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Posted: 13 years ago
hey superb update luved it but cannot see samrat like this in pain😭 cont soon n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey radhi .........OMG !! U have left me speechless ....I have no words to say.......

Remember dear the last time U updated I asked U a Qs Whats Wrong with Samrat?? and I even said the way everyone is behaving n hiding from Gunjan samrat ko zaroor kuch major hua hai??..and U replied 2 me n said Gunjan --Wait for next few updates U will get ur answer..........

and U answered one of my Qs ......................

While  reading your last few updates I also felt that  the way everyone is behaving and hiding from gunjan about samrat and nupur saying again n again gunjan sahen nahi kar payegi...I came 2 one conclusion that may be Samrat is in mental asylum ..he must have suffered some accident or shock due 2 which he must have lost the balance over his mind and My Guess was Right....😲.............U know Even after guessing this about samrat I am still shocked😲....Because guessing is something else But Being proved that Ur Guess was Right is a shock😲......But I will say this Radhi U wrote this update so beautifully and Samrat scenes So well that While reading and Imagining the scene Side by side I had tears in my eyes😭.Samrat has Lost his mental balance😭😭😭😭..Poor Samrat.........😭 ................

But Now the big question is  how did this happen?? Is it because of sheena😡 and Why does Nupur n mayank say these Words 2 each other that "APNI EK GALTI KI WAJAH SEY HUM SAMRAT KO KHO CHUKEY HAIN" What Mistake did the Gang-- Dia uday Adhiraj Suhanni Mayur make that Samrat ko Kho diya Unhoney ??WHAT Happened after Gunjan went abroad ??
So many questions 😊 I really want 2 know these answers .................So Plss Radhi do Update Soon After coming back from Gujarat...................😊..........................

Once again ......Awesome, Superb, Rocking Update.....very well written n good dialogues...Fabulous work👏👏👏👏👏..............What a Beautifull mindblowing Ss--My last  desire......👍🏼👏................I love the way the story is progressing ........But Plss Story end Happy rakhna....Plsssssssssss😊.............

Gunjan.............

Edited by 1gunjan7 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG......Radhi i m completely blank after reading sam's condition n his love for his Chahshmish ...........i have no words ........plss cont ASAP can't wait to read next part ... n i must say u did a fab job👏👍🏼⭐️🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Hey radhi .........OMG !! U have left me speechless ....I have no words to say.......

Remember dear the last time U updated I asked U a Qs Whats Wrong with Samrat?? and I even said the way everyone is behaving n hiding from Gunjan samrat ko zaroor kuch major hua hai??..and U replied 2 me n said Gunjan --Wait for next few updates U will get ur answer..........

and U answered one of my Qs ......................

While  reading your last few updates I also felt that  the way everyone is behaving and hiding from gunjan about samrat and nupur saying again n again gunjan sahen nahi kar payegi...I came 2 one conclusion that may be Samrat is in mental asylum ..he must have suffered some accident or shock due 2 which he must have lost the balance over his mind and My Guess was Right....😲.............U know Even after guessing this about samrat I am still shocked😲....Because guessing is something else But Being proved that Ur Guess was Right is a shock😲......But I will say this Radhi U wrote this update so beautifully and Samrat scenes So well that While reading and Imagining the scene Side by side I had tears in my eyes😭.Samrat has Lost his mental balance😭😭😭😭..Poor Samrat.........😭 ................

But Now the big question is  how did this happen?? Is it because of sheena😡 and Why does Nupur n mayank say these Words 2 each other that "APNI EK GALTI KI WAJAH SEY HUM SAMRAT KO KHO CHUKEY HAIN" What Mistake did the Gang-- Dia uday Adhiraj Suhanni Mayur make that Samrat ko Kho diya Unhoney ??WHAT Happened after Gunjan went abroad ??
So many questions 😊 I really want 2 know these answers .................So Plss Radhi do Update Soon After coming back from Gujarat...................😊..........................

Once again ......Awesome, Superb, Rocking Update.....very well written n good dialogues...Fabulous work👏👏👏👏👏..............What a Beautifull mindblowing Ss--My last  desire......👍🏼👏................I love the way the story is progressing ........But Plss Story end Happy rakhna....Plsssssssssss😊.............

Gunjan.............

so ur guess ir ryttttttttt..
n knw sab socked haiiii
i had also tears in my eyes when i was sriting the part
actually me 2 ya 3 uodates ke baad bata ne wali thi dat where is samrat??
but mujse raha nahi gaya n  mene likh diyaaaaaaa
well ab jo parts haii wo use bhi acche hoge as ye ss haii  to ise jaldi khatam
bhi to karna haiii
n tere saare answer mil jayenge nw happy?????????????
n thx 4 liking my ss....
bt 4 ur answers u have to wait 4 next updates yaar...
yup sajan ki story haii kaise end happy na rakhu????
surelly happy ending hi hoga nw happy???
loved ur comment....
 
Love❤️
Radhi...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update.......poor samrat....i hope gunjan makes him better....cant wait to know samrat is like this.....pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

OMG......Radhi i m completely blank after reading sam's condition n his love for his Chahshmish ...........i have no words ........plss cont ASAP can't wait to read next part ... n i must say u did a fab job👏👍🏼⭐️🤗

yup sure...
n m glad u liked it....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thx to all my frndz who loved tha parttttttttttt
thxx muahhhhhhhhhhh
i will cont asap
till u have to wait sryyyyyyyyyyyy.....
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very Nice Concept and Updates. 👏ROCKING!! . What a fabulous description of all Emotions.....👏Totally Mind Blowing. I M eagerly waiting 4 next part......Do UPDATE SOON.

-S O H A M.

Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 3 and 4 were awesome
n now gunjan knows where samrat is now every thing will be fine
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi...
loved d update...
4rm d way ur story was progessing i thought samrat might b in coma n gunjan will b his doctor, but i never imagined samrat cud b mentally unstable....
neways, very nice... love it...
plz cont soon...
want 2 know samrat's reaction...
thnx 4 d pm..