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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Hey dear updt ws awsm .
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 9:14am | IP Logged
hii radhi diii congo for ur new job n good luck for new job hopeee u enjoy ur job anyways loveeee da update awwwww sammy was behaving lyk child wen saw gunji n he was all very happpy teasing her n alll loveeee it our sammy isnt lost wholey ab gunji aagayi hai she willl make him normal again do continue soon now
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
awesome update
continue sooon..Smile
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Congrats for ur Job. n Gr8 update dearBig smile
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Glad to see dat Gunjan is handling Sam's caseThumbs Up
I lyked the way Gunjan was caring Samrat n giving him medicinesDay Dreaming
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meerrii

hey congrats 4 ur job n extremly sory 4 replyng parts were awesome almost in tearz lovd the last part aww so sad 4 sajan its awesoomee.plz update soon.ops sory mein ny apney kea nahn n sayng to u i promisd sundy or monday ko mil jae ge updates aur paka wala promise love u n lovd ths ff a lot t.c best ov luck 4 job w8ng 4 treat haha
hey meeri thx dear......
hmm this time pakka wala promise..
but agar is baar toda to????????????????????????
realy yar missing ur updates yarr plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
do cont asap..
by the way thnks 4 liking my updates......
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged

hey frnds bacjk with next part hope you like the part....
here is d part.....

 
PART 6
 

samrat was sleeping helding gunjan's hand tightly....
n tears were streaming out of gunjan's eyes....
Gunjan POV:
kya halat ho gayi samrat ki ....kyu hua iske sath ye sab
jis insan ki ek smile par log paagal ho jate haii wo aaj
khud paagal.... Aisa kya hua tha 5 saal pehle jo iski ye
haalat ho gayi????... jis insan ke chehre se khushi aur
hasi kabhi gayab nahi hoti thi.... aur aaj usko dekh ke log
has rahe haiiiii.... jo insan sab ke dard dur karta tha wo
aaj khud itna dard seh raha haiiii.... aisa kyu??????..
aur me mene kya kiya??? jab use meri sabse jyada
jarurat thi tab hi me use chhod ke chali gayi????
gheen aati haiiii .... mere hote hua samrat ko itni taklif??
aur me kya kya soch rahi thi ki samrat muje bhul gaya.
aur wo to yaha aise dard me jee raha tha.... use to meri
itni aadat thi ki koi kaam mujse puche bine nahi karta tha
aur me hi use chhod ke chaki gayi..... par tab to me samrat
ki khushi chahti thi sheena ke sath... par sheena wo kaha
haiii??? samrat ko yaha is haalat me chhod ke??? aur
saare frndss unhone aisa kaise hone diya.... samrat ko
mental assynlum bhej diya.... aur un logo ne muje kuch
kyu nahi bataya????.....
n her eyes were wet....
nw its evening.....
samrat wake up n saw gunjan was beside him...
he smiled seeing her....
G:uth gaye chalo ab fresh ho jaao.......
S:chashmish  fresh hone ke baad hum ghar jayenge na.???
G:ha jayenge.....
S:thik haii me jaldi se fresh ho ke aata hu par tum kahi
jaana mat ... said in childish voice...
G:me yahi hu samrat....
samrat went to washroom n after sumtimes back ...
gunjan had packed his things.....
G:chale...
S:ha chamish muje yaha nahi rehna...
both went from hospital........


