
hope u understand... well here is d part njoy it...
if there is any mistake  m sry for that...
if u nt like the part then sry as m nt welll...
i didnt write it properly... i hope i didnt disappoint you...
n this part it long so read it carefully...

IMP NOTE:
as it is SS so i think i  should end this ss in 5 or 7 updates...
but if guys u want it i will continue ...
wat do you want plzz telll me...


PART 8

sajan reached to the icecream stall...
G:samrat tum yaha beitho me ice cream le kar aati hu...
S:chashmish chocolate wali ice cream lana...
G:ha samrat muje pata haii chocolate tumhara favourite haiii...
she went to take icecream .. n came back after having 2 icecream
in her hand...
G:ye lo...
samrat took n started to eat like 3 years child...
gunjan sat on bench oppose to samrat.. n looking at him...
n smiled...
G(in mind):kitna khush haiii.. me hamesha hi aise samrat ko
dekhna chahti thi... plzzz bhagwan meri help karna .. me apne
ourane samrat ko wapas lana chahti hu... me use us haalat me
nahi dekh sakti... aur me ye jan kar hi rahungi ki samrat ke
chehre ki hasi kis ne chhini haiii... kahi sheena chhod ke chali
gayi is liye to samrat.???? nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta.. mana ki
samrat sheena se pyar karta tha par itna kamzor nahi haiii ki
wo paagal... nahi nahi gunjan aisa kyu soch rahi haii tu????
agar sheena chhod ke gayi wo reason tha to samrat kal raat
nind me kyu chilla raha tha ki chhod do muje muje nahi jaana...
kuch to baat haiii...
n samrat saw gunjan's icecream was melting...
S:are chashmish tumhari icecream melt ho rahi haii tumne abhi
tak nahi khayi.. agar nahi khani thi to muje de deti me kha leta..
dekho mene to khatam bhi karli ... yaahhh m firsttt...
gunjan came out of thoughts...
n saw icecream was stuck on samrat's face near his lips...
she put her icecream in dish...
G:samrat tumne itni jaldi khatam kardi aur upar se dekho...
tumne apna muh bhi kharab kar diya...
she took  out her hankerchief n wipe icecream...
G:ab ho gaya...
S:wo chashmish muje dusri icecream khani haii...
G:dekho samrat mene tume promise kiya tha ki icecream
khilaungi par ye to nahi kaha tha na ki  do icecream khilaungi...
to bas ab aur nahi...
S:par chashmish jab tumne promise kiya tha tab ye bhi to nahi
kaha tha na ki  sirf ek hi khilaogiii.. plzzz chashmish bahut
tasty haiii muje khani haiii...
behave like a child...
G:thik haiii dusri icecream khila deti hu... par fir uske baad
medicine bhi 2 extra khila dungiii...
Samrat was like
S:kya 2 extra medicine no chashmish...
G:abhi thand haiii aur tume aur icecream khani haiii to khasi
jukham ho jayega shardi lag jayegi to 2 medicine aur...
Dr. log aise hi karte haiii...
samrat made a sad face...
S:dr. chashmish bahut buri haiii...
G:muje pata haiii ab chalna haiii ya aur  icecream khani haiii...
???????????????
Samrat stood up silently n went to the car...
gunjan knw he is upset... but she also knw that its harmful for
himm... tooo much icecream in winter...
sajan seated in car... n gunjan started to drive...
gunjan again n again looked at samrat but he wasnt looking at
her.. n also nt talking to her...
G:dr. chashmish ghar ja kar na to samrat ko jabardasti khana
khilayegi na medicine khilayegi,... na hi milk pee ne ke liye
force karegi... aurr...
S:aur kya chashmish???? jaldi bolo na dr chashmish rook kyu gayi
????
G:aur na khud khayegi...
S:kyu dr chashmish kyu nahi khayegi???
G:kyunki dr. chashmish ne samrat ko naraz kar diya...
so uski punishment ye haii ki wo samrat ko kisi bhi baaat ke liye
force nahi karegi aur na khud kuch khayegi...
S:nahi dr.chashmish ne samrat ko naraz nahi kiya...
samrat to bas aise hi nakhre kar raha tha... itni thand me thodi
na jyada icecream khani chahiye... ye samrat bhi na stupid
haii ek dum stupid...
gunjan smiled at his behaviour...
S:ab to dr.chashmish khayegi na...????? aksed hopefully...
G:nahi jaise samrat zeed karta haii dr.chashmish bhi karegi...
S:nahi samrat zeed nahi karega dr.chashmish jo kahegi wo
karega...
G:promise..????
S:pakka wala god promise... ab to dr.chashmish khana khayegi
na???
G:ha aur tume khilayegi bhi...

