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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 7:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool_tuli

oyeee radhi this is soooo nyc ree....
u really rock...
sorrymai itne dino k baad rply ki bt i was busy reee....
but this is a superb update!!!
thk u meri jaannnnnnn

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Hey radhi di!
AWESOMEE UPDATE!
Well Im wondering where samrat is?
and why did nupur lie??
I Just hope gu nji doesnt believ her!
Continue sooooon!
WAITINGG....!!!
Love yaaa!
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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
hi radhi....
loved ds ss....
i wonder y nupur is lying....
thnx a lot 4 d pm...
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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 3:47pm | IP Logged

hey frndzzz m goig to go gujrat for sum days so
i will nt update for many days sryyyy
so i updated i dont knw when will i update
5th part.. n in this part u will get biggest sock...
i hope u like it....so njoy... plz tell me hwz it???


part 4

flashback continued............
G:samrat sheena nahi dikhai de rahi haiii kaha haiii wo??
S:chashmish abhi hum humari baat kar rahe haiii isme
sheena kaha se bich me aa gayi??? with irritating tone..
G:samrat me bas aise hi puch rahi thi ... kyunki abhi
is waqt tume mere nahi sheena ke sath hona chahiye???
S:chashmish muje na lagta haiii ki mene sheena ko na apni
GF bana kar bahut badi galti ki haiii.... with serious
face...
Gunjan was socked n confussed too..
G:samrat tum ye kya bol rahe ho??????
S:to or kya bolu chashmish jab se mene tume ye bataya haii
ki me sheena ko pasnd karne laga hu ... aur jabse mene
sheena ko propose kiya haii tabse tum mujse dur jana
chahti ho kyu?????
samrat held her hand in his hand...
S:mujse koi galti ho gayi haiii kya??? meri kisi baat
se hurt hui ho kya????
he moved so close to gunjan
S:bolo na chashmish kya baat haii??? tum kyu muje avoid
kar rahi ho?? mujse dur bhagti ho?? muje tumse dur kar
rahi ho???
gunjan was looking in his eyes... n she feld bed for
hurting samrat...she could see hw much she important for
him in his life... n saw his eyes almost wet....
gunjan couldnt see him like this....
gunjan held his hand tightly....
G:samrat aisi koi baat nahi haii...muje laga ki tum aur
sheena jitna time spend karogi utna accha hoga taki tum
or sheena ek dusro ko acche samaj paao ge....
samrat tumhe aage ki life uske sath beetani haii...
is liye me tumse dur rehti hu taki har waqt tum mere siva
sheena ke sath raho taki tum muje chhod ke uske
bareme socho...
S:chashmish tume ye sab kya soch rahi ho????
tum meri best frnd ho sheena se bhi pehle chashmish...
kya humari dosti itni kamzor haii ki kisi ke aane ke
humari dosti me koi fark padega...????
G:nahi samrata aisa nahi haiii..
S:to fir kaisa haiii chashmish tumhara mujse dur dur rehna
,muje khud se dur karna.. iska matlab kya haiii??????
kya tume nahi pata ki tumhari aisi harkato se muje kitna
fark padta haiii...??? kya kabhi socha haii ki jab tum
mere aas paas nahi hoti ya mujse nahi milti to meri halat
kya hoti haii?? me kaisa feel karta hu??? me akela feel
karta hu chashmish bahut akela... sirf tum hi to meri
ho sirf tum...aur tum ho ki mujse aise....
she immidetly said
G:m sorry samrat......... she had tears in her eyes...
samrat looked at her n saw her in tears....
he quickly wiped her tears ...
S:chashmish tum ro kyu rahi ho??? m sry agar mene tume
hurt kiya to m sry...
G:nahi samrat m sry.... meri galti thi mene hi....
samrat put fingure on her lips..
S:shhhhhhhhhh....
pehle hi meri wajase bahut royi ho ab aur nahiii...
sab meri galti haiii....mene tume itna lamba choda bhashan
de diya..... m really sry...
ab to smile karoooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
gunjan smiled......
S:dats like my chashmish n clicked
nose...
G:samrat muje na bahut bhukh lagi haiii ....
S:chashmish chalo tum canteen me.. tumne pehle kyu nahi
kaha ki tume bhukh lagi haiii...
then went to canteen n njoyed coffee together....

flash back end....

G:kitne khush the na samrat ek waqt tha jab tum mere
bagair nahi reh sakte the aur ab aaj jab me yaha hu to
tum nahiii
n criedddddddddddddddddddd her heart out...
par pata nahi mera dil kyu nahi maan raha ki tum aisa
kar sakte ho.... tum kaha ho samrat???????????
plzzzzz bhagwanji ek bar samrat se mlado plzzz
me use dekhna chahti hu bas ye dekhna chahti hu ki wo
apne pyar ke sath khush hai ya nahi ...

n slept half sitting on bed n having samrat's pic near
her heart.......