on other side........
At mayur's house....
N:gunjan aati hi hogi.... jaldi se uske liye khana bana deti
hu....
just then her phone rang.....
N:hello Mrs. sharma speaking...
Su:nupur .... suhani was crying...
N:kya hua suhani tum ro kyu rahi ho????
Su:nupur wo bhai???
N:kya hua samrat ko thik to haii na kahi use firse
dohra to nahi pada na??
Su:nahi nupur wo mene abhi city hospital me phone
kiya tha unhone bola ki bhai ko sanjeevni me admit kiya
haiii...
N:kya par.. but she was cutted....
Su:mene sanjeevni me bhi phone kiya tha unhone bola ki
bhai ko to waha se koi le gaya haiiii...
N:kya par kaun????
Su:pata nahi nupur muje samaj me nahi aa raha haii
ki me kya karu??? me sanjivnee ja rahi hu.....
N:nahi suhani tu waha mat jaa .. waha gunjan hogi use
shak ho jayega.....
Su:abhi bhai ko dhundhna jyada jarurri haii...
N:thik haii tum jaao aur muje baad me phone kar dena...
me sab ko ghar bula leti hu.....
nupur called the gang....
every1 were sitting in hall at mayur's.....
M:samrat ko kon le ja sakta haiii??? aur kaha...
every1 was damn worried.....
U:gunjan bhi to wahi haii kahi gunjan to sam ko nahi
le gayi na.... kyunki wese bhi kal wo sam ke bareme
puch rahi thi u knw dat guys.... said with style...
D:shut up dodo ek to hum yaha sammy ko le kar
pareshan haii aur tum ho ki apni bakwas kar rahe ho...
A:chill frnds suhani ka wait karte haii wo hospital gayi
haii...
after 3 hours... its  night.....
suhani came to mayurs...
N:nupur samrat ka kuch pata chala????
Su:nahi nupur me pehle city hospoital gayi thi
waha mene inquery ki but unhone bola ki doctors ki
chutti ki wajase samrat ko waaha se samjeevni le gaye
the.. fir me sanjeevni bhi gayi mene waha pucha to pata
chala ki  wo waha tha par aaj shaam ko hi use le gaya
haii koi...
M:par kaun suhani??? humare siva kisi ko bhi samrat
se milne ki ya use le jane ki permission nahi haiii.....
Su:pata nahi par unho ne kaha ki uska case kisi new
doctor ko diya  gaya haiii.. me us doctor se bhi milne
gayi thi par wo apni duty khatam kar ke jaa chuki thi...
mene sab jagah dhundha use... par wo nahi mila....
n cried.......
D:plzzz  suhani ro mat sammy hume jaldi hi ,mil  jayega
Mayank was in thoughts....
N:kya hua mayank tum kya soch rahe ho???
M:samrat ki new doctor gunjan to nahi?? agr wo haiii
to use samrat ke baare me sab pata chal gaya hoga..
aur sayad wo use waha se le gayi ho???
N:mayank aisa kaise ho sakta haiii.... me abhi gunjan
ko phone karti hu...

SAJAN
sajan left the hospital in the evening n after 2 hours
sajan reached to shergill mension.....
they entered n samrat started to see around house.....
gunjan saw him....
G:samrat kya dekh  rahe ho...????
S:chashmish pata haiii me na yaha pehle rehta tha.....
gunjan had tears in her eyes... hearing this....
G:hmm aur ab hum yahi rahenge hamesha ke liye.....
S:sach chashmish hum hamesha ke  liye yahi  rahenge???
hum kabhi hospital nahi rahenge na????
G:ha samrat  hum kabhi nahi rahenge waha....
S:par tum muje sab ki tarah fir se yaha se hospital to
nahi bhej dogi na??? me waha nahi jaunga muje waha
bahut marte haii chashmish muje bahut pain hota haiii...
aur aur muje paagal bhi bulate haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......
gunjan cried even more.............
n hugged samrat n samrat also hugged her...
G:nahi aisa ab nahi hoga mein hoo na yaha tumhare paas
aur aaj ke baad na koi tume mareega aur na tume koi
bhi paagal bulayega.....

then broke the hug.....
G:tum jaao jaldi se hath muh dho ke aao me tumhare
liye khana banati hu aur gaajar ka halwa bhi.......
saying with teary smile......
S:gaajarrrrr ka halwa?????????? wow chashmish
u r the best Dr.chashmish... me jaldi se jaa ke hath muh
dho leta hu.... so much exited n went from there to his room
G:ab tume koi dard nahi hoga samrat me dard ko tumhare
paas bhi nahi aane dungi.. jitna sehna tha tune seh kiya
ab aur nahiiii n placed her purse n files on table n went
to kitchen to make dinner for samrat.....