then they reached to their house...
gunjan put thier shopping bags in roomm...
G:samrat tum thak gaye hoge ab rest karo chalo...
S:nahi chashmish muje nahi karna...
G:samrat subah se tum khel rahe ho na?? ab aur masti nahi chalo
tum rest karo tab tak me khana banati hu ok...
S:nahi chashmish me bilkul bhi masti nahi karunga...
haa yaad aaya wo me apni painting banaunga thik haii...
G:accha thik haiii

she went to kitchen to make dinner.. n  samrat started to paint
after 1 hour gunjan called samrat n both njoyed dinner as
gunjan made his favourite dishes n also gajar ka halwa...
then  againnn medicine time...
G:samrat muh kholo chalo aaj koi argument nahi chalo...
S:chashmish har time khata hu na ek time skip karunga to
kya ho  jayega..???
G(in mind): me tume nahi kho sakti samrat aur na risk le
sakti hu... is baar nahi samrat... muje tume thik karna haiii
kisi bhi haalll me ... me tume is  haalat me dekheke tadap
uthti hu samrat... muje apne samrat ko wapas laana haiii...
samrat shergill ko i its MY LAST DESIRE...!!!!!!!!!!!
S:to me jaau...??
G:samrat dekho tumne muje promise kiya tha ki dr.chashmish
jaisa bolegi wesa karoge ryt??? aur tum apna god promise
kabhi nahi todoge ryt???
samrat opened his mouth... n gunjan put medicine in it...
n made him drink milk... n then water...
G:dats like my good boy... ab chalo room me so jaao...
thaki gaye hoge na...
samrat was about to say sumthing
G:promise yaad haii na???
samrat nooded n both went to room...
samrat lyed on bed n gunjan sat beside him n samrat put his
head in her lap... n held her hand...
G:ab so jaao aur good night...
n closed his eyes with het other hand...
S:good night Dr.chashmish ... said making funny face...
gunjan started to move his fingures in his hair n after
sumtimes he slept... she slowly put his head on pillow...
\n heard the door bell...
G:abhi kaun hoga???
she went to the door n opened the door.. n saw gang...
G:aap log ???
Su:gunjan pllzzz muje bhai ko dekhna haiii plzzz...
gunjan nodded without looking at them...
B:gunjan samrat kaha haiii/????
G:room me...
M:hum mil kar aate haiii... chalooo...
they were about to go...
G:wo so raha haiii
N:itni jaldi???
G:haa  aur me nahi chahti ki aap log uski nind kharab kare...
use bahut  muskil se sulaya haii mene...
aap log plzzz use dekh kar chale jana...
said angrily...
every1 silently nodded as they knw they were in fault...
bendia,mayur,suraj,n dodo were seeing samrar  who was
sleeping peacefully...
n tears were drolling out of their eyes...
they back to hall n saw gunjan was sitting there...
gunjan saw them
G:muje aap logo se baat karni haiii...
every1 sat there...
G:benji samrat ki ye haalat kaise hui??? tum to uske bast
friend the na??? tume to sab pata hoga???
benji looked st the gang...
U:gunjan wo gunjan wo sam...