NExt day....
sun rays fall on gunjan's face n her sleep disturbed....
she slowly opened her eyes.... she looked at samrat's pic
n carresed it then put it on side tablen went to washroom
she was ready n took her file n came to hall
gunjan saw everybody was waiting 4 her....
N:gunjan tu uth gayi chal jaldi aa nasta karle..
gunjan silently went to dinning table n did beark fast..
mayur looked at gunjan again n again...
finally mayank asked
M:gunjan tum kahi ja rahi ho kya???
G:ha jiju wo meri practice khatam hone ke baad muje
apni duty join karni thi...
N:kya par kabse???
G:aaj se....
M:kon se hospital me ??
G:sanjivanee me....
they reliefed.... they were hiding sumthing....
G:accha di me chalti hu.... muje der ho rahi haiii
N:ha thik haii bbye n hugged her..
M:best of luck
G:thnku jiju bbye
M:bbye...

after gunjan went
N:accha hua gunjan sanjivani me doctor haii warna...

they did breakfast n mayank went to office n nupur went
to her room....she was cleaning her room....

after 1 hour gunjan reached to sanjivanee...
when she entered she felt sumthing strange..
G(in mind): muje itna ajeeb kyu feel ho raha haii??
jaise koi apni chij muje uski taraf khich rahi ho???
every1 welcumed her... then she went to Dr,shashan's
office...she entered
G:hello sir...
Sh:hello Dr.gunjan wel cum to sanjivanee london ki best
doctor ab humari sanjivanee me dats gr888....
G:ji sir me is hospital ko apna best dena chahti hu..
Sh:aur me janta hu ye tum karke raho gi...
both smiiled.
Sh:so Dr.gunjan bhushan me ye apko ek file deta hu
is case ko aap ko handle karna haiii...
gunjan took file from shasank
G:ji sir..
Sh:so dr.gunjan best of luck for the first case in
sanjivanee... n i hope 4 the best..
G:thnk u sir...n i also hope the same...

shashank's cell rang he picked it up...
Sh:watttttt fir se???... ok wait me abhi aata hu....
shashank was damn worried after call he took hi lab coat
G:sir kya hua aap itne pareshan kyu haii???
Sh:gunjan chalo mere sath ek naya pateint aaya haii
they started to walk hurrily...
they were walk n talk...
use fir se dohra pada haiii uske dimagi haalat bilkul
thik nahi haiiiii..... 5 saal se yahi haal haii aaj tak
koi doctor nahi jaan paya ki wo aisa kyu kar raha haii??
uski aisi haalat kyu haii aur uski haalat sudhar kyu
nahi rahi haii?? wo apna dimagi santulan means mentall
balance kho chuka haiii..
they entered in lift...
G:kya???
her heart was racingggggggggg
S:haa paagal haii wo pata nahi kab kya kar bethta haii
kisi ko bhi marne lagta haiii... usko kabuk karna bahut
muskil haiii
they started to walk toward the ward of the patient..
they reached there n gunjan saw 4 guard were helding a
man a strong man n 2 were hitting him with sticks....
n man was yelling in painnnnnnnnn..............
M:cchodo mujeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.........
gunjan heard the voice n saw his clear face he is non
other then our SAMRAT ... SAMRAT SHERGILL........
(guys plzz dont kill me 4 dis its story)
gunjan was socked to death...she couldnt believe in her
eyes she actually saw samrat.. but his condition....
S:chhod do muje
samrat was trying to be free from guards.....
he was trying tro push but their grip was tighten....
n he was hitting by big sticks.....
so many questions were in gunjan's mind...
gunjan froze at the same place she didnt move an inch..
samrat was hitting in front of her....
n shashank made injection to make him calm....
gunjan couldnt saw his condition.. so she ran towards
samrat ...
G:samrattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt......
every1 stopped.....................
samrat saw gunjan...... she made him free from gaurds...
G:choodo ise chhod do.......... she pushed them...
she hugged him tightlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy


ab kya hoga ???????????????????????????????????

hope u like it... if u like it do comment
m waiting 4 ur comment....Shocked

LoveHeart
Radhi...Wink



Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 January 2011 at 3:48pm

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anjali_12

Hey Radhi.Hug...I don't have words...You wrote it so beautifullyClap....Sammy's condition was so heartbreaking.Broken Heart..I liked the bold Gunjan ...You portrayed her character so wellThumbs Up...I real like the way you are taking the story forward...I know you will not able to update...But kya karum wait Nahi hota...Please update if you get some time...
thnk u so much AnjliSmile
i will try to cont asap ok....

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
Hey radhi di!
Such a beautiful update! Poor samrat!Disapprove
Hope Gunjan makes him come out of his pain.
Wonderful story line!
waiting for mysteries to unfold.
cont soon and thanks for the pm Hug

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nishi_sajan

Hey radhi di!
Such a beautiful update! Poor samrat!Disapprove
Hope Gunjan makes him come out of his pain.
Wonderful story line!
waiting for mysteries to unfold.
cont soon and thanks for the pm Hug
Thx nishi m glad u l;iked it.....

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