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Nothing Can Keep Me Away From U pt 18 pg 22 (Page 8)

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gr8 part...... loved it dear

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nice, lovely part. loved it.
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nice part

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great update
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hi guys this is the next update guys please comment and hit the like bottom  i will know if you love the story or not and it inspire to write please comment and here is the update enjoy your week end

My Happy New Year wish for you
Is for your best year yet,
A year where life is peaceful,
And what you want, you get.
A year in which you cherish
The past year's memories,
And live your life each new day,
Full of bright expectancies.
I wish for you a holiday
With happiness galore;
And when it's done, I wish you
Happy New Year, and many more.

happy new year dear friends


maan left when he drop her and go to the office to take the file when he enter his he found  a letter address to him and a big file and he started reading
    Dear Mr maan singh khurana

 "maan son i know you dont know that much to do me a favor but please take care geet she is young  she dont understand the  import of the family business she think i dont want her to do her lawyer please my husband left this to her and gauri but they are young and they dont understand please marry her she will not do any thing to you but will love she  dont trust man  and that is the problem because all  they need is her money you dont need that and yes i know you grandmother told me what happen to you  dont trust women because they need your money  but she will not your money because she is billionaire but she dont know her money what her dad left her i am dying and i did not tell her because she will break down please for me take care off my girls i will always pray that god protect you and your family she love you and she will not tell you i know you love her if you dont tell her she will be like that i have cancer i want to see my daughter get married i only have two month please dont say no to this letter came to my room tomorrow if you agreed if you not came  i will understand.this is the files off the business look over and give me or geet if you dont want to marry her please."

 sincerely yours
Rona  handa

he cried and said how could i do this i dont know her and she trusted me off all the people i can just marry her because she said so and geet said she give her money to the orphanage i have to talk to Dev and dadima i dont want to take so many responsibly

and he left to go home when he inter he saw gauri waiting and he said
maan:"why are you a wake its midnight you have school tomorrow beta ."
gauri:"tomorrow there is no school and yes i want to ask you some."
maan:"bola beta kye hua ."
gauri:"papa if my parent come back to take me will you allow them to take me."
maan:"beta nothing can keep me away from you because you are my life and i will make sure they dont touch you."
gauri:"papa i am 7 years old i never saw them why did they left me i am bad right papa."
maan:"beta i dont know why they left and angel your not bad they are because they are but i am the luckiest man in this world because i have a daughter who is smart and you dont look like you are 7 years we have to find where you were you born."
gauri:"why did you adopt me papa."
maan:"because i love you at first sight your are smart you look like old enough to be high school but you are only 7 years i will always love no matter what happen."
gauri:"papa but if you marry your wife will kick me out off the house right ."
maan:"we will kick her out after all we are khuranas right know go ti sleep and dont even think i will marry that some who you dont approve beta have sweet dreams."
gauri:"i love you papa."
maan:"i love you beta have a sweet dreams."

maan:"what will i  do to Mrs handa she is waiting my answer and i dont want to this responsibility i have to see her she is dying she is a mother after all so i have to do something and before that i will speak to dadima and Dev but know i have busy day tomorrow so i will sleep and he left to his room."

the other side geet was thinking about the bag that she find with gauri and she said she is old enough but i will break her heart so i have to open this and tell her what it says and she got the bag and open and she found a letter and money and the later said

 dear beta
 "i dont know what to say but i believe your old enough to understand my pain my be your find a family who love you or may be you are with your orphanage what ever they case may be i want to tell you some think i didn't want you to be a beggar because off me so i but you on  this trash can so one lovely family can find you and take you to their house your father is the richest man in India but he will not believe me if i tell him you are his daughter because i did something to him please take care off your family beta i know you may hear khurana family they are your family if you ever need some one go there is a man called maan singh khurana tell him you are his daughter and he will ask how tell you are his ex wife daughter  beta please for give me i hope i  see you soon take care and always remember i loved you and will love you for ever."