G:ha uday bhaiya boliye kaise hui samrat ki ye haalat????
D:gunjan wo actually samrat ko...
su:Gunjan bhai ko BRAIN TUMOR tha...
G:kya???????????????????????????????????????????????????????
gunjan was hell sockeddd
she didnt ever imagine... samrat was in dat state...
suhani didnt continue... n adhiraj held her...
M:ha gunjan samrat ko brain tumor tha doctor ne bola operation
karna padega... par chances  bahut kam haiii agar operation
success ful raha to thik haiii warna wo apna mental balance bhi
kho sakta haiii
every1 were crying badly... n flood started to came out of
gunjan's eyes...
D:aur sam ka operation success nahi raha is liye wo...
N:yahi wajah thi ki hum ne use mental asylum bheja tha...
A:samrat ki haalat bahut bigad gayi thi wo day by day wild
hota ja raha tha... isi wajase hume...
B:gunjan hume sam ki haaalat nahi dekhi gayi aur uski haalat
sudhar ne ke liye hume use waha bhejna pada...
G:muje akela chhod do plzzz...
B:par gunjan ...
G:plzzz benjiii...
every went to their home n gunjan went to room...
n saw samrat was sleepinng peacefull she went to him...
n sat beside him n put her hand on his forhead n carresed it...
G(in mind):samrat ka college days me chakkar aana ... use
vomiting hona ... kai us waqt use brain tumor to nahi ???????
par uska nind mi chillana ... aur uske report.?????????
pata nahi par kyu ye puzzle solve nahi ho raha haiii par me
ise sulja ke rahungiii... me apne samrat ko wapas la kar hi
rahungiii...
she opened the wardrobe n took his file n again  n again
read it... she was confussed at sum point... then she took
her laptop n  started to surf abt samrat conditon ...
she collected lots of information it almost 1 am...
she was confussed at sum points...
she called Dr.shashank...
Dr.shashank was sleeping n his wife Padma also sleeping...
his cell rang...  she socked to see gunjan's name flashing...
Sh:gunjan is waqt...
Sh:helllo...
G:sir wo me gunjan ...
Sh:ha beta bolo is waqt koi pareshani thi kya????
Gunjan looked  at the clock its 1 a.m. ...
G:sry sir wo muje pata nahi tha ki itni raat ho gayi haiii...
Sh:nahi koi baat nahi ... koi pareshani haii kya???
samrat thik to haii na kahi use to kuch nahi hua???
G:nahi sir wo thik haii so raha haiii...
n looked at samrat...
sir itni raat ho gayi haii me aapse kal baat karti hu...
Sh:thik haii beta kal duty ke baad me waha aaunga to baat
kar lena...
G:ji sir...
n cut the call...
padma woke up...
P:kiska phone tha...???
Sh:wo doctor ka phone tha aur koi na tum so jaao...
n padma slept..
Sh:m sry padma par me tume kaise kahu ki tumhari beti ka
phone tha... wese bhi uske dur hona ka gham tume ab tak
sata raha haiii ki na to tum thik se soti ho na jeeti ho...
meine to apne aap ko sambhal liya par tume ab tak nahi
sambhal paya... n tears started to came out of his eyes...
n he also slept...

