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Dadi was happy today her grandchildren are together maan and gauri was sitting waiting geet to come out of her mom room but she did not dadi told them she is coming us daughter in law tonight because she didn't do any thing before as grand mother in law
Geet mom was fine now she was discharge and she was dressing her daughter today maan was send off some where Annie was decorating her bhai and her sister some how she started calling sister to geet not bhabi so Vicky and Dev who use to be quite started being crazy messing thinks gauri saw them and she said okay what are you doing v and chachu
Vicky' beta we miss troubling her Annie so wee want to do something to make her angry'
Gauri' v you are her twin you should help her not trouble her I will tell papa this;
Dev' beta if you tell papa it will not be fun'
Gauri' that's why I am telling her chachu'
Dev' gauri why do you call me chachu and not Vicky'
Vicky; Dev you did not ask her not to call you'
Dev' I am that old lets be friend I will help you when you need help so lets make a dare'
Gauri' chachu you don't want to do that with me'
Vicky' right you don't want to do that'
Dev' tonight before geet goes to her room one off us has to go there to make maan angry'
Vicky and gauri said' it will be you we don't want maan being angry'
Dev' guys that is not fair Vicky I will give you what ever you want but you have to do it'
Vicky' no you don't dare me to do that and I will ask you something you can't do dev think about it'
Dev' dare do it I will do any thing you say'
Vicky' Dev think about I will not make it easy for you'
Gauri' he will do it but I promise Dev chachu the promise you just did will not be easy'
Annie finishes every thing Vicky ask her help
Annie' Vicky your weird what the hell do you want to wear'
Vicky' Annie will you help me or not'
Annie' what do you need'
Vicky' a sari'
Annie was drinking water
Annie' what the hell do you just said' a sari for what'
Vicky' to make maan think I am geet'
Annie' you need to pay me for wearing my sari'
Vicky' okay I promise to pay you'
It was night dadi did the arty and welcome geet and said Annie take her to her room geet was taken to her room but not so soon
Annie' di I have make maan pay what he did to me so you have to wait here I will be back Annie make Vicky sit and he was sitting like bride Vicky was shaking like any thing and then Annie told him if he mess think she will make his like hell'
Vicky' okay leave before he comes'
Geet was waiting Annie room
Maan came in and he was smiling Annie Dev gauri and dadi was watching them geet came and saw and said.
Geet' oh you didn't just do that to the great maan Singh khurana'
Dadi' geet what are you doing here and who is there?
Dev' your grandson who else;
Gauri' oh god save my v'
Annie' who is this v'
Dev' its long story lets watch'
Maan' geet my life come worth living when I met you I thought the first day you are the like other girls but when you save gauri I came to know you are like every other family oriented girl and that day I felt in love with you I thought love was pain but its not please don't ever try leaving me we will have bad days and good days but our love will be stronger every day honey I want to give you a gift that from today you will be first and last women I will ever love'
Gauri and dadi and Annie was jealous
Geet saw them and said hello I am here he is talking to Vicky so don't get jealous'
Dadi' lets watch'
Maan' geet if you ever feel I hide something from you please ask me before starting to get mad because if you are mad at me I will rather kill my self then watch you get mad'
Vicky was crying
Because his brother found his love and today he prove Vicky wrong '
Maan was coming closer and he saw the person was shaking'
He unveil him and he was shocked
Maan' Vicky you will be dead tonight'
Vicky' had tears and said if I die today I know my family is happy and I am happy because you find some one who loves you the way you love him'
Geet came in and said wow what a family you cry because maan fell in love why'
Dadi' no because he found someone who loves him better then us so please take care off each other and good night'
Before that Annie said we need money me my darling gauri
Maan' how much'
Gauri' 10 lack '
Annie' wows gauri that will do'
Maan' okay dev give them'
Geet came in and waited maan when maan came in he locked the door and came to geet Maan and geet was looking each other and hug and said I love you to each other they sit on the window talked and maan said lets go to sleep
When they came to bed he started kissing her and she kiss him back and the suhaag raat happen they became one and geet was sleeping on maan chest and he was stroking her hair they slept'
Precap; what will Dev do about the promise
What will Vicky and gauri do
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