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Nothing Can Keep Me Away From U pt 18 pg 22 (Page 6)

bluedreamz953 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Lovely update

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 2:21am | IP Logged
i loved it yaar..awsome one waiting for the day maan and geet ll be together ..gauri s so sweet !!
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 3:11am | IP Logged
loved it.............gr8 part
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thanks 4 pm
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loved it
the birthday was great
continue soon
Maneet13 Senior Member

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hi thanks for your comment and i will update regularly after today here is the next update please comment and hit the like bottom.


when geet left maan said he have to go to the office to get some file and he will be back so he left too
gauri dadima and Vicky and Dev who was doing some work on his laptop was on the living room gauri was happy today because she have family who care for her and love her without doubt she have friend who care for her to buy a bracelet that had her name and dadima who love her as much as she love her grand sons an uncle who dont talk much but she can see the love when he drops her some times in school and her papa love her without doubt because she is his angle or does she have a bond that nobody knows she didn't like any body but him she started liking him when he was in the hospital that she cried all day and night saying he will hate me because i left the house dadima will he forgive me but he didn't ask anything he just said dont go if you want to leave call me i will tell the driver to take you. that is gauri family and tonight he said you are gauri singh khurana and half owner of the khurana money houses and every think she was playing when dadima call her and said wont you ask me what gift i get for you and she said its you dadima and Dev was looking his dadima and gauri bonding and
Vicky:" said Dev why didn't  you give a your gift to gauri dont you like her."
Dev:"no i like her but you already give her and its some thing its jewelry so i will give her when she is leaving the house as bride."
Vicky:"my princess is not leaving and that is final she will stay with us.'
 he was becoming to attach to gauri
Vicky was looking to dadima and his princess
dadima:" when she said gauri here is your gift i promise your grandmother  to give this to her granddaughter and its you so here it was a good gift a jewelry set."

at last it was Dev turn and he gave her this this camera so she can have fun


she gave them a hug and every one left to their room but gauri was waiting her papa to return but she have to wait longer because tonight was not the night as he left the mansion he saw geet car and stop for her he came down and she was talking to her self
geet:"what will i do and i can go back to khurana  mansion babaji why me tonight i have case tomorrow please help me."
maan:"why not that you came back to the khurana mansion are we that bad or you dont like us."
geet just froze and looked her back when she saw maan "no maan but its to far and my car will be towed so i dont want that to happen but guys your nice dadima Vicky and gauri your family is nice she did not said maan or Dev because was not home and he is shy so he dont talk and maan she had feeling for him and did not want to show him the power he have over her so he said.
maan:"okay what happen to you car know."
geet:"i dont know anything  about  car."so it just stop."
maan:"i will drop you and my guard will take the car to the garage so lets go."
geet:"i dont want you to be late for your date i believe that is where your going right i dont your girlfriend coming to me complaining."
maan:"no i dont date girls and i was just going to the office to take some files so i can work on home."
maan thought why i am i telling her this and why do i care what she thinks.
geet:"why are you gay  why dont you date girls if you dont like answering its your personal life."
maan:" no i am not  gay but some girls only live money and nothing else so i dont like my heart being broken."
maan:"can we go its freezing out side and its look like its gonna rain so lets leave before it rain."
geet:"yes lets leave."
they were in the car and pink called geet and said she left the house she had to go with adi to a party that his sister had so i had to eave with the key
geet:'what do you mean you have the key and i left main in the car key what do i do."
maan:"what happen to you."
geet:"my roommate had the spare key but she had to go to friend house and i left my key with you guard so i have to wait outside until she cames back."
maan:"okay i will be with you until she cames back when is she coming."
geet:"thanks that wont be necessary i can take care off my self ."
man:"yes you can but i dont want my daughter getting mad and dadima loves you so they will kill me if  anything happens to you so no i will be here."
geet:"thanks for worrying about gauri you are  like her real dad."
maan:"i would have been a dad if she did not abort our baby give the other one to adoption."
maan:"she abort with out telling me because she wanted to be my brother dev wife and the other one she gave her adoption because she did not have the power she wanted when we got married so to hurt me she gave the other one adoption."
i wish i was her real dad so may dadima could be happy and i have the right to have her as my real daughter
geet:"who are you talking about."
maan:"my ex wife sameera kapoor."
geet:"your were married to sameera ."
maan:"yes why did you ask."
geet:"nothing  just curios."
geet:"what happen can you please tel me you will feel good if you open u once in for all."
(maan started telling his story in short i dont want to drag this sameera think so will finish this update.)