G(in mind):pata nahi par kyu muje kuch thik nahi lag raha haiii
kya hua tha wo sirf aur sirf samrat hi bata sakta haiii ..
par kaise...???????????????????????????
ek kaam karti hu fir se uski life revind karni padegii...
kal samrat ko college le kar chalti hu...
ha yahi thik rahega...

then she went to check samrat dat was he all ryt????
n slept on shofa...


NEXT DAY...
sajan wake up n did break fast n as usual... after so many
arguments gunjan made samrat eat his medicine... n
did breakfast...
S:chashmish aaj hum kaha ghumne jane wale haiii...
G:samrat aaj hum ghumne nahi kisi aur jagah jaane wale haii
S:kaha ??? water kingdom????????
G:nahi tum chalo ... n held his hand then went out ...
S:par kaha...
G:chalo to sahi...
they drove offf n whole way samrat was guessing n asking
abt the place where they were goign
S:essel world???
G:nope...
S:to kaha ab to bolo...
G:ye lo aa gaya...
n both came out of car n saw the board...

EXCEL COLLEGE...

Preacap:
samrat faint...

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Love  u AllHeart
Radhi...Wink



Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 04 March 2012 at 2:27am

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 8:33am | IP Logged
res part 8 Embarrassed
 
*edited*
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
thnxxxxxxxxxxx God u have updated yar
was eagerly waitng for it
but was really a short one dear
but i can understand
get well soooooooooon
n give a longgggggggggg update then
 
ok
awwwwwwwwwww
my sammy roxxxxxxxxx
loved all the scenes
just superbbbbb
fantasticccccccc
literally enjoyed reading it =)
 
great confusion
suspense killing me badly
plzzzzzzzzz do continue soooon radhi n get well soon too


Edited by chilluppp - 09 February 2011 at 11:08am
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Hey Radhi dear 1st of all How r u?? U have High fever and still U updated.....ShockedRadhi I adviced u na ki After u get completely well then update Your all Ss n FF ..Why dont u listenAngryItnii High fever mein Bhi U Updating Ss..Shocked......................Plss Take care of Urself and Update next ss n ff only after u get well ....As Health is more Important then anything................Plss Take care of Yourself............

Now As 4 ur Ss My Last Desire I must say this -Wow!! Radhi Stupendous work..Outstanding ,fabulous, excellent and Mindblowing..Simply Superb UpdateThumbs UpStarStarStarStarClapClapClapClapClapClap....................Very well written and Amazing Dialogues..PerfectThumbs Up.........................I really loved reading Ur Ss a lot......and As 4 my imagination it was fully Switched ONDay Dreaming...........I just loved imagining the Scenes a lotDay DreamingSmile....

Especially loved Sajans conversation n scenes.....their Dialogues were just amazing......Dr chashmish and her Samrat wow! when gunjan pretended in front of samrat that she won't eat anything as she has made samrat angry and the way samrat said No Samrat toh Nakre kar raha thaa Wow!! What a dialogue Awesome.....ClapClapClap.................Each n every Dialogue was Just Superb.ClapClapClap.......................Good work Radhi dearThumbs Up..

As 4 Samrats condition He had BRAIN TUMOUR OMG!!ShockedBut I still feel something Fishy I think Either Gang has still not told gunjan the whole truth or May be gang ko bhi Full truth nahi pata...But I still think gang is lying .......I think Brain tumour agar samrat ko thaa toh Uske Report mein Mention Hona chahiyee thaa na Or Dr Shashank would have Told something to Gunjan....But he Didnt say anything that means.....SOMETHING is not fitting right ..their is some Missing piece in the Puzzle................BUT WHAT???ConfusedConfused.....................

As 4 Dr Shashank n padma OMG !!Gunjan is their daughter but why is she living with Bhushans from childhood??ShockedShockedConfused...........................
And answer 2 all these qs only U know RADHi dear...........Wink....................Plss TELL NAAWinkLOL..................

Ur Precap looks interesting and has made me even more Curious Samrat Fainted ....Does that mean Samrat ko kuch yaad aaya....................So many Qs and answer known by Only 1 person Radhi...............WinkLOLSmile..............................

SO My dear Radhi Update soon but Update only after U get well...........and Thanks 4 PmHug..................

and ur This Ss is really awesome ..very Good story so Dear Donot finish it now Please continue ur This Ss--My last desire........PlssSmile.........Atleast 4 10-15 updates or even moreSmile ...............
Take care of urself dear......Get Well soonnnnnnn.......

Love GunjanSmileSmile...

 



Edited by 1gunjan7 - 09 February 2011 at 1:26pm

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Radhi,
Hayeeeeeee so cute........Loved Sajan a lot
Do continue soon
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
First of all GET WELL SOON! Hope that u r fever gets down soon. Coming to ur update as usual it is awesome. But why gang didn't know about samrat's nightmares or they are hiding something to gunjan? Very confused! Waiting for next update sajan in excel intresting. But precap is scary sam OMG faints! Hope that everything gets alright. And this puzzle sorts out soon. It's intresting about shashank-gunjan want some father-daughter scenes. And about ur question i don't want this ss to end so early. If u have a nice track after this track then continue it. But don't stretch so long. I'm sure that u'll take right decision. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm. Sorry for too long comment. AND TAKE CARE.
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
hey radhi it was seriously very superb update loved it something is fishy now can't wait for next part and please make this SS as FF  i am loving this SS and want more updates and thanks for pm 
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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
heyyyyy radhikaaa

superb updateee
i am sure dat d gang z hiding sumthng bout samrats condition n past 4m gnjn..
cont soooooon
n
thnx 4 d pm..
n i realy wsh dat u cont wid dis ss

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