after sumtimes samrat came.....
S:chashmishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bhukh lagi haiiiiiiiiiiiiii
G:samrat chillao mat u r nr bed boy ok .....
aur chup chap  table [ar betho abhi laati hu...
Samrat quitly went to table n sat on chair...
he was quite for sumtimes.. then he took spoon n hit it
with dish.... again n again n started to make noice....
g:samrat kya kar rahe ho shor kyu kar rahe ho???
S:tumne to bola chup betho to me chup hu na....
aur muje bhukh lagi haiiii......
G:laa rahi hu baba... tumna bilkul chhote bacche ki tarah
behave kar rahe ho.... n then she realised wat she said...
n look at samrat who was smiling at her.....
gunjan took food to the table... n sat on chair... then serve
him gajar ka halwa....
then they enjoyed the food......
S:wow chashmish kitna yummy food tha... waha hospital
me to boring sa food tha.....
G:chalo ab medicene ka timeee..................
S:no chashmish me nahi kha ne wala....
n went to his room....
gunjan followed himmm..... n saw he was sitting on the
bed....
G:plzz samrat kha lo na....
samrat saw her face....
S:thik haii...
G:good
gunjan gavge him medicine.... n water....
S:chashmish chalo chalte haooo na .............
G:kaha??
S:bahar ghunme chopati????
G:nahi samrat abhi tumhari tabiyat thik nahi haii na..
S:to ghar me hi game khelte haiiii.....
G:nahi samrat raat ho gayi haii abhi nahi ...
S:thik haiii n went to his cupboard.....
G:samrat kaha ja rahe ho??? aur cupboard me kya kar
rahe ho?????
n just then her cell was ringing n saw Nupur Flashing...
she cut the call n swithched off the cell....

At Mayur
Nupur again dialed the phone number.. but it was
switched off......
N:mobile switch off kar diya usne...
M:kya?? m sure nw samrat  ko gunjan hi leke gayi
haiiii....
D:par kaha mayuank gunjan to abhi ghar bhhi nahi
aayi.... wo kaha gaye honge....
M:sayad samrat ke ghar?? ha wo wahi hoge....
A:chalo abhi chal kar dekhte haiii.....
they went to samrat's house...

AT  Samrat's house
samrat took a paper sheet n pencil...
n started to draw....
G:tum kya kar rahe ho samrat??
S:kuch nahi chashmish ..
just then heard  door bell........
she went out n open the door.....
n socked to see gang n gang was socked to see gunjan...

will continueeeeee by to night........
sry have to go.....

 

 

 



Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 30 January 2011 at 6:18am

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Continue......

All:gunjan.???????
gunjan went from there.... gang followed her......
she was looking really very angry......
N:gunjan tum yaha kya kar rahi ho????
but gunjan didnt say anything....
M:gunjan wo hum tume batane hi wale the ki.......
G:ki samrat ki dimagi haalat thik nahi haiii?????
every1 socked.....
A:gunjan hum tumko batane hi wale the????
G:kab adhiraj kab...?????
Su:gunjan bhai ki haalat thik nahi thi is liye....
G:aap log kon ho jo ye decide kar diya ki samrat ki
haalat thik nahi haiii????
D:gunjan wo doctors ne kaha tha ki samrat paagal...
G:wo paagal nahi haiii diyaa she shouted at diya...
kyu kiya aap logo ne aisa ??? muje ek baar bhi nahi
bataya ?? kyu?? kya aap log nahi jante the ki me samrat
se kitna pyar karti thi aur aaj bhi karti hu??? to fir kyu
nahi bataya???????
N:kyunki hum nahi chahte the ki samrat ke baareme sun
kar tu toot jaye....
haa gunjan hum nahi chahte the ki tuje kabhi bhis samrat
ki haalat ke bareme pata chale... kyunki hum jante the
ki tu samrat ki haalat ke bareme sunegi ya fir samrat
ko dekhegi to tu toot jayegiii nahi seh payegi uska dard...
hum samrat ko to kho hi chuke the hum tumko nahi khona
chahte the gunjan is liye tume nahi bataya....
n tears were n nupur  Diya n suhani's eyes....
G:aap itni swarthi kaise ho sakte ho di ki aap ne mere
baremw socha samrat ke bareme ek baar bhi nahi kyu??
aap ko meri fikar thi samrat ki nahi???
M:nahi gunjan aisa nahi haii hume samrat ki bhi
fikar haii b ut gunjan cut himm...
G:fikar haii jiju?? aap logo ko??? agar aisi hi baat haii
to samrat ki aisi haalat kaise hui jiju??? me nahi thi par
par aap log to the yaha.... aap ko fikar haii na uski is
liye aap logo ne uski ye haalat hone ke baad  hospital
bhej diya... akela dard me tadapne ke liye ....
aur aap logo ko uski fikar haiiii...
every1 was crying nw.....
us jagah aap logo ne use bhej diya jaha use janwaro ki
tarah mara jata tha... jaha use paagal paagal kehke
bulaya  jata tha... aap logo ke ek baar bhi rooh nahi
kaapi aisa karte huye?? ek baar bhi??? aap logo ko ek
baar bhi uspe rahem nahi aaya???? ya fir aap log uska
boj hi nahi uthana chahte the.....
M:nahi gunjan hum mante haii ki hum ne khud samrat
ko hospital me bhej diya tha par hum bhi kya karte uski
haalat itni kharab ho gayi thi ki usko hospitol me admit
karne ke alawa aur koi option nahi tha humare paas..
use dekhke hume bhi dard hota haiii gunjan....
G:agar aap logo ko dard hota tha to aisa kya hua tha ki
samrat ki ye haalat hui???
samrat SAMRAT SHERGILL..... jis ki smile pe log
paagal ho jate the wo khud aaj paagal haiii aur log
use dekhke haste haiiii.....
jis ki har adaa pe duniya fida thi wo aaj aise kyu
behave kar raha haii jaise wo koi 8 saal ka baccha ho???
wo apna name bhi leta tha to bolta tha ki hiii  i m
samrat samrat shergill..... aur uske chehre ki smile jo
hamesha uski lips pe khelti thi .. aaj wo gayab ho gayi
haiii....... kyu kho gaya sab??? kya hua tha 5 saal me
mere jane ke baad ki samrat samrat hi nahi raha????
Su:tum janna chahti hona ki 5 saal me kya hua???
me kehti hu tume.....

