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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged

hey frndssssss back with a new part...
i knw u all  want to knw the past of samrat....
but sry guys u have to wait.....
it will reveal slowly....  with all flash backs of  college....
hope u unserstand..... here is the part njoy it....

PART  7

gunjan was laying on sofa.... n was in deep thought.....
G(in mind):kyu itna sab badal gaya??? aur to aur samrat ki
haalat bhi.. kya hua hoga ?? muje in sab ki jad tak pahoch na
hoga.. sabse pehle to samrat ki file dekhti hu...
she got up n  took file n was stdying file...... she was confussed
at sum points... she marked with pencil....
n heard samrat 's scream......
samrat in sleep......
S:nahi chhod do muje me nahi aaunga chhodooooooooooooo
muje me nahi jaungaaa...
gunjan rushe to him...... n he woke up with a jerk....
sweat was all over his face n body......
G:samrat kya hua??? dekho koi nahi le jayega tume ... mein hoo
yaha samrat.....
samrat saw her n hugged her.....
S:chashmish wo muje le jayenge muje nahi jana waha.....
G:koi nahi le jayega tume mein hoo na yaha...
samrat broke the hug ...
G:dekho kitna paseena aaya n dostroy it with her dupatta...
samrat put his head on her chest...
S:chashmish muje dar lag raha haiii.....
G:mein hoo na samrat fir ... fir kyu dar lag raha haiii???
dekho mein yahi hu ... tumhare paas... aur hamesha rahugi...
aur ab jaldi se so jaao kyunki kal hume......
S:bahar ghumne jana haiiii... said exitedly.......
G:hmmm so jaldi se so jaao....
samrat put his head in her lep..... n held her hand with both
hands n put her near his heart.....
S:chalo ab aakhe bandh karo me yahi hoo....
n closed his eyes with her other hand....
n covered him with bedsheet.... n moving her hand in his hair..
gunjan had tears on her eyes.....
G(in mind):kitni takleef me haiii .. kitna dard seh raha haiiii....
aur me kitni majboor hu ki uska gham baat bhi nahi sakti....
use samja bhi nahi sakti ... par me use is dard se bahar nikal ke
rahungi... me  samrat ko is haalat me nahi dekh sakti ....
nahi dekh sakti...... n staring at him.........
mein use thik karke hi rahungi... chahe use thik karne ki liye
muje kuch bhi kyu na karna pade.....

on other hand gang was worried abt sajan......

NEXT DAY.......................................
sur rayes fell on gunjan's face n she opened her eyes...
n she was in still same condition she was sitting n samrat 's
head in her lep.... she  saw him sleeping peacefully holding
her hand... she slowly remover her hand n slowly put his
head on pillow....without disturbing him... she got  up....
G(in mind)samrat to abhi so raha haii me jaldi se bath le kar
aati hu.. par mere kapde to ghar par haiiii.. oh god ... par sayad
suhani ke kapde jarur honge....
she went to suhani's room n checked in her cupboard....
G:oh god ye to sab sleev less haiii .... ab kya karu????
jo bhi ho gunjan aaj pahenle tere paas aur koi aoption nahi haiii
... sirf aaj ke din ki to baat haiii... baad me ghar jake kapde
le aana... jaldi kar gunjan fir samrat ke liye nasta bhi to banana
haiii...
she went to washroom after sumtimes she was ready...
she was looking her self in mirror....
G:itni bhi buri dress nahi lag rahi haiii....
n after that she went to kitchen n made aaloo ke parathe...
thn quickly went to samrat's room....
n saw samrat was still sleeping.....
she went to him n carresed his hair.... samrat slowly opened his
eyes n firstly saw her smiling....
S:chashmish slowly.....
G:good morning.... 
samrat turned n moved his head in her lep again.....
G:abhi bhi nind aa rahi haiii....
S:hmmmm......
G:thik haiii so jaao.....
G(in mind):ye jitna aaram karega utna uske dimag ko rest
milega aur utna hi wo jaldi thik ho payega.....
just then samrat remember sumthing.. n he got up with a jerk...
S:chashmish aaj to hume ghumne jana haiiiiiiiiiii..........
muje sona nahi haiiiiiiii..... said exitedlyy n loudly....
G:ha baba jayenge.... par pehle brush karlo fresh ho jaao...
aur fir baad me nasta bhi to karna haiii pata haii mene tumhare
liye aaloo ke parathe banaye haiiii....
S:wow aaloo ke parathe me jaldi se ready hoke aata hu tum
mera wait karna haaaaaa.....
n ran to the washroom..
G:paagal .... n smiling n just realised wat she said....
paagal??? wo paagal nahi haii gunjan.......... scolded herself....
after sumtimes he came out n then they did break fast...
G:samrat itni jaldi khatam kar diya???
S:ha chashmish jitni jaldi jayenge utna jyada ghumenge na????
G:thik haii par pehle medicine khani padegi ....
S:nahi chashmish aaj nahiii...wo bahut kadwi lagti haii
n made sad face....
gunjan gave him his medicine...
G:ye lo khalo jaldi aur fir uske upar juce pee lena kadwa nahi
lagega thik haiii .......
but samrat made sad face...
G:chalo jaldi muh kholo....
he opened his mouth sadly...
gunjan made his eat medecine n made him drink juce....
G:ab aise muh mat banao abhi paani lati hu....
then she made him drink.....
they went out ... n sat in car..... gunjan on driving seat.....
just then she remembered she forgot her mobile....
G:samrat tum 2 min ruko me mobile le kar aati hu....
S:chashmish jaldi aana....
she again went in n took her mobile n came out ....
n loked the door.... n turned n saw gang..... was standing
in front of her...
N:gunjan tu kaha jaa rahi haiiii?????
gunjan turned her face as she dint want to see any1....
Su:gunjan plzzz hume bhai se milna haii ek baar plzzz...
hospital wale sirf hume use dekhne dete the milne nahi plzz....
G:muje der ho rahi haii me chalti hu.....
n abt to go...
M:gunjan plzz.....
G:me bhi wahi keh rahi hu plzzz jiju.... aap log samrat se na mile
wahi behtar haii uski haalat wese bhi thik nahi haiii aur me nahi
chahti ki aap logo ko dekh kar uski haalat aur kharab ho jaye...
wo car me betha haii aur me chahti hu ki wo aap logo me se
kisi ko bhi na dekhe...
n went to the car n sat in n drove off car.............

