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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali_12

Radhu it was awesome update..I already gave u my comments on the beginning part...It was superb!!!!The remaining  part were really fantastic too!! I loved the part where Samrat was explaining to Gunjan about what he saw in the park & why he did that & all..It was so innocent & cute..Gunjan & Padma scene was food too!!The truth was really shocking!!!Its GUNJAN GUPTA not GUNJAN BHUSHAN..PlZZZzz continue soon...



Thnk u so much dii for beautiful comment....
ya trusth is really soking...
n i will cont on friday..
only for u as u rqsted...

Love u dii
Radhi...
😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey radika i dun't kno u n u also dun't kno me.....m new reader of ewr ss n luvd frm core yaa u juz awesum, mindblowin, rokin, fabulous n m totally speechless......plz do cont soon n plz if possible den plz add me 2 ewr pm list.....can't wait
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: avani_9

hey radika i dun't kno u n u also dun't kno me.....m new reader of ewr ss n luvd frm core yaa u juz awesum, mindblowin, rokin, fabulous n m totally speechless......plz do cont soon n plz if possible den plz add me 2 ewr pm list.....can't wait



hey avni thnks for reading.....
n m glad dat u liked my ss....
yup will cont by tonight.....
yup will surely PM u.......
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan



hey avni thnks for reading.....
n m glad dat u liked my ss....
yup will cont by tonight.....
yup will surely PM u.......


Thnx dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey frnds another part here.. i knw u all surprised..
as i updated my all stories.. hehe  here is d part read
it.. hope u like my part....

PART 14

gunjan went to sweapers home....
Sw:ji aap???
G:dr.gunjan to samrat shergill ke case ke bareme...
Sw:ji andar aayi ye.. n closed the door...
G:aap kya jante haii us case ke bareme...
Sw:ji jyada kuch to nahi janta.. me..
G:dekhiye aap ko jitne paise chahiye le lijiye par muje
saari baate bataiye...
Sw:ji wo jab us patient ka operation karna tha tab koi
aaya tha aur unhone doctor saab ko paise diye the..
aur wo kuch aisi baate kar rahe the ki use kahi london
jaana haiii... aur usne doctor ko paise de kar bola ki
samrat shergill puri tarah pagal ho jana chahiye ki koi
bhi dawa(medicine)use thik na kar sake...aur fir bola ki
agar unhone wo kaam kar diya to wo unhe aur paise denge
aur london jane par bhi help karenge...
G:kaun tha wo???
Sw:pata nahi koi ladka tha pehli baar dekha tha use...
us din ke baad wo kabhi hospital me nahi aaya...
G:thik haii thnk u.. n gv him money...
Sw:ji sukriya.. n gunjan left...
G(in mind):hona ho wo koi samrat ka hi dushman tha... par
samrat ki to kisi ke sath dushmani nahi thi... wo to
apne dushman ko bhi dost bana leta tha koi kyu use aisa
karna chahega..??? ab ye baat muje london jaa kar hi pata
chalegi...


she went to gunpa house....
n saw samrat benji and padma aunty were doing masti...
Samrat saw gunjan n ran to her n hugged her....
S;chashmish tum aa gayi... dekho hum sab kitni masti kar
rahe haiii...
they broke the hug..
G:wo to muje dikh raha haii ...
p:gunjan aao na beitho... n was very happy seeing gunjan.
G:nahi aunty wo muje der ho rahi haii...
P:nahi tu idhar beith.. n made her sit...
me abhi tere liye fruits or juce le kar aati hu...
G:nahi aunty sach me muje late ho raha haiii muje london
jaana haiii...
p:london kyu???
G:wo bas waha kuch important kaam haii..samrat ke bareme
to... benji understood...
P:par...
G:plzz aunty sach me jaana bahut jaruri haii... agli baar
jab aaungi to pura din aap ke sath rahungi...
padma smiled...
P(in mind):nahi beta agli baar jab tu aayegi to pura din
nahi fir hamesha ke liye meri beti mere paas hi rahegi..
sajan n benji left... n gunjan told everything to benji.
so benji went to his home.. n sajan to their home...
benji booked ticket... n told gang to come with them...
n adhani was already there....

SAJAN
gunjan was packing bag...
S:chashmish hum london kyu jaa rahe haii???
G:ghumne... jaa rahe haii yaha ghumte ghumte bore ho gaye
haii is liye london jaa rahe haii...
S:wow chashmish kitna maza aayega haii na?? aur benji
bhi chalega na humare sath..
G:ha samrat wo bhi chal raha hai humare sath...
aur samrat tume tumhari wo painting sath me leni haiii
shw was about to touch painting samrat stopped her...
S:chashmish wo meri painting haii.. n she stopped as he
shouted..
G:ha samrat muje pata haii wo tumhari painting haii
par itna chilla kyu rahe ho??
Samrat went to her n took painting frm her hand...
S:ise me pack kar dunga....
G:samrat kya kar rahe ho laao muje do me packing kar
rahi hu na???
S:nahi ise main nahi dunga... ise mein hi pack karunga..
n packed it himself...
G:ab khush...???
S:sry.. 
G:its ok chalo khana kha lo...