At this time gunjan heard samrat's scream
S:chashmishhhhhhh kaha ho????????
G:aayi samratt...... she shoouted back...
n wiped her tears...
N:gunjan hum...
G:nahi uske samne bhi mat aana.........
n went from there...
she went to room
S:are chashmish kaha thi tum kabse wait kar raha tha..
?? aur door pe kaun tha...
G:koi nahi samrat...
S:accha thik haii yaha aao na chashmish dekho mene kya
banaya???
G:dikhao ??
n saw he draw beautiful eyes of a girl....
S:kaisi haii????
G:wow samrat beautiful eyes.... par kiski haiii...
S:no no nahi bataunga its top secret.... jab ye me puri
karlu tab bataungaa.. nahi dikhaunga....
G:aacha thik haii ab so jaao...
S:chashmish muje nahi so na haiii....
G:samrat chalo jaldi so jaao baki ki kal karna thik haii...
S:chashmish plzzz...
G:mene to socha tha ki aaj jaldi so jate haii fir kal
ghumne jayenge.. par tume to.... n made face..
n samrat was exited hearing this...
S:nahi chashmish so jate haii na kal fir jan a to haii na..
n layed on the bed... gunjan coved him with bedsheet....
n closed his eyes n started to move fingers in his hair....
soon he slept... she kissed his forhead n came out  of
the room n close the door...n went to halll..

In hall
evey1 was sitting n waitting for her...
Su:wo bhai???
G:so raha haiii... said angrily.......
A:samrat ko ghar le chalo gunjan aur tum bhi chalo...
G:nahi hum yahi rahenge.... na me ghar aaungi na wo..
kya pata uske ghar wapas aane ke  baad aap log use
fir hospital bhej do....???
N:nahi gunjan ..
G:plzzz di aap log jaao.....
M:kya tum janna nahi chahti ki samrat ki ye haalat
kaise hui???
G:ha chahti hu par abhi nahi .. aur agar aap logo ne
nahi bataya to me khud pata laga lungi par abhi muje
sirf samrat ko dekhna haiii...
n went to room n saw samrat was sleeping peacefully.
she layed on sofa....
n gang went back....

kya gunjan kabhi samrat ko thik kar payegi???
kya haii wo sach jis ki wajase samrat ki ye haalat hui
haii???? kya wo gang ko kabhi maaf kar payegi????
kya samrat ki haalat kabhi thik hogi ya wo use kho
degi???

 
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m waiting for ur comment.....
 
LoveHeart
Radhi...Wink


Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 30 January 2011 at 2:15pm

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