"i was 22 year when i finish my university and dadima wanted me to start taking over the family business empire so my last month of the school i met this girl she was funny smart and use to be friend with my young brother Dev and she use to came to our house but i never talk to her because i was not party person Dev was  it was my dadima birthday she was out off the city so we tried surprising her and she was invited with her mom who always wanted to be rich but did not know how to start business so she saw me looking her and she tall her daughter to ask me if she can dance with me and she ask me we dance and  we start dating after few month she start asking me if we can get married and i said i was not ready because i was starting the business and was so busy but her mother convince dadima it was good idea to get us married so we got married she start coming home after 2:00am and i was worried she would lie day after day so i decided its time for her to start working on indian paint so write every thinking in her name but unfortunately she had Aime to get my money and Dev heard her talking to her mom saying she was aborting the baby and will leave him because she loved Dev not me
Dev start playing the game until she was 4 month pregnant and she said she aborted the baby but i didn't know until i hear dadima telling Dev how could i tell him his wife is the villain and want his money not him how  so i had the file in my save so i  start playing the game  alone and i said to her i want her to have baby because the house is empty with out little baby and she said no i will not have baby for because i  dont love you  maan i love your brother and will always love him so i just abort a baby who is your i want to get married to Dev and have his babies not you maan
i told her to get out my house  at this minute it was 3:00 am and she said the house is main not yours maan i i own this mansion khurana contraction and indian paint i told her where is the prove and she said here but the paper she had was what dev gave her and it was some art in envelope and she cried and yell i call the police and u sign the divorce paper and gave her she left and i tried for getting her after  6 month her her mom came and said sameera had my baby she never abort the baby but they give her a adoption and they were leaving India and was going London i tried looking my baby but i never found her so she abort one and she had one and give adoption after that i never date because some women will marry you because you hot and have abs and some will marry you money but i want some one who is independent  who will love me as maan not as maan singh khurana who will take care her family and respect my family as her own and last few weeks i started liking you
you prove me wrong by thinking all women want my money and they are after me because off my look but i promise you mom something that i will look after her daughter
geet was crying how could women do this to her sasural and abort a baby and give the other one adoption
maan:'geet are  you okay ."
geet:"i always dream having my family loving them but i never dream women would do what sameera did to her child why did she not give you the baby.
maan:"i dont know i did not tell this to any one but gauri looks like her she have the same eye and nose i wonder if gauri is my daughter and i mean real daughter."

geet:"i have to tell you something there was bag that the person who left gauri left and they wrote dont open until she understands who is her father or her mother."
i never open i didn't have the tight i was saving her so she can read what its and  didn't give her so why not give her tomorrow as her gift."
maan:"no geet i lost my baby i dont want to lose gauri because her parent throw her but thanks."
geet:"i never thought your were this nice."
maan:" i lost my parent when i was 10 my brother one was so child dadima had to take care off us take care the business so i want someone who is like her or like you."
geet:"like me."
maan:"ha i dont know a lot about you but i start liking you because the way you take care off you mom the way you fight the case the way you took care gauri and your so young so that is something your different about other girls
geet:"thanks  i like you to but i never want to throw some on my self that is not what my mother teach me she use to say if you like some one wait until he start liking you if he dont move on because if you tel him you like him and he dont like you it will be embarrassment."
maan:"would you like to go out tomorrow night."
geet:"i would love to but on one condition you we will go us friends i dont like you start liking me and later regretting because i was not the right person."
maan:"geet if your are not then god knows there is no body else is right for me."
geet:"thanks okay see you tomorrow my friend is coming there is her right thanks."
and maan you will get some one who is better than that women who will love you and care for you love you the way you are."
maan:"thanks i hope its you."
geet:"me why."
maan:"you love my family your traditional girl and you friend who will solve every one problem."
he saw pink and adi and he said
maan:"that is pink she is your friend."
geet:"you know her."
maan:"yes she is work for me and she is friend and adi is friend."
geet:"okay i have to leave see you tomorrow bye."and she left  

precap:their date and them having fun
dadima and Vicky gauri and Dev was waiting maan return and when he did god knows what happen to him.

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Edited by cuyuun13 - 29 December 2010 at 9:40pm

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
great part..
do continue plz.
cant wait for the nxt part.
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
guys do i make them suffer getting back to their life in sameera or do i make them easy and get them married after two or three long update

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