n they did lunch n At night
went to airport benji was already
there.. they sat in plane.. sajan together...
G:samrat ab tum rest karo chalo....
S:nahi chashmish muje bahar dekhna haii kitna accha haii
benji had already slept as he was too tired...
G:thik haii jab nind aaye to so jaana..
S:ha chashmish...
n gunjan slept.... n samrat heard a couples convo...
Grl:tum mujse pyar karte ho to tume meri har baat maan
ni padegi.. mere liye sab kuch karna padega...
boy:accha thik haii sab karunga .. par iske badle muje
kiss chahiye milegi na..????
grl:ha milegi....
S:mein bhi chashmish se pyar karta hu muje bhi uski baat
manni chahiye.. aur uske liye sab kuch karna chahiye..
n saw her sleeping...
S:ye aise kyu so rahi haii.. hume to hug karke sona
chahiye jaise wo log so rahe haii...
S:chashmish utho...
G:kya haii samrat ?? tum abhi tak nahi soye...
in sleepy voice..
S:muje aise nind nahi aayegi aise nahi sona...
G:to fir kaise sona haii finally she opened her eyes...
samrat put his arm around her waist n pulled her towwards
him.. n put her head on his chest .. n he put his head on
her head...
S:aise...
G(in mind):samrat ke itne paas main.. par uske liye
muje karna hoga... kuch bhi karna hoga...
n saw samrat was sleeping peacefully....

In morning they reached to London.....
they reached shashank's home.. where she was used to
stay there when she came london to stdy...
n called adhani dat they have reached...
G:samrat tum fresh ho kar TV dekho....
Samrat switched on TV....
gunjan went to benji n told him to take appontment of dat
doctors...
n gunjan went to washroom... n samrat was watching TV
in hall.. n saw serials.. forigner were kissing lisps
n saw romencing n etc.. as its london's chanel...
he saw so many bold scenes...
then after half hour its over... so he went to room..
n lost in thoughts..
S(in mind):chashmish bhi mujse pyar karti haii so wo bhi
mujse kitna pyar chahti hogi jaise us serial me wo girl
chahti thi... or wo boy use kitna pyar karta tha....
he sat on bed.. n just then gunjan came oout of washroom
in towel.. as she forgot her clothes out side.. n thought
dat samrat was in hall.. so she came out in only towel.
n another towel is in her hand n was drying her hair..
n saw samrat was staring at her... n socked to see him
in room...
G:samrat tum???
Samrat slowly got up frm bed n went to her... n gunjan
back off.. n before gunjan could move samrat pulled her
by waist
G:samrat kya kar rahe ho??? aksed in broken voice...
S:tumse pyar.... n started to kiss her on her neck...
shoulder..both side.. n then slowly he started to kiss
her on her bare chest.. gunjan was lost in his love n
breathing heavily while he was kissing her chest..
unknowingly her hand move to his hair... n she was feeling
his lip's touch on her chest... she was shivering with
his every movement on her chest... n nw her another hand
around his back.. n samrat made grip tight on her....
as his feeing in started to came out frm his heart...
n gunjan clutched her hand on his shirt...it was looking
like samrat was just kissing her wet chest... then he
looked up n moved his frm her waist n put both hands on
her both cheeks... n atteched his lips with her...
gunjan soon responded as she had already lost in samrat's
land...after 15 minutes they broke kiss...
S:I LOVE YOU...
n hugged her... bt gunjan didnt hugged him... as she had
tears in her eyes.. bt before samrat could see she wiped
it.. as she knew if he see her tears he wil say himself
mad... samrat broke the hug...
S:chashmish I LoVE YOU...
S:chashmish jawab to do.. dekho us serial me us ladki ne
I LOVE YOU TOO aisa bola tha ...
gunjan understood.... n hugged him n said...
G:I LOVE YOU TOO ... n samrat too hugged her..n samrat
was smiling...

(i knw u all r suprised seeing again romentic scene of
sajan.. n agnry with me dat m nt continueing my story
telling suspence bt u will come to knw very soon y m
writing sajan's romentic scenes...)