Su:plzzz koi to use roko muje bhai se milna haiiii
n crying...
M:suhani galti humari hi thi to saza to hume bhugatni hi
padegi.....
D:galti sirf humari nahi thi mayank.... tayaji ki bhi thi.....
N:ha mayank dia thik keh rahi haiii galti bauji ki bhi haiiii....
hum to gunjan ko sab kuch batana chahte the par bauji nahi
chahte the ki gunjan ko kuch pata chale.....
m:par hum bauji ko to kuch nahi keh sakte na????
B:guyzz ghar chalte haiii gunjan ko manane ke bareme sochte
haiii....
U:wah benji bilkul thik kaha me bhi yahi soch raha tha.....
D:dodo plzzzz ...chalo guys....
then every1 went to their way.....

sajan went to shopping mall  n did so many shopping n each
n every time samrat behaved like a child n gunjan's heart
was crying seeing him as evey1 was staring at him......
then they went to resturent  as samrat was hungry ....
then  gunjan again gave him his medicine.....
then they went to park...... they played so many games....
its evening n gunjan's cell rang.... n Dr.shashank calling.....
G:hello...
Sh:dr.gunjan aap abhi hospital aayiye muje aap se jaruri baat
karni haiii....
G:ji sir...
n shashank cut the call...
G(in mind):samrat ko kaise kahu????
she saw he was swingging....
she went to himm...
G:samrat jhula roko...
samrat stopped...
S:chashmish muje aur jhula lena haiiii....
G:samrat hume hospital jana haiiii...
S:kya??? samrat was socked..
S:nahi chashmish tumne muje promise kiya tha ki hum
hospital nahi jayenge.... aur tum abhi... nahi me nahi jaunga...
G:dekho samrat hum waha rehne nahi jaa rahe haii hum apne
ghar hi rahege ...
S:nahi  mein nahi jaunga....
G:dekho samrat mein doctor  hu ryt???
S:ha....
G:to doctor log kya karte haiii????
S:sab patient ko thik karte haiii.....
G:hmmm to wo patient ko thik karne wo kaha jate haiii????
S:hospital... aur kaha???
G:dats it... muje bhi wahi jana haiii...
S:nahi chashmish tum waha nahi jaaogi plzzzzzz....
G:plzz samrat dekho hum waha jaldi se kaam khatam karke
wapas aa jayenge ....
S:nahi hum hospital nahi jayenge.... nahi matlab nahi.......
G(in mind):
oh god ab kya karu??? waha dr shashank ne bulaya haii'aur ye
maan hi nahi  raha haiii..... muje kaise bhi karke ise manana
hoga.....
G:agar me baad me tume ice cream khilau to bhi nahi
chaloge???
samrat thought for sumtimes...
S:nahiii to bhi nahii....
G:thik haii tum yahi raho akele me chali jati hu...
n she was about to go.....
samrat held her hand tightly.... gunjan turned n saw him tears...
S:chashmish plzzz muje akela chhod ke mat jaao plzzzz....
G:samrat plzz ro mat...
n wiped his tears....
S:main tumhare sath aaunga... par promise karo ki hum jaldi
hi wapas ghar aayenge aur hum ghar par hi rahenhe waha nahi
aur waha me koi injection nahi lunga..... aur wapas aate waqt
muje ice cream khilaaogi.....
G:thik haiii promise ab khush???
S:ya....