geet:"cried and said she is your daughter maan i will give him this later tomorrow and he will love you  gauri because you are his real daughter thanks babaji you did something good to unite daughter and father."


maan wake up early and he got down stair when he saw gauri and Dev and dadima talking he said

maan:"good morning ."
dadi:"good morning beta."
maan:"i want to talk to you dadi and Dev about something important."
dadi:"what is it."
Dev:"are you going some where."
maan:"gauri beta go wake Vicky."
gauri:"okay papa."
maan:"i get this letter last night from Mrs handa please read."
 they read said so what is the problem she trusted you its your decision.
maan:"dadi this is not about trust i have the responsibility about khurana contraction and this family i dont to lie to her and about geet i dont even know her a month so how can i just marry her dadima please go there and tell her i cant do this."
dadi:"maan i am not gonna do this and its your problem why would i have to bail you out and by the way she said get love you and you love her please do this for because i am dying do this for her because she is like your mom think about your mom and do this for her."
dev:"bro  you said if i ever  needed something from u will do without question u will do for me."was  that true  or where you playing at the time."
maan:"Dev you know i love you and Vicky i dont show you but you are my life and will do any thing if you say give me your life i will give you because you were there when i needed you as my friend and my bro so what you want will happen just ask."
Dev:" get married to geet you trust her i can see her she will keep you happy and we will be happy to have a bhabi and dadi will be happy if you get married please dont say no."
maan:"Dev are you kidding me you know i can just marry after what happen to me what sameera did to me so please drop this idea."
Dev:"you said if i ask your life you will give me maan you lied and today you prove what people say you being ignorant your older than us and your doing this i hope u forget that women geet loves you she may not say because of her self respect your rejection what ever the case is she deserve some one who will not compare her sameera or some who is like her so thanks for proving me wrong."
with that Dev left the table
maan:"dadi i am going to the office please tell Dev to drop gauri to the school  i will pick her up."
dadi:" she dont want to go the school."
maan:"gauri he yelled."
gauri:"ha papa."
maan:"get ready your going to school i will  pick you up  i have meeting so Dev or Vicky will drop u get ready know."
maan left to see geet mom  after 10 minute he was in the hospital so get in he knew the hospital there was a nurse who was hired to take care off her no body  else and doctor meera who was friend of geet and pink and she was happy to see Mr khurana again
meera:" hey Mr khurana she was waiting for you she ask us every minute you if you are here please go in i will be there."
maan:"thanks Dr malhotra."
he go in and when she saw she told the nurse to give time to talk.
rano:"thanks for coming son,"
maan:"its no problem how are you feeling."
rano:'beta i am old so its okay its always pain when your old ."
maan:"mom i want to tell you some thing i love geet but i dont know if she do so until she except me i cant take over the business."
rano:"she do love you and will keep you happy beta promise me something she never ask anything so please but her bank money every month she dont charge people when she fight for them so please but three lakh every month so she can do any think she want."
maan:"i have to leave please take care off your self and your not gonna die i know it."
maan left and when he got to his car he saw geet coming to the hospital and he said
maan:" i never trusted women after sameera today i trust you please dont break and he left."
geet and her mom were talking
geet:"mom you called me what is wrong your okay right."
rano:"beta i am okay but i need you to  promise me one think and only one think."
geet:"what is it mom."
rano:"please do this for me for your dad get married please beta."
geet:"mom you know every man need my money and i want some to love me for who i am."
rano:"he will love you for who you are you just take care off him and support him that is it."
geet:"mom who are you talking about."
rano:"maan."beta he loves you but he is afraid you may leave him and you are afraid he may not love you but he do love you."

precap: the date

and guys sorry i am tired so i will update tomorrow 

Edited by cuyuun13 - 31 December 2010 at 8:58am

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Krishna_Sourav IF-Addictz

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nice part. loved it.
continue soon.
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loved it yaar..awsome one .... waiting for maneet moments 

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