they broke the hug....
G:ready ho jaao hume bahar jaana haii...
S:ok.. n went to washroom... n gunjan wore her clothes..
she came out n was sitting on sofa..
G(in mind):aaj samrat ne muje towl me dekh liya.. pehle
to sirf lips pe kiss ki thi ab usne muje towel me thi to
meri chest par kiss... n as usual i was lost.. n let him
to do wat evre he want...par usme uski kya galti haii
wo samajta haii wo mujse pyar karta haii aur jo wo
dekhta haii wo apne pyar ke liye yaani mere liye karta'
haii.. kal ko mere liye kuch bhi karega...kuch bhi karega
wait wait.. wait gunjan didnt u notice... samrat aage
badh chuka haii uski haalat tak waisi nahi hoti wo
tumse pyar karta haiii... wo kisi bhi angle se paagal
nahi lagta..aur wo mere liye kuch bhi karega.... dats
i want wo sab kuch kare jo ek normal insan karta haii..
jo hum karte haii...matlab ki use wo sab karvana haii..
mil gaya rasta use thik karne ka.. ek baar wo sab karne
lagega to use thik hone se koi nahi rok paayega....
jo main kahungi wo karega... aur jab wo sab kuch karne'
lagega wo normal  ho jayega.. kyunki samrat paagal hua'
nahi haii...use pyar hi thik karega.. use sirf pyar ki
medicine ki jarurat haii... par uske liye muje wo karna
padega jo wo chahta haii...muje thoda secrifice karna
padega uske liye......
just then samrat came....
S:chashmish m ready... chalo chalte haii...
Gunjan was smiling seeing him..
G(in mind):first step.. aaj pata chal jayega ki wo mere
pyar se thik hoga ya nahi...
G:nahi samrat hum nahi jaa sakte...
samrat made face...
S:kyu nahi jaa sakte..???
G:kyunki humare paas driver nahi haii...
S:to kya hua tum drive kar lena...
G:nahi aaj mein drive nahi karna chahti mera hath bahut
dukh raha haiii...
S:kya ??? to ab... n made sad face...
G(in mind):come samrat tell me tum drive karoge.... agr
aaj tumne drive kiya to main maan jaungi ki mene jo
tume thik karne ka rasta chuna haii wo bilkul sahi haii..
G:kash ki koi aisa hota jo mere dard ko samajta hath ke..
koi mujse itna pyar nahi karta ki mere dard ko samaj sake.
agar koi aisa hota to wo mere liye car drive karta...
S:koi kyu chashmish mein tumse pyar karta hu na mein
car drive karunga tumhare liye.. main tumhare dard ko'
samjunga..... said innocently....
g(in mind):dats the thing i want frm u samrat.. tum
kuch bhi kar sakte ho samrat.. bt sry meine tumhari
masumiyat ka fayda uthaya haiii..)
S:chalo main keys le kar aata hu...
samrat took keys.. n both sat... samrat on driver seat..
G:samrat tum rehne do nahi kar paaoge......
S:samrat shergill sab kuch kar sakta haii....
as soon as she heard dat sentence she turned to him
n saw a different twinkle on her face... different glow.
different strengh... n again could see old samrat back..
G(in mind):ye to wahi sentense haii jo samrat aksar
college me bola karta tha.. matlab ki samrat thik ho
sakta haii bahut jald...uske chehre par alag hi junun
haii josh haiii jussa haii... kuch hasil karne ka jo
oehle uske chehre par hua karta tha.....
gunjan was damn happy...
n finally samrat started car..before he drove...
G:samrat.. samrat saw gunjan...
she went near him n sofly kissed him on his lips....
I LOVE YOU... n samrat also moved near her n sofly
kissed her lips n said I LOVE YOU TOO....
n drove off to the one of doctor's house....

(i kne u all r waiting for suspence to reveal bt
i have to make samrat well so i have to write on it
n this ss will be ended soon)

precap:
gunjan slaped samrat...................

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting  4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word.......


Love'
Radhi...😉


Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
😃Radhu what can I say 🤗 each update is more beautiful than the other......So I am going to gave you stars Ok!!!!!!⭐️⭐️It was really very interesting..The information Gunjan got from the Sweeper was really shocking 😲Poor Sammy !!😭Because of that he went through so much.🥺 Really hope going London will solve all the missing links ...

Padma & Gunjan scene was so real!!A mother's wish & desire to be with her daughter was too cute & sweet...

Benji is a big support for Gunjan...He is really a very nice & true FRIEND..

.The SAJAN scenes in Londao was so hot & romantic!!!!!!!☺️☺️ But it showed the change in Samrat too..When he is with Gunjan he is getting the feelings which are hidden in him..

You wrote it so beautifully that we can feel that change!!👏

Gunjan's idea of getting Samrat back was really FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!& Its working too.....I like to see Sammy back atleast like this...

Precap was really very shocking one...Why will Gunjan Slap Samrat???????????????



Why Radhu u r leaving us on such a precap..Now can't wait to read next part ..plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon...
Edited by Anjali_12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my God
in last ff u didn't mentioned precap
so was angry
n now m angry y u given the precap
now who will wait for the update =(
plzzzzzzz continue soooooooon na
 
ok
the update was superbbbbb
rockinggggggggggg mind blowing
out of the world
was really romantic atempt
great job
sajan roxxxxxxxxxx
my sammy is really cuteeeee
do continue sooooooooon
all ur stories
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiiiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved sajan
Adorable
Loved sammy
Can't wait 4 more
Precap looks interesting
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
Posted: 13 years ago
hey update was aweeoseme as usauully n soooooooooo romanticccc.......loved to the core...hope samrat jaldi se tekh ho jaeee....aur yar jaldiiiiiiiiiiii seyyy bataoo na mysrtyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cant waiittt.......but really udpate was rockingggggggggg..n cant waitittt ......omg precapee.....but whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
dooooooooo continueeeeeeeeeee sooon
thanks
love u
meri
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG.......Gunjan will slap samrat ......why??? Radhi pls pls pls cont soon ,,,,,,,,,curious to know .........loved the romantic part of sajan ...simply superb.........