then sajan went to hospital..... as they entered samrat held her
arm tighlty....
G:samrat relax koi tume nahi le jayega...
but samrat didnt left her hand....
n was looking heren  there...
then they went to dr.shashank's cabin .....
Dr.shashank saw them... they went in ..
Sh:betho
they sat on chair...
Sh:samrat kaise ho ????
Samrat was looking at him blankly....
n then looked at gunjan....
S:chashmish muje inse koi baat nahi karni .... pata haii ye ,muje
injection lagate the..... aur wo bhi har roz....
Sh:well samrat to muje thik lag raha haiii.. par gunjan muje
tumse ye umeeed nahi thi... tum samrat ko yaha se aise hi le
gayi... bina kisi  ki permission ke bagair... aap kya ye nahi
janti ki koi bhi dr.apne patient ko aise hospital se nahi le ja sakta..
said in hard tone....
G:janti hu sir ... plzzz sir muje maaf kar dijiye.... muje aise
nahi karna chahiye tha .. par me kya karu?? mujse samrat ki
haalat nahi dekhi gayi...
S:nahi meine chashmish ko kaha tha ki muje yaha nahi rehna
aur muje yahase le jaaye....
shashank smiled at his answer...
G:samrat ye lo mobile game khelo thik haiii...
n samrat started to play game..
Sh(in mind):is haalat me bhi gunjan ko defence kar raha haiii...
Sh:me janta hoo ki aap log acche dost haiii .. par aise kaise
gunjan tum samrat ko hospital se le ja sakti ho??? kya tum nahi
jati ki samrat ki haalat kya haii???
G:janti hu sir par mein janti hu wo yaha rahega to kabhi thik nahi
ho payega.... plzzz sir ... permision de do...plzz sir.....
Sh:thik haiii ise le jaao.. mein yaha sambhal lunga...
aur me ye permision  is liye de raha hu kyunki muje samrat ki
haalat me  thoda fark haii ... kyunki wo yaha tha to ek dum
wild tha.... wese wo ab bhi thoda naraz haiii... par muje yakken
haii ki tum use thik kar sakti ho....
G:thnk u sir thnk u......
Sh:muje thk u bol rahi haiii????
both smiled n gunjan got up n hugged himm....
G:sry ...
Sh:so ab sry bhi...
they broke the hug.....
G:sir aaj me bahut khush hu bahut... aap kitne acche ho...
aur aap ki beti bahut hi lucky hogi....
Sh:ha wo to lucky haii par badnaseeb to mein hoo... slowly...
n made sad face...
G:sir aap ne kuch kaha??
Sh:nahi ab tum log jaao thik haii???
G:haa thik haii chalo samrat...
then they went out of cabin..
n shashank had tears in her eyes...
Sh:kitna badnaseeb baap hu main me apni beti ko beti bhi
nahi bula sakta aur aaj .... aaj pehli baad meine use apne
sine se lagaya....
n rememberd that moment.....
gunjan was driving n samrat was still playing game...
G(in mind):pata nahi par kyu Dr.shashank ko hug karke
kuch alag hi feel hua.....
S:chashmish tume yaad haii na tume muje ice cream khilani haii
she cameout of her thoughts..
G:ha baba......

precap:
gunjan took samrat to Excel college........

i hope you all like the part...............
if u like it do comment .. n silent readers hit the like button...
m waiting for ur comment.... do long coment ok..... lolzz.....
welll guys agar aap log comment nahi karoge to muje kaise
pata chalega ki story acchi likh rahi hu ya nahi.... muje
continue karni chahiye ya nahiii.. so plzzz do comment
at least write 1 word....

LoveHeart
Radhi....Wink

 

 



Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 03 February 2011 at 7:31am

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Lovely Update RADHiKA.Clap So,Touchy....U R justifying very well the relation and condition between SaJan and most importantly a Doctor-Patient.Thumbs UpI know,Its not easy.Actually,Its very difficult. So,U deserve standing Ovation 4 this.Clap  Clap  Clap My expectations is very high.....Wink

And,I M agree with U.this time Sam's past reveled scene is not necessary Woh story strength and main USP ko kill karne jaisa hoga...so,Please! take your time. Totally Rocking Update. Please! Do Update soon.....Thanx a lot 4 PM.

-S O H A M.



Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 03 February 2011 at 8:11am

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Awesome............can't wait for the next update..........do update soon.

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wonderful update...cont soon

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Hey Radhi firstly I am Happy to know u r feeling better Smile..........DO Take care of yourself Dear Radhi...........and rest a lot .............And hey U Updated the SS --My last desire which I requested u 2 Update last night---Thanks a lotHug..

Now about Ur Ss update Radhi I must say this---- SOHAM is right u deserve a standing ovation for writing such a Rocking and absolutely Stupendous,Fantabulous and Mindblowing Story.....ClapClapClap..........Ur Ss is going great ...the story is progressing very very well...infact ur Ss is totally SUPERBThumbs UpStarStarClapClap ....3 cheers 2 U for writing such a Fantastic SsClapClapClap....................I completely loved reading and imaginning the story and Sajan scenes while reading the update of Ur SsDay Dreaming...................Thanks 4 writing such a Excellent SsHug..........................

I loved every part of your Ss story.....Awesome n Fantastic DialoguesClap......while reading the update I really liked Sajans Doctor-patient equation....u very well described the doctor - patient relationship between Sajan................Thumbs Up..When I was reading Sajan scenes and Imagining Samrats condition I had tears Cry in my eyes..........When Samrat Screamed in sleep "Mujh ko chood do mein nahi jaoonga" this dialogue made me emotional and I had tears in my eyesCry............Man really want 2 know samrat ki assi halat kassi huiConfusedConfused...who is responsible 4 his condition??ConfusedConfusedConfused

But donot worry I understand We have 2 wait as this is not the Right time to disclose who is responsible 4 samrats condition and what happened 5 yrs back with samrat...SO I WILL WAIT WHEN U radhi will disclose this to us all.......
 
Really liked Dialogues between Dr Shashank and Gunjan......Thumbs Up.....I was wondering when Dr shashank said this meri beti lucky hai but mein badnaseeb hoon I wondered why HE SAID THIS words and who was his Daughter?? And U answered my qs in the End .............

OMG !! radhi What a twist ...........Is it possible GUNJAN is DR Shashanks daughter ??ShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedBut yeh kasey Ho sakta haiConfusedShocked...
AM I RIGHT??Wink...Shocked.....

Ya ya I know U will disclose this Secret also and I will wait 4 the day when u tell us all how come Gunjan can be Dr shashanks daughterConfusedShocked........Still I must say this RADHI WOW!! what a TwistWinkClap    Mazza aa gaya totally read karkey Clap............What a EXCELLENT and Superb Ss Update...Thumbs Up.........And the story is MindblowingClapClapClapClap....
Thanks 4 pmHugDo update soonSmile and Take care of Yourself Radhi...

Love GunjanSmile..............


Edited by 1gunjan7 - 03 February 2011 at 9:08am

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1gunjan7

RESERVED...........Smile

Let me read it Radhi then I will reply n comment ......WinkSmile..........and hey U Updated the SS --My last desire which I requested u 2 Update last night---Thanks Hug..and plss Have patience I will surely comment after I read Ur SsWinkLOL...............

 

 
 
yup u requested last night n today i updated as m dfeeling bettter nw....
i also asd  to Anji n she said  the same ... so i updated as u also requested me.....
n take ur time.... m waiting 4 ur comments...

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Lovely Update RADHiKA.Clap So,Touchy....U R justifying very well the relation and condition between SaJan and most importantly a Doctor-Patient.Thumbs UpI know,Its not easy.Actually,Its very difficult. So,U deserve standing Ovation 4 this.Clap  Clap  Clap My expectations is very high.....Wink

And,I M agree with U.this time Sam's past reveled scene is not necessary Woh story strength and main USP ko kill karne jaisa hoga...so,Please! take your time. Totally Rocking Update. Please! Do Update soon.....Thanx a lot 4 PM.

-S O H A M.

 
Thnk u so much SOHAM BHAi... thnks a lot 4 this beautiful comment...
n really thnk u for understanding me....
really it gives me strength... to do more...
well i kne every1's expectations are very high n nw u tols me abt ur expectations
so i hope i will do my best.... n will surely try my best....
 
Radhi...

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Hey Radhi I have Updated my comment On PAGE 31........do read it dear.........

Love Gunjan.......